what do আপনি think of this poem?

this is my first so just tell me if it sucks.

every time i look at আপনি it makes my want too cry.

every time i look at আপনি it makes me want too scream.

every time look at আপনি it makes me want too die.

every time i look at আপনি it makes me think of আপনি and her lastnight.



does it suck should i right more?