Kimoy4321 (Makikomu) –
Shikai: You should separate these into abilities, mainly because I can see 5 abilities here, which is well over the limit.
1) Water control – How much water can be controlled in this way? Is it infinite? Can he condense water out of the air? What’s the limits on this? At what distance can he control water? Can he control it inside other objects? Can he control water inside his opponent? Can any of this water be used to enhance the other abilities, and if so, specify how much.
2) High pressured water strikes – How large is the blade? What are the limitations for cutting potential? Can the form of the blade addition be changed?
3) Tsunami-like waves – How large are these? How fast do they move? How fast does the wave form?
4) Small water blades – How many can be formed in a single sweep? How fast do they move? What’s the actual size of these blades?
5) How wide a radius does this effect still work? Give some idea of how long it would take to fully dehydrate someone in the area.
Bankai: In this case, you listed them, but there’s still 5. Try to keep these down to 3 apiece.
1) What suffices as water it can use to regenerate itself? This is much the same as the first shikai in terms of applicable questions.
2) There has to be limits on deformation and reformation, especially on the latter. What prevents the user from reforming within the body for your opponent? Can he be damaged in this form? If any of the water that he is composed of is frozen or evaporated, is the wielder damaged when he returns to normal? Since he can transform himself into a tidal wave, I’m guessing that he can increase his own volume as he transforms. What are the limitations on that increase? What prevents the user from becoming mist and drowning the opponent by flying down their throat in large amounts? How long can he stay in a liquid form? I don’t understand how this ability can turn ice-based attacks into water. You’re water. Are you saying that, as water, you are unaffected by freezing and can add any other amount of water to yourself? If so, I’m even more confused. That means you can add mass to yourself after you’ve transformed, which presents some pretty massive uncertainties with whether you can be hurt at all, and really confuses what parts of you turn back into a normal physical human being and which parts stay water. If you’re going to include this, include it as something separate from this ability, one you can only use while you are physical.
3) How thick is the mist? Give some idea of how hard it is to see through. Can the mist be used for these other abilities to increase the amount of water you control?
4) Can this be done with an infinite amount of water? Is there a limit to the size of the orb? When does it lacerate? Is it only after the orb forms, or as the orb is forming? How does it lacerate? Does it simply create water blades within the orb (thus being blockable) or is the water capable of cutting at any location it penetrates (thus being almost unblockable)? That whole question of condensation becomes extremely important here. If you can condense the water around them, there’s practically no avoiding this.
5) How strong is this as a defense? What can it block against, and what can it not? If it is damaged, does it automatically regenerate? Also, is there a specific size to it, or could you basically just make a shield that covers you entirely?
Shikai: You should separate these into abilities, mainly because I can see 5 abilities here, which is well over the limit.
1) Water control – How much water can be controlled in this way? Is it infinite? Can he condense water out of the air? What’s the limits on this? At what distance can he control water? Can he control it inside other objects? Can he control water inside his opponent? Can any of this water be used to enhance the other abilities, and if so, specify how much.
2) High pressured water strikes – How large is the blade? What are the limitations for cutting potential? Can the form of the blade addition be changed?
3) Tsunami-like waves – How large are these? How fast do they move? How fast does the wave form?
4) Small water blades – How many can be formed in a single sweep? How fast do they move? What’s the actual size of these blades?
5) How wide a radius does this effect still work? Give some idea of how long it would take to fully dehydrate someone in the area.
Bankai: In this case, you listed them, but there’s still 5. Try to keep these down to 3 apiece.
1) What suffices as water it can use to regenerate itself? This is much the same as the first shikai in terms of applicable questions.
2) There has to be limits on deformation and reformation, especially on the latter. What prevents the user from reforming within the body for your opponent? Can he be damaged in this form? If any of the water that he is composed of is frozen or evaporated, is the wielder damaged when he returns to normal? Since he can transform himself into a tidal wave, I’m guessing that he can increase his own volume as he transforms. What are the limitations on that increase? What prevents the user from becoming mist and drowning the opponent by flying down their throat in large amounts? How long can he stay in a liquid form? I don’t understand how this ability can turn ice-based attacks into water. You’re water. Are you saying that, as water, you are unaffected by freezing and can add any other amount of water to yourself? If so, I’m even more confused. That means you can add mass to yourself after you’ve transformed, which presents some pretty massive uncertainties with whether you can be hurt at all, and really confuses what parts of you turn back into a normal physical human being and which parts stay water. If you’re going to include this, include it as something separate from this ability, one you can only use while you are physical.
3) How thick is the mist? Give some idea of how hard it is to see through. Can the mist be used for these other abilities to increase the amount of water you control?
4) Can this be done with an infinite amount of water? Is there a limit to the size of the orb? When does it lacerate? Is it only after the orb forms, or as the orb is forming? How does it lacerate? Does it simply create water blades within the orb (thus being blockable) or is the water capable of cutting at any location it penetrates (thus being almost unblockable)? That whole question of condensation becomes extremely important here. If you can condense the water around them, there’s practically no avoiding this.
5) How strong is this as a defense? What can it block against, and what can it not? If it is damaged, does it automatically regenerate? Also, is there a specific size to it, or could you basically just make a shield that covers you entirely?
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