ব্লিচ্‌ অ্যানিমে Make your own zanpakuto!

jadzter18 posted on Jan 01, 2009 at 06:06PM
enhance your imagination!
If you were a shinigami what will your zanpakuto's name and abilities be?

share your thoughts and ideas of your ideal zanpakuto!!!

(note:please follow this format so that there will be a uniform ideas, and so that people would read this topic more interesting and more easy to read, thank you)

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[zanpakuto's name/shikai name]
[release command]
[bankai name] - optional
=description - optional

[shikai abilities] - limited only (3)
=description

[bankai abilities] - limited only (3)
=desciption - optional


=(then comments on your zanpakuto)


that's all we want to know!
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বছরখানেক আগে monkeymomo3434 said…
here's one of my zanpakuto that ive thought of

NAME: Omona kōgeki (primary assault)
release:Junbi o (be ready)
apperence: at first it is just a regular katana with a black and gray hilt with a small blade coming out the bottom but as his skillz progress the smaller sword becomes its own sword and both swords gain more of a curve at the tip
BANKAI:Kyūkyoku no kōgeki (ultimate assault)
BANKAI apperance and transformation: firstly the small blade disconnects and glows white while spinning in the air (or if the regular sword just skip the first part) while throwing the other sword up out of sight then the blade part of the originally smaller sword becomes a circle blade that connects to the hilt which has now become a long staff like a spears.pointing it outward the end of the staff part has a chain come out wrapping around his left arm and borrowing into the back of his left shoulder
then the other sword crashes down prefectly behind him which has now transformed into a giant black sword with 3 spike like objects coming out of its back barely reaching behind him he grabs the handle and another chain wraps around his right arm and borrows into the back of his right shoulder
shikai abilites: super connection: (only useable in double swords) by connecting the 2 hilts together the connected sword can be thrown like a boomerang
bankai abilities:1.shrapnel:the swords spikes disappear into the sword and make it glow white then by slashing the sword will fire the the 3 spikes the will regenerate using reitsu but takes about 2 min to recharge/swinging the blade harder increases strength of spikes i call it heavy shrapnel
2.execution using the staff and getting the ring blade across the targets neck then by grabbing the unravled chain from his arm and pulling towards him reitsu stored in the inside of the blade makes it quickly and painlessly decapitate the target
3.conceal this is used to hide the bankai and its waepons tithout releasing it. the weapon and the chains seal themselves within the spots were the chains first burrowed in

zanpaktos weilder 2nd in command of his platoon and rouge squad shinigami AND MAIN character to my zanpaktous

I HOPE YOU HAVE ENJOYED 1 of 4
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বছরখানেক আগে monkeymomo3434 said…
this next one im only showing andtyping shortly as it is a complete rip off of kankuro from naruto except for 2 reasons 1 has swords 2 special attack using the 4 golden swords and stabbing into the oppenent wich will not hurt thembut will bind them thenthe puppet flies forward anthrough the target grabbing fromthere heart area all of there life energy which is still connected to them by a small line of it until the crow clamps down a obliteraties it killing them instantaneously or by useing the hidden sword of hell cutting themdownin a slash banishing there soul to eternity in neither heven hell or purgatory
the bankai is just bringing out the black ant puppet
name ningyo masuta (roughly (puppet master)
realese cut the threads of reality
user captain of the rouge shinigami squad
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বছরখানেক আগে chase645 said…
hey hey im new to this but i have a pretty vivid imagination so ill be doing one k =)

zanpakuto's name/shikai name: hari jigen (crystal diminsion)
realease comand: shatter
bankai name: burokun omiode no hari jigen (broken memories in the crystal diminsion)
zanpakuto desciption: the apperence is that of a normal zanpakuto. the hilt has no specific pattern but is more rectangular than square, the handle is a little longer than normal and the same goes for the blade.

shikai abilities:
CONTROL: the simplist yet most dangerouse ability to use if u listen to the command its says shatters the meaning is obvious the blade shatters a layer of metal why a layer? simple because a japanese blade is folded about 7 times to insure sturdyness needless to say the more layers he sheds the weaker the blad on the sword will be but the more attack power he'll have.expecaily sense that brings us to the second ability FORM: which intales making shapes with the shattered crystals such has sheilds or other things which strenth equals the effort put it to makeing it.and last but not least the signature attack of the zanpakuto FANG ROAD: created by savage spiritual pressure, the intent to kill and of coure the shattered crystals this attack produces a dragon and carves through any and everything in its path even allies which is why this shinigam iusualy fights alone.

bankai abilites: when bankai is initiated the user and those around him are cut from the rest of the world and taken to the crystal dimiinsion. the floor is crystalized and the wall of the diminsion are stain glass windows showing the memories of the users past.the air is filled with crystalized dust and needless to say his offensive and defensive capabilities are highined tramendously.sense his abilities are highiened the skills from his shikai are normaly used in bankai has well giving him 1 finishing attack.
DISINEGRATION: sense it is his zanpakuto he is immune to this effect however anyone else friend or foe in the diminsion is not every crystal in the diminsion the crytalized dust in the air, the crystalized floor, and even the walls emplode litteraly cuting everything inside to nothing.

my thoughts pretty cool right =) tell me wat u think its simple but effective. If u like it i could do another i have plenty in this head of mine XD
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বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
Suugaku ('Mathematics')

Release Command: Show your workings (Goshujin kyouran wa-kingu)

Bankai: Junsei Suugaku ('Pure Mathematics')

Sealed Form: This Zanpakuto resembles a normal katana, but is slightly longer. The tsuba is much more curved than a normal katana, with black and white patchings. The guard is in the shape of a isoceles triangle and is black. The blade is chrome silver.

Shikai abilities:

Sankakuhou ('Trigonometry'): This ability can be used in different ways, depending on which Command is uttered. Each of the Commands is related to the general affects of trigonometry, but using these Commands uses up a large amount of spirit energy and each have long cooldown times. Each Command involves the creation and manipulation of lines. The different Commands are:

Yogen ('Cosine'): Where two lines meet, an explosion an explosion will occur. The explosion is instantaneous and cannot be blocked, but can be avoided by understanding where the lines where meet.

