ouchi - the blade looks fine. In terms of the character himself, I'm honestly only rarely fond of any vaizard characters. While I'd like to explain my main reasoning on that point, I would have to reveal a huge spoiler to do it, so instead I'll provide a secondary reason. Vaizards are extremely uncommon. If you think about it, the group that Ichigo met up with and Ichigo himself are the only vaizards in existence, all of them because of the efforts of Urahara Kisuke. While it's certainly possible that other vaizards exist, I'd say the chances are about as likely as running into a random spirit with a chain coming out of their chest with the powers of a captain class shinigami.
In terms of the stats in general, it's hard for me to measure what any of those mean. It also seems like your character just becomes amazing in every category with the mask on. And, to be honest, I have no idea how to measure what effect high intellect has on a fight. But also realize that I know very little about character creation. I've literally created the character concept for all of two separate people, and I've only explored the basics of what ways they excel. Most of my qualms with characters others make are pretty basic, and the rest are based in whether or not they work with the story. I honestly don't get the number system.
In terms of the stats in general, it's hard for me to measure what any of those mean. It also seems like your character just becomes amazing in every category with the mask on. And, to be honest, I have no idea how to measure what effect high intellect has on a fight. But also realize that I know very little about character creation. I've literally created the character concept for all of two separate people, and I've only explored the basics of what ways they excel. Most of my qualms with characters others make are pretty basic, and the rest are based in whether or not they work with the story. I honestly don't get the number system.