Breaking Dawn and Deathly Hallows

I like Twilight. I used to প্রণয় Twilight. But then, I began to feel disappointed. I wanted Bella to have DONE something that actually could affect the entire WORLD. Suddenly, I created my own versions of Edward and Bella and the Volturi. I like Twilight as it is....but it would be much better like this.
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Bella রাজহাঁস tugged on her muddy brown ponytail to keep in in place as thundered roared and rain came down in buckets on the deserted island. The forest, slick with slime and muck, was dangerous enough without HIM lurking in the shadows. Her ears picked up a soft sound beneath the gale. He...

please leave মতামত so i no if this story sucks অথবা not and please read it even if its not the whole story.

Chapter 1: The unexpected

Have আপনি ever had one of those dreams, were আপনি try and run fast but আপনি just keep getting slower, well that's the dream I was having. This is the most strangest dream I have ever had. I was being chased দ্বারা two wannabe snobs from school, Rachel