Seigen ('Sine') Two lines deviate from one point and surround the opponent, until they are completely trapped. Once the two lines meet once more, walls of reishi-blocking material automatically extend upwards, sealing the opponent away. The seal lasts for as long as ten to fifteen minutes for someone who has high spirit energy.

Seisetsu ('Tangent') The wielder creates triangle-shaped protrusions of reishi. These triangles drop over the opponent and stick to them. Users with high spirit energy can break these protrusions somewhat easily, otherwise they last for about ten minutes. During this ten minutes, the protrusions zap the opponent with highly compressed energy.

Yosetsu ('Cotangent'): The wielder creates triangle-shaped reishi bombs, that move along a designated line, that the wielder creates during the creation of the triangles. The triangles move along this line at an incredible speed (about 80 m/s) and explode on contact.

Daisuushiki ('Algebraic expression') Creates reishi blasts that correspond to an algebraic expression: for example, two balls of reishi will equate to one larger blast and this could be the same for three, or four, reishi balls. The speed of these reishi balls is also dependent on an algebraic expression: for example, maximum speed is 600 m/s and minimum speed is 0.5 m/s. To calculate the speed of the ball, the it depends on the current wind-speed and the amount of friction created, while rushing through air. The explosive power depends on the purity of the reishi - which can be created at a certain level of purity (purity of reishi requires a large spirit energy of the wielder and a good level of control over reishi manipulation). Algebraic expression determines that purity of reishi (10-1000 units per square meter), equates to an explosive power (2.5 m radius - 0.75 km radius).

Shikai Form: This has changed from a usual katana, into a nodachi, that has two blades exending from the guard, which has become a right-angle triangle, rather than an isoceles. Each blade is 2 centimeters thick, 5 centimeters from top to bottom and extends about 1.05 meters from the guard. The tsuba is black and grey, measuring about 20 centimeters, curving more drastically than in Sealed Form. One blade is black and the other is silver. Two black chains dangle from the end of the tsuba.

Bankai abilities:

Taisuuse ('Logarithms'): This ability is specifically unique. The idea of this ability follows one specific logarithmic rule: Logarithmic Rule 1: Strength (log a) = Weight (log b) + Power (log c). The same goes for speed, reiatsu and swordsmanship. This can multiply the end result of the equation (from 1.5 x to 10 x). This occurs randomly during Bankai (at the least: 10 seconds, at the most: 1 minute and thirty seconds). Also, using these logarithms, the wielder can determine the opponent's weak point, while in a released state (Shikai, Bankai or Resurreccion). This uses another rule of logarithms: Log a (n [u]) = nLog a (u). Whatever the Zanpakuto itself determines, is the end result by the use of these logarithms (in other words, if the Zanpakuto communicates with the wielder, and rules that their weak point is a certain weak point, then that is the end result of the ability's ableness to find that weak point). The last part of this ability involves firing a pure beam of reishi at the opponent; instead of doing damage, this has the same effect as Seele Schneider, by loosening spirit bonds, except, unlike Seele Schneider, this is mass-effect and acts in conjunction with other abilities.

Jusshin ('Centre of gravity'): The wielder's Zanpakuto acts in the same way as a black hole, using a huge amount of force to draw objects in. The Zanpakuto drags objects and people in, then, when they reached the area (10 m/sq around the opponent), the opponent's gravititional force is manipulated (anywhere from 1.5 x Earth's gravity to 5x Earth's gravity, or less than Earth's gravity). This ability lasts for 1 minute and requires 10 minutes cooldown, until it can be used again.

Bankai special ability: Bankai also allows the use of the two abilities available in Shikai. Also, the user can manipulate reishi to a much greater extent, possibly even as much as a Quincy.

Bankai Form: The blades have changed. Instead of two blades of equal size, there are now three blades; the middle blade is the longest, reaching 1.12 meters long, while the other two are just over 0.95 meters long. The tsuba is the same as in Shikai, with the same amount of curving and the same colours, but white instead of grey. From the end of the tsuba, three short, black chains dangle. The two blades on the side are black, while the one in the middle is white.
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বছরখানেক আগে KurisuJinsoku said…
Zanpakuto's shikai name: Ryū no ikari

Release command: Fear thee

Shikai appearance: The hilt; It has a dragon's set of wings as a hand guard, with
the dragon's head above that with the blade coming from the hwak's maouth. The
blade; it curves slightly towards the weider, has many notches on the back
designed for cause more damage when the target has been impaled and the
wielder is taking the sqord out. It's colour is a deep red.

Shikai ability 1: Ryū no odori; Coats the wielder and blade in flames. Each attack
has a small chance of sending forth a wave of fire at the enemy, the waves of fire
cannot be blocked or defended against. Wielder get faster for a short period of
time.

Shikai ability 2: Bunkatsu ten; allows wielder to control weather for a period of
time. Depending on what part of the weather the wielder chooses to control
depends on the effects E.g. If the wielder were to control the winds, the wielder
would be able to summon on them to enhance his speed and perception.

Shikai ability 3: Batoru gekido; Makes the user become overwhelmed with the rage
of a dragon. This is a very risky move which should only be used in dire situations because the wielder will not be able to contro who they see as friend and foe. The
wielder will attack like a savage beast whilst maintaining the skill that they
possess.

Bankai name: Ryū no ikari suitai

Bankai appearance: The blade hasn't much. The only part that has changed is the
length and weight. As well as the hilt. It now has a eastern dragons style body
trailing around it and the top half of the dragon hanging off the side holding a
sapphire jewel.

Bankai ability 1: Hi o kurenjingu; Sends a fire wave at the enemy, engulfing the
entire battle field in an intense fire that slowly drains the spirit energy out of the
opponent until they are unconciouss, transfering part of the spirit energy to the wielder. Wielder is completely immune to the fire.

Bankai ability 2: Fukuzatsuna ori burēdo; this technique allows the wieder to gain
immense speed and a strength boost into their swings, allowing for easier
opening to strike at the target and allows the wieder to make the opponent
think that they are striking from a different position than they are.

