অনুরাগী of PoM Fanfic Opinion

starslight101 posted on Jan 06, 2013 at 11:34PM
Ok, I know some of you don't know me. My name is Madi, first of all. Second of all, I need your opinion on a new fanfic I'm thinking on posting. It's called the Penguin Council and its a spy story. Here's the first part of it:
PC 1: The Council
Skipper peaked around the corner. He looked towards the right and cursed under his breath.
"Crap." He said. Alice was at the front entrance of the zoo and talking to a construction worker. Skipper slid behind a light post to eavesdrop.
"So you want to tear the zoo down?" He asked.
"We want to build a new zoo, so we don't want any old structures." Alice said. Oh no, Skipper thought. They will find our secret base! I can't tell the team this! There's only one thing we have to do. He thought. Skipper slid towards HQ.

More coming soon if you approve!

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বছরখানেক আগে mostar1219 said…
big smile
Keep going