দুর্গ [xy xx] Runaway while আপনি can

I decided to make my first অনুরাগী fiction about দুর্গ and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." দুর্গ ব্যক্ত looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" দুর্গ stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." দুর্গ whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." দুর্গ ব্যক্ত turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't আপনি sleep with...