Bankai ability 3: Doragonzu no kainyū; Calls upon the zanpakuto's true form to
manifest itself infornt of the wielder so they can fight along side each other.;
When they are fighting along side each other, the wielder and the zanpakuto are
able to take down any enemy that stands in their way by combining their physical
forms. They maintain seperate minds so they can convey strategic information.
This is very costly on the wielder as it slowly draons away the spirit energy within
them until the wielder can no longer function and is rendered unconcios.

I came up with this within an hour so if there is anything that could be improved
then please tell me. This blade is wielded by me. I decided to give it a dragon type
theme because I have been reading about them and I have been transfixed on them for the passed few days now. Sorry for any spelling mistakes that I have made.
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বছরখানেক আগে Bleach0123 said…
Sealed Form: A normal wakizashi
Shikai: Osoku
Release Command: Reset, Osoku!

Ability #1: Osoi
Osoi makes anything that Osoku's blade points at slower. It can slow anything's movements infinitely, but cannot make the target completely stop moving. 

Ability #2: Supīdo
Supīdo is an ability that is mainly used on allies. Supīdo speeds up the target's speed when Osoku's blade points at it/him/her/them. It can even work on attacks or the wielder. It can speed up any objects power until the targets speed is fast enough to distort the nearby space. That is the only limit this ability has.

Bankai: Kakudai
Form: turns into a regular katana.

Retains all abilities listed already

Ability #3: Ōkina garasu
Ōkina garasu creates a transparent square screen that anything can pass through as long as it has the wielder's consent and that it can fit through it. But moving through it, the object/person/attack/etc will be instantly magnified at a sized desired by the wielder. If a being goes thought it, then everything they have will be magnified. Speed, weakness, physical strength, IQ, EQ, Reiatsu, size, instincts and even emotions. The screen's size depends on the wielder. However, the wielder can set a filter to filter out what to magnify and what not to.


Like it? ^^ I thought of it in less than 5 mins so it might need more work!
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বছরখানেক আগে MasterAce22 said…
Here ya go, this is my first blade in a long time. Hope you enjoy!

 Zanpakuto name: Mécanique Chaos (Mechanical Mayhem)
Release Command: Construct 
Zanpakuto appearance: Unreleased it is a normal sized wrench, when the command is said it extends until it is 4 feet long.    


Zanpakuto abilities: 


Hyper-Explosion Fused Mini Bots: The wrench will start to glow very brightly, as this is happening spider like bots the size of a mouse will crawl out of the wrench. In total there are 10 of these bots per-use. These bots will charge at the enemy at kido speed, the spiders are able to tell whats going on (eg: someone trying to step on it) which gives them the chance to move, or wielder can control the actions of the spiders. If the bots latch onto the enemy they will explode with the force of a hand grenade after one second of being latched on.  These bots can be destroyed relatively easily by kido spells or zanpakuto strikes but once they latch on they cannot be destroyed. After all the bots are destroyed the ability goes on a 30 second cool down.


Extraordinarily Fast-Healing Medic Bots: The wrench will do the same thing as the first ability but instead of charging the foe the bots climb onto the wielder and latch onto wounds the the wielder has received, or the wielder can direct where the spiders to go. When latched the bots will start making a humming noise and after 2 seconds minor wounds will be healed (eg: Cuts, Bruises, Broken Bones ect.) major wounds like limb loss will not be healed though. Same as the first ability if latched on the cannot be destroyed. When the bots finish they will fall apart and the ability will go on a minute cool down. 


Fantastic Electrically Charged Mine Bots: The same thing will happen with the wrench as the abilities above but instead of 10 bots there are 50. These bots will spread out to random places on the battlefield, or the wielder can control where the bots go or how many are together. When the bots find a spot they burrow into the ground without leaving any sign at where they are. While underground the bots form a shield around themselves which prevents them from being destroyed by the opponent. If the opponent steps on an area that a bot burrowed in the will explode with an electrically charged blast, leaving 2nd and 3rd degree burns. The bots are able to sense the body heat of an opponent above them so they don't randomly blow up. These bots won’t blow up if the wielder steps on the area. The bots can be destroyed before they burrow as easily as the other bots are destroyed. When all the bots are gone the ability is put on a 2 minutes timer.


Bankai Name: Maître de Chaos Mécanique Complète (Master of Complete Mechanical Mayhem)

Bankai appearance: The  wielders forearms becomes encased in brass colored, steampunk themed gauntlets. The wrench extends to be 6 feet long and along its body it becomes very sharp.


Bankai Abilities: 


A- Series BW13 Offensive Golem: The wielders right gauntlet falls apart, the parts from the gauntlet start to expand, multiply, and combine until 5 seconds later a 12 foot golems stands next to the wielder. The golem’s right arm is a giant drill and it’s left arm is a sword. The golem’s speed and strength are greater than the wielders (25% higher) but it is vulnerable to retaliation from the foe (This particular golem will, for the majority of the time, focus on offense. The only defense that it does it blocking attacks) Although the golem can absorb any hado 70 and below . The golem will attack the target at its own will but it will always follow the wielder's orders if it is given one. The golem can be killed and it is no harder to kill this golem than it is to kill a regular shinigami. If killed the wielder regains his right gauntlet and this ability goes on a 2 minute timer.

G-Series 9SD5 Defensive Golem: The wielders left gauntlets does the same as the right one does in the first ability. When it finishes the golem standing next to the wielder has a large bulky body, same height as the other golem, with shield like formations on the top of its forearms that extend to its shoulders. The golem is much slower and much weaker than the wielder but its defensive capabilities are so large that it is practically un kill able. The golem's defensive capabilities are the same whether it uses the shield or not and it is able to absorb any kido 90 and below. The golem will attack but if it hits the damage of it would only cause minor to moderate damage. The golem will act on its own free will and follow orders from the wielder but its own primary goal will be to protect the wielder. If killed the wielder regains his left gauntlet and the ability goes on a 2 minutes timer.

