Isane and Kyone

Six months পূর্বে I received a review on one of my Bleach fanfics that critiqued the characterization within one of my stories that caused me and my readers to slam our heads. I couldn't give this reviewer a response for two reasons. First, the review was left anonymously and second, they left a lengthy critique that would have bogged down my author's note at the end, which wasn't fair to my other readers. One of the things that was off about this review was the fact that they pointed out that Ichigo wasn't an adultish, big brother type when canon makes it clear that he is this way with Yuzu and...

this is when toshiro wakes up in ichigos room.
but this has my twist added to it.here we go !!! please note: i own NOTHING!!!!

toshiro woke up with a shock in ichigos room and struggled to sit up.

toshiro: w-where am i ?

ichigo walkd in

ichigo:hey.

toshiro: ichigo! where am i?

ichigo: your at my house. i found আপনি on the side of the road,didnt think i should just leave আপনি lieing there.

toshiro:i see, im sorry if i caused আপনি any trouble.

ichigo lookd behind toshiro. then toshiro lookd back. his eyes grew. there was a young girl there with black hair and mint green eyes.

ichigo: আপনি know how long voltas...

Bakudō
Bakudō ("way of binding")
Beginner (Unseated officers and
other shinigami)
Kidō Bakudō No. 1 Sai
1. Sai (塞, Restrain) — Locks a
target's arms in place behind
their back.
Incantation: unknown/none.
4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
— An energy rope entangles a
target's arms.
Incantation: unknown/none.
8. Seki (斥, Repulse) - Creates a
round shield that seems to
temporarily paralyze and repel
whatever strikes it.
Incantation: unknown/none.
9. Geki (撃, Strike) — Engulfs a
target in red light, completely
paralyzing them.
Incantation: "Disintegrate, you
black dog of Rondanini! Look
upon yourself...