Series GV52 Banned Golem Battlesuit:: The wielder’s wrench shatters into pieces, the pieces then start to expand, multiply, and combine until 10 seconds later a golem battle suit is there. The golem battle suit is 8 feet tall and has a long and sleek body with a relatively small head, it is also wielding 2 very long katanas. Only the wielder may enter the battlesuit, when he does the wielders speed and strength are doubled for the entire time he is in the battle suit. To get the wielder out the opponent has to destroy the battlesuit, which is like killing a person, the metal on the battle suit gives the wielder no defensive buffs. When destroyed the battle suit will revert back into a wrench and the ability goes on a 10 minute timer.

Below image is the battlesuit (All credit to the original artist)
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 Here ya go, this is my first blade in a long time. Hope আপনি enjoy!  Zanpakuto name: Mécanique Ch
বছরখানেক আগে whiteflame55 said…
Bleach0123 (Osoku) –

Shikai:

1) From the outset, this ability is overpowered. Essentially, it’s game over the moment your blade is pointed at an opponent. That opponent can move, you say, but what’s to prevent you from having them move incredibly slowly, to the point at which they cannot respond to anything? Even Byakuya’s Bankai, one of the few abilities that might manage against this, requires motions in order to control it. The only fault with this ability is that you need to point the blade at them, so if they are a lot faster to start, that can be difficult. Nonetheless, even that kind of opponent would be defeated in an instant if they passed in front of the blade.

2) This one’s problematic as well. Essentially you’re saying that you can speed up any attack or ally to the point at which no one could possibly match them. Unless that has adverse effects on the attack or ally on which its being used, you’ve essentially made it impossible for opponents to dodge here as well, and this time, there’s no downside that I can see. Especially if the wielder can speed himself up, which you seem to be saying. You could even combine this with the previous ability, and simply move your blade so fast that it’s sure to be pointed at them.

Bankai:

1) What’s the size of the screen? This sounds like, alternately, an ultimate defense and offense. You could simply disallow anything to pass through it, and nothing would. Or you could allow some things to pass through it, but reduce them down to a state that’s so weak and slow that they cause you no harm. At the same time, you could magnify anything you send to absurd levels, changing a low level kido into something tremendous, incredibly powerful, deadly and unavoidable. Also, as I’m looking at this, I’m really wondering about the ability to magnify people going through it. Does this essentially mean that any melee opponent (all of whom would pretty much be forced to attack through it at some point) can be enhanced or reduced in every stat as much as the wielder wishes? Does this mean that the wielder can simply pass through it and magnify all of their stats to the point at which they are basically invincible?

Overall, I just think this isn’t well defined enough to be reasonable. I know you made this in 5 minutes, but the complete lack of restrictions and the ease of activating these abilities makes them all absurdly powerful.
বছরখানেক আগে whiteflame55 said…
MasterAce22 (Mechanical Mayhem) –

Shikai:

1) Can the wielder control the actions of these spiders beyond simply sending them to attack the opponent? Do the spiders themselves have any ability to perceive what’s around them and respond?

2) Does the wielder direct where the bots go, or do they automatically go to the site of various wounds?

3) Can the bots be destroyed easily once they are underground? Will anything touching the area above the bots cause them to explode, or do they have to sense the body heat of an opponent above them? Can the wielder control where the bots bury and how many bury themselves together or apart?

Bankai:

1) How well does the golem do against kido? Also, does the golem act only with orders, or can it act on its own?

2) How large is this golem? How large is the shield? Does it have the same defensive potential whether it defends with the shield or not? How capable is it in dealing with kido? How is it controlled?

3) Makes sense.

Fun blade, I like the steampunk style.
বছরখানেক আগে Bleach0123 said…
cool
@whiteflame55
Thnx for reviewing my zanpaktou! But when I said to to activate the two Shikai abilities, you must point the blade at the target right? I meant it can only slow down one object similar to Espada 7's Amor. One point controls one limb. Get it now? And I never thought of combine abilities 2 and 1 together...so thanks you for tellIng me.
For the 3rd ability, no they will not be magnified to a point they will be invincible, because their weakness will also be magnified. And it's not used for defense, only to magnify. It cannot reduce anything. The third ability only works when my zanpaktou is released. Anything magnified will revert to its former state if I seal my sword. If it is hit by an attack and I don't allow it, the screen will simply shatter and I will have to create another one. I am also limited to making only one at a time regardless of the screen's size
বছরখানেক আগে Etrios said…
I've always wanted to share my ideal Zanpakuto! I hope you enjoy it;(by the way, I will describe the movements needed in the ways to slash the sword.)

Zanpakuto name: Getsuryu (moon dragon)
Release command: (Raise sword up, chains and cotton wrap around arms, shout;) Destroy to protect, Getsuryu (split sword in two)!
Bankai name: Fragnum Fatis (latin for Broken Destiny)
Description: A strange double-sided katana with two blades facing opposite ways, yet fused together to form a sort of curved broadsword; one side is a black damascus blade with red interlacing it, like heat from the dark recesses of the Abyss, and another side is made of white damascus with smokey gray interlacing it, like the surface of the Moon. Even the Tsuba, handle and pommel seem two seperate entities fused into one; on the outside of the tsuba, there is an aged metal-like color of black, and a dragon's jaw and head with dark ruby eyes seeming to breath the steady fire that is the black blade, and on the inside there seems to be a crescent moon that also seems to breath it's coresponding blade. The handle is made of strong pure white cotton wrap which seems to be tied off and waving extra at the pommel, like a scarf, while wrapped the opposite direction is a black chain which also seems to be tied off and trailing from the pommel except into a brutal spike. The pommel is a ring which is on one half a dragon and on the other a crescent moon. The sword can split into two seperate katanas, during which time the 'tails' of the two zanpakuto wrap around the wielders arms, the spike stabbing itself into the wielders shoulderblade, and the wrap tying itself off into a shoulder scarf.

Shikai abilities - limited only (3)
1.) Tsukiyomi ikari (Tsukiyomi's Wrath)- (Shout spell and slash in an arc) The raw power of the Japanese God of The Moon focused in a thin circular arc of white energy, a small attack like as thin as the width of your thumb, but sharp enough to cut through a zanpakuto with enough hits. Can also be used as a rapid-fire attack by just saying the attack once. Doesn't take much riatsu to use, but can cost more when ones concentration is dull.

2.) Doragonherufaia (Dragon's Hellfire)- (first stab sword into ground, charge energy for 4 minutes, draw sword, swing twice, once across then outward, raise high, shout spell. Once firey environment is active, can use the flames as walls or projectile attacks in verious forms.) Once released it encloses the whole landscape from a 5-mile radius with a massive firey inferno with fire the size of mountains, and the flame is back as a starless night lined with red. The inferno is hot enough to daunt the most elite Soul Reaper, but not quite hot enough to melt rock, only to superheat it. Also has an arc shape when fired. Can only be performed once per day, for it depletes alot of riatsu.

3.) Tamashī wa hōyō (Soul Embrace)- (slash swords down to form T-shape with body, put sword tips into eachother untill both blades are pierced) The act of combining the two Zanpakuto into one, creating a large explosion of black and white energy, with the force of an A-Bomb, helping to create the Bankai of Getsuryu. The only to avoid any of these attacks is to avoid them or get out of the explosion radius, which in the case of Soul Embrace, is about a 6-mile radius. Can only be used once until the wielder returns to a normal state, to recover his energy.

Description: Getsuryu splits into the two katanas explained earlier, but they end up transforming into two seperate evolved forms;
Mikadzuki- A large curvy thick scimitar, seeming to look like it was made from a metal version of Moonstone, with a crescent moon-like guard (precisely 1 1/2 in. thick spaning to about 52in. in length)
And Dākudoragon- A large thick cutlass-like buster sword seeming to look like it was made from a metal version of Obsidion, about 1 1/2 in. thick and spanning to 52in. in length, about 1 1/2 ft. wide at the top, with a brutal-knuckles-style guard.

Bankai abilities: limited only (3)
1.) Yamiyo (Moonless Night)- (slash downwards and exclaime spell.) Black energy of pure shadows starts to radiate from Dākudoragon. When fired, the whole atmosphere starts to part about 5-miles apart, and unleashes a slash of pitch-black energy, able to disintegrate most anything to dust. Given the fact that is a vertical slash attack, it can be avoided, and in doing the attack, there is a cooldown of precisely 5 minutes.

2.) Doragonsouru (Dragon Soul)-(take swords in two hands, and spear upwards in a strong thrust. If fired, slash according to line of fire as you shout the spell) a blazing inferno of blue fire, able to burn through stone, metal, soul, and flesh, a flame arc if fired, but an explosion that can be placed in any area the sword points to, if unfocused. Has a cooldown of 6min. if the host is of rational mind, for if this attack is used two frequently or too loosly, he will end up encasing himself and the enemy in The Final Attack.

3.) Tsukihi (Moon Fire)- (encase host in white fire, the encasing becoming cotton-like wrap, hair grows, becoming long and black with white strands in a 50 ratio, bit both are mixed. If focused, after transformation, point sword at enemy, shout his name, then the spell. If unfocused, shout spell.)The Final Attack, capable of exploding with an endless inferno of white fire, additionaly capable of spreading and thus superheating the whole surface of the world, but when set upon a cirtain target, will burn the enemy relentlessly, enen burning the soul of the enemy with the same intensity as white fire, not stopping untill the enemy is burned completely out of exsistance, burning every single mollecule and atom of the enemy until he/she is unable to return to this or any existance, draining the activator of such a flame to death, not being able to respon within Soul Society for 10 years. This attack can only be commited once in a hosts lifetime. Can be shortcutten in casting by using Dragon Soul in a circle around them and the enemy, and once eniciated, it cannot be stopped until the enemy and the caster are dead.

Desciption: A two-sided buster-sword spanning a whopping 62in. in length and a huge 3ft. in width, along with a large 3in. in thickness. The tsuba also spanning the blade in a design of the Dragon and Moon becoming one, interlacing eachother in a twisty dance. The wielder also covered in armor of the same nature. Black and white energy also surrounds the wielder and a large spiritual pressure, approximatly 3x that of Ichigo when in Vasto Lorde form,surrounds the environment around the wielder and his opponent.


This Zanpakuto has been on my mind for weeks, haunting my dreams, actually just making one dream repeat over and over; a dream where I raise the sword and shoot into the sky, the stars forming into the shape of a dragons underbelly, then I use my version of Getsugatensho, and when my view zooms out, it makes the very same symbol that my necklace has. Anyway, what do you guys think?
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বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
Zanpakuto-Ten howaitotoigā (Heavens White Tiger)
Release Command-Shine Ten howaitotoigā
Description- a blade that shines like the sun and is white as snow with a golden handle and a black hilt. The tip of the blade is shaped like a tiger's head and it is sharp as 50 tensa zangetsu.

Bankai- Ten howaitotoigā no hantei (Judgement of the Heavens White Tiger)
Description- a bankai that has four swords incircling the soulreaper. Each blade is still white but each one has a different tip and at least 2000 times sharper than it's shikai form. One tip is a dragon; then a hawk; followed by a shark and the tiger is still one of them. It is the strongest bankai nothing can surpass the speed and power not even the head captains zanpakuto can beat it.

Shikai abilities- Ten no sutoraiki (heavens strike) it can cut anything in half
Shiro Tigera Tenshō ( White Tiger Tensho) much stronger than getsuga tenshō
Tenko no jishin (Heavens Tiger Quake) by just stabbing it in the ground it can send a blinding light along with an earthquake.

Bankai abilities- Howaitotorunēdo (White Tornado) nulifies the opponent's weapon useless for 48 hours
Gōrudendoragon no sutoraiki (Strike of the golden dragon) An attack that goes straight to the organs and cuts them in the direction of the attack
Seishin dōbutsu no burasuto (Blast of the spirit animals) It draws the power from all for swords and unleashes them in one cannot miss attack. You can run but once you are locked on as a target it will hunt you down till you are completely vaporized.

Comment- try I you dare but you will die because in bankai form the four swords block any and every attack aimed at it's soul reaper. So challenge it if you want to die.
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বছরখানেক আগে Etrios said…
angelic
A large amount of swords and power is nothing if you do not see everything behind it. Without that, all you'll have is the delusion of invincability, only to find your weaknesses the hard way.
বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
Etrios (Getsuryu)

An interesting idea for a blade, but using the same attack that Ichigo used with his Zanpakuto is technically copying and I find that kind of lame, no offense. In order to make a Zanpakuto completely your own, you should create all of your own attacks.

Shikai abilities:

1. Getsuga Tensho. A. You should create an attack that is similar, but has different properties. How fast would this move? How much reiatsu can be poured into an attack? Is there a cooldown, if so, how long is the cooldown?

2. Doragon Herufaia. Again, this one, you say, is similar to Yamamoto's Shikai release... You really need to define some attributes of this ability that differentiate from Yamamoto's Shikai. For instance, how hot can it burn? Can it be breathed out like a dragon? Does it have a high spirit energy consumption? You need to add clarifying features, like those, that actually list what the ability does, rather than just a sentence describing it.

3. I'm not really sure what this does, besides 'helping to create Getsuryu's Bankai'... Maybe you could elaborate, because that piece of information is quite inconclusive.

Bankai abilities:

1. Yamiyo. Explain how this is like Mugetsu/Final Getsuga Tensho. Again, I feel as though you should make it differently, rather than essentially copying ideas from Kubo-san.

2. Doragonsouru. Again, one sentence really doesn't describe what people want to know. You should add more to this attack, like how it looks, how hot it would burn, how fast it could do so, and how the attack is generally used. Otherwise, no-one will understand your blade.

3. Tsukihi. By the sounds of it, this attack is pretty overpowered... It is interesting, but needs a bit more work. I would suggest adding ways that it can be avoided.

Comments: Overall, an interesting idea. I think you really need to create your own abilities, rather than using ones that already feature on Bleach. I would also suggest maybe catering more to the idea of a moon dragon. I realise this is your essential blade and you may not want to work on it, so bear in mind that this is just a review and you don't have to take it seriously, or respond, to me.
বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
@Captain-Ben54. Your blade is absurdly overpowered, so it seems obvious that no-one would be able to beat it, using a normal Zanpakuto. However, I have entertained several ideas for overpowered Zanpakutous that would wipe yours from existence. So, I say to you the same thing you said in your post, challenge me if you want to die. XD

বছরখানেক আগে Etrios said…
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@blackpanther. Thank you for your input, and there's no harm done. Thank you for comfirming my suspicions, I suspected this would happen, now I shall edit my sword, and post the finalised version in but a few minutes after this one.
বছরখানেক আগে wantadog said…
@Captain-Ben54 two words for you. Ashisogi Jizo.

You can block attacks, but not the poison.
বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
@Etrios. Your welcome, dude. I've seen so many blades posted on this forum... Many of which have little work actually put into them, but yours had the work, it just needs a bit of extra work and it will be fine. I'm glad that people still have the care to keep working on their blades and making them better. I look forward to seeing a revised version. XD

@Wantadog. Heh, a good point. Oh, and Kamishini No Yari would also be useful against his overpowered piece of junk. Lol.
বছরখানেক আগে Etrios said…
I have edited it! (I will describe the movements needed in the ways to slash the sword.)

Zanpakuto name: Getsuryu (moon dragon)
Release command: (Raise sword up, chains and cotton wrap around arms, shout;) Destroy to protect, Getsuryu (split sword in two)!
Bankai name: Fragnum Fatis (latin for Broken Destiny)
Description: A strange double-sided katana with two blades facing opposite ways, yet fused together to form a sort of curved broadsword; one side is a black damascus blade with red interlacing it, like heat from the dark recesses of the Abyss, and another side is made of white damascus with smokey gray interlacing it, like the surface of the Moon. Even the Tsuba, handle and pommel seem two seperate entities fused into one; on the outside of the tsuba, there is an aged metal-like color of black, and a dragon's jaw and head with dark ruby eyes seeming to breath the steady fire that is the black blade, and on the inside there seems to be a crescent moon that also seems to breath it's coresponding blade. The handle is made of strong pure white cotton wrap which seems to be tied off and waving extra at the pommel, like a scarf, while wrapped the opposite direction is a black chain which also seems to be tied off and trailing from the pommel except into a brutal spike. The pommel is a ring which is on one half a dragon and on the other a crescent moon. The sword can split into two seperate katanas, during which time the 'tails' of the two zanpakuto wrap around the wielders arms, the spike stabbing itself into the wielders shoulderblade, and the wrap tying itself off into a shoulder scarf.

Shikai abilities - limited only (3)
1.) Tsukiyomi ikari (Tsukiyomi's Wrath)- (Shout spell and slash in an arc) The raw power of the Japanese God of The Moon focused in a thin circular arc of white energy, a small attack like as thin as the width of your thumb, but sharp enough to cut through a zanpakuto with enough hits. Can also be used as a rapid-fire attack by just saying the attack once. Doesn't take much riatsu to use, but can cost more when ones concentration is dull.

2.) Doragonherufaia (Dragon's Hellfire)- (first stab sword into ground, charge energy for 4 minutes, draw sword, swing twice, once across then outward, raise high, shout spell. Once firey environment is active, can use the flames as walls or projectile attacks in verious forms.) Once released it encloses the whole landscape from a 5-mile radius with a massive firey inferno with fire the size of mountains, and the flame is back as a starless night lined with red. The inferno is hot enough to daunt the most elite Soul Reaper, but not quite hot enough to melt rock, only to superheat it. Also has an arc shape when fired. Can only be performed once per day, for it depletes alot of riatsu.

3.) Tamashī wa hōyō (Soul Embrace)- (slash swords down to form T-shape with body, put sword tips into eachother untill both blades are pierced) The act of combining the two Zanpakuto into one, creating a large explosion of black and white energy, with the force of an A-Bomb, helping to create the Bankai of Getsuryu. The only to avoid any of these attacks is to avoid them or get out of the explosion radius, which in the case of Soul Embrace, is about a 6-mile radius. Can only be used once until the wielder returns to a normal state, to recover his energy.

Description: Getsuryu splits into the two katanas explained earlier, but they end up transforming into two seperate evolved forms;
Mikadzuki- A large curvy thick scimitar, seeming to look like it was made from a metal version of Moonstone, with a crescent moon-like guard (precisely 1 1/2 in. thick spaning to about 52in. in length)
And Dākudoragon- A large thick cutlass-like buster sword seeming to look like it was made from a metal version of Obsidion, about 1 1/2 in. thick and spanning to 52in. in length, about 1 1/2 ft. wide at the top, with a brutal-knuckles-style guard.

Bankai abilities: limited only (3)
1.) Yamiyo (Moonless Night)- (slash downwards and exclaime spell.) Black energy of pure shadows starts to radiate from Dākudoragon. When fired, the whole atmosphere starts to part about 5-miles apart, and unleashes a slash of pitch-black energy, able to disintegrate most anything to dust. Given the fact that is a vertical slash attack, it can be avoided, and in doing the attack, there is a cooldown of precisely 5 minutes.

2.) Doragonsouru (Dragon Soul)-(take swords in two hands, and spear upwards in a strong thrust. If fired, slash according to line of fire as you shout the spell) a blazing inferno of blue fire, able to burn through stone, metal, soul, and flesh, a flame arc if fired, but an explosion that can be placed in any area the sword points to, if unfocused. Has a cooldown of 6min. if the host is of rational mind, for if this attack is used two frequently or too loosly, he will end up encasing himself and the enemy in The Final Attack.

3.) Tsukihi (Moon Fire)- (encase host in white fire, the encasing becoming cotton-like wrap, hair grows, becoming long and black with white strands in a 50 ratio, bit both are mixed. If focused, after transformation, point sword at enemy, shout his name, then the spell. If unfocused, shout spell.)The Final Attack, capable of exploding with an endless inferno of white fire, additionaly capable of spreading and thus superheating the whole surface of the world, but when set upon a cirtain target, will burn the enemy relentlessly, enen burning the soul of the enemy with the same intensity as white fire, not stopping untill the enemy is burned completely out of exsistance, burning every single mollecule and atom of the enemy until he/she is unable to return to this or any existance, draining the activator of such a flame to death, not being able to respon within Soul Society for 10 years. This attack can only be commited once in a hosts lifetime. Can be shortcutten in casting by using Dragon Soul in a circle around them and the enemy, and once eniciated, it cannot be stopped until the enemy and the caster are dead.

Desciption: A two-sided buster-sword spanning a whopping 62in. in length and a huge 3ft. in width, along with a large 3in. in thickness. The tsuba also spanning the blade in a design of the Dragon and Moon becoming one, interlacing eachother in a twisty dance. The wielder also covered in armor of the same nature. Black and white energy also surrounds the wielder and a large spiritual pressure, approximatly 3x that of Ichigo when in Vasto Lorde form,surrounds the environment around the wielder and his opponent.


This Zanpakuto has been on my mind for weeks, haunting my dreams, actually just making one dream repeat over and over; a dream where I raise the sword and shoot into the sky, the stars forming into the shape of a dragons underbelly, then I use my version of Getsugatensho, and when my view zooms out, it makes the very same symbol that my necklace has. Anyway, what do you guys think?
বছরখানেক আগে wantadog said…
@BP To be honest, they were so simply explained, there are countless loopholes someone could use on him.
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বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
big smile
Nice job, Etrios. That was really well-done. XD

@Wantadog. Heh, now that I've actually read through it, I realised that are right. When I first saw it, I just looked over quickly, realised how OP it was, then didn't even bother to read any more. Lol. I bet my blade on page 236 would beat the shit out of his. And the one I made before that, too. I think your DNA Zanpakuto would also make mincemeat of his, too, ya.
বছরখানেক আগে Etrios said…
Thank you, Blackpanther. And I agree with yours and wantadog's points. Though, at most simplification, he just has the same problem I had, just a bit more severe.
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বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
Yeah I guess your right Etrios my weakness may be hard to find but i have to more zanpakuto in mind but I had a hard time deciding which one to pick plus blackpanther666 who cares if I copied the tensho part it isn't illegal. At least I didn't put the devils number in my username.
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
wantadog what part of super speed did you miss oh and I forgot to say that only a captain class soulreaper can use it.
বছরখানেক আগে wantadog said…
What part of "Ashisogi Jizo" did you not understand? You may be fast, but you still have to breathe. Poison attacks are your biggest weakness. (P.S. Ashisogi Jizo belongs to a squad captain so that makes your last statement redundant.) Believe it or not, speed and power usually has very little to do with battle's, it is the smarter and most strategic person that wins.

What the heck does his username have to do with it? So what if 666 happens to be the devil number? For all you know, his mailbox is 666. Also it's not like having the devil's number in his name automatically makes him a demon, even though that would be really cool!

BP, are you a demon? XD
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বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
No I am not a demon even though I was born the day before halloween
বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
@Captain-Ben... Lol, you are so off-target that it almost makes me laugh... I don't believe I said anything about you using the Gestuga Tensho in your blade... I know your type, you just come on here and post any old crap and say that its the best. So, you don't like my username? As if I care what you think. Frankly, you really have no leg to stand on. Your blade will lose, no matter how you look at it. Anyway, why are you answering Wantadog? Is your name 'blackpanther666'?

@Wanta. No. But, if I was, it would insanely cool, as you said. XD
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
Ok now try this zanpakuto

Name: Daichinyaiba (Blade of Earth)
Release: Bring peace Daichinyaiba
Description: this shikai is one that heals and promotes peace and it is weak.
Bankai: Kamigami no ken( sword of the gods)
Description: The hilt and handle are like a normal zanpakuto but the blade changes color and gains power based on the emotion of the wielder which is a strength and weakness but mostly strength.The soulreaper must be smart when using it because it's attacks can backfire if you use it wrong.

Abilities shikai:Chōwa-ha (Harmony wave) calms every living thing down in a 5 mile radius for about 10 minutes. Tenshi no Uta (Song of the Angels) heals the lifeforms the user chooses.

Abilities bankai: Zues no ikati (Wrath of zues) unleashes a barrage of lightning strikes.
Hadus no ryōken (Hades hounds) tracks and locks on the enemy so you can hit her or him. Works with only one hit.
Kamigami no ame (the gods rain) Meteors come falling down like a giant meteor shower. Works best with Hadus no ryōken.

This is a lieutenant class zanpakuto.
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
Read the second paragraph does soundlike it is addressed to you. Plus I love bleach and Ten howaitotogā was my first zanpakuto give me a break plus your zanpakuto had one thing mine didn't knowledge and that is it's weakness but my second ones bankai is kinda unstable but it's shikai is mostly use. Plus my sister is really superstisous and I think after 17 years it is finally starting to rub off on me. But nice job with the black panther part it is a nice touch
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বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
sick
I ran some calculations with my first and second zanpakuto with yours blackpanther666 wantadog and yours Etrios and me and blackpanther666 both lost by massive energy loss and wantadog won with skillful techniques and energy conservation. So I still need to get better at making zanpakuto.
বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
@Captain-Ben. My mistake. I thought you were just a troll. Fair enough, I guess. I'll give you a friendly tip for making Zanpakutous... Try not to overpower them too much if you are serious about creating them and having people review them for you. If you plan to create one that is overpowered on purpose, most likely someone will comment that it is overpowered. However, it is really satisfying to create one and spend a lot of time working on it and then someone reviews it and gives you feedback - that way you not only know you did a good job, but also other people think so too. This forum is like a community, because most of the Bleach fans post on here and post their blades up for review, or just for the hell of it.
বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
Calculations? What kind of calculations? You are interesting.
বছরখানেক আগে wantadog said…
Any calculations with me winning is fine by me XD
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
I took the abilities of each zanpakuto and wantadog wins because each abilities is supplied by reishi and the more reishi used the more energy is depleted and my abilities use a lot of reishi therefor I lose a lot of energy and wantwdog's abilities use the least amount of reishi therefore he wins. What can I say I hate school but I am really good at math.
বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
Intriguing. Well, I can't argue with that. Lol.
বছরখানেক আগে whiteflame55 said…
Am I the only one who finds comparing zanpakuto by who would be victorious to be a kind of pointless measurement? I'm not trying to slam you or anyone else, Captain, but if that's the standard by which blades are judged, then that just encourages overpowered abilities. And while I'm sure your calculations ring with some truth, I've seen a number of blades that were "weaker" than others come out on top anyway due to creative use.

All I'm saying is that we should judge blades a little more loosely. Personally, I tend to focus on how creative the blade is, but that's just me.
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
tongue
You do have a point whiteflame55 but you see every thing all depend on the usage of reishi. The more you use the less chance you have of winning besides I bet wantadog's zanpakuto would beat you hands done. Same with blackpanther666's and my second one.
বছরখানেক আগে wantadog said…
Lol I've seen Whiteflame's zanpakuto and mine don't stand much of a chance XD Cept maybe my DNA one....
বছরখানেক আগে whiteflame55 said…
Eh, I'm not really interested in meeting your challenge. We can have a mock battle if you'd like, just realize that I've been posting blades on here since about page 30, and I have a litany of blades and characters to select from. As for wantadog and BP, each of them have faced off against my blades multiple times in Clan Wars, and I respect their work highly.
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
What do you mean by clan wars. I am still new and this is only my third day.
বছরখানেক আগে wantadog said…
It is an RP that BP made.
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বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
What? Sorry i have no idea what you just said.
বছরখানেক আগে wantadog said…
RP = Role Play

BP = Blackpanther666

The clan war is a Bleach Role Play that Blackpanther666 created on the forums.
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
Cool ixgot to find it.
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
Finally finished my third one

Name shikai: seigino īguru (The Eagle of Justice)
Release- take flight seigino īguru
Description: a zanpakuto whose hilt looks like the wings of an eagle and the blade is golden colored. When nearing the tip it splits into two semi long downward curved blades and one small upward curved blade which all three have black colored tips. The top of the blade looks like the talons of an eagle.
Bankai: Mujitsu no fukushū (Revenge of the Innocent)
Description: A dark red blade that resembles the blood of the innocent and the anger that they have. It looks like the shikai but with greater power.
Shikai abilities: Odori īgurusu (dancing eagles) An attack that blows winds that cut the enemy.
Taron suraisu (Talon slice) by throwing the blade it will spin around and then use the enemy to turn its self around will cutting into his skin.
Emono o tsuieki (Tracking the prey) this will disembody your soul while a barrier is formed around your body. You canteack you enemy down with out them knowing. This attack uses no reishi to perform and the barrier only goes down when you return immediately after finding the enemy.

Bankai abilities: Sui no ibuki (Breath of death) unleashes a poisonous gas that kills 2 minutes after being inhaled.
Saimin naming (hypnotic wave) hypnotises the enemy so that they obey you and whomever else you say. It only works for a solid 10 minutes.
This next ability's japense name is really long I will just use the english name. Whirling blood vein strike this attack draws power from the blood within the arm you are using for the attack as soon as the attack hits something places your hand on the top of the blade and move it down the sword and up to the top of your arm. If you don't do within 5 minutes you have to cut that arm off because the attack is a last resort. It draws your arms blood veins into the sword to gain power.

Comments: This sword's bankai uses less reishi because it mainly draws its powers from the weilders blood and it replenished it at the soound of replenish blood. But if you lose your veins you lose them for good unless you can figure out the secret words to restore them. This zanpakuto is an emergancy zanpakuto only plus it is captain class.
বছরখানেক আগে blackpanther666 said…
@Captain-Ben54. It's all very well to judge who would win by reishi usage, but often that isn't the case. As Whiteflame said, there are many components to judge in a Zanpakuto battle and often enough, it doesn't come down to reishi, but the determination of the wielder and creative use of the abilities often are the deciding factor of a battle. For example, if you tried to fight Whiteflame, you would lose miserably to him, because he has experience at RPing and his Zanpakutous are incredibly well-done.
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
He may have more experience but I would not go up against him unless he was a hollow a follower of aizen.
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বছরখানেক আগে whiteflame55 said…
Not as though there aren't spars between members of Soul Society, but whatever.
বছরখানেক আগে Captain-Ben54 said…
Actually I would prefer to train alone with a dummy like my annoying pain in the butt sister.
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বছরখানেক আগে whiteflame55 said…
...Alright, then I suggest you don't write things like "challenge it if you want to die" after your zanpakuto. Sends a very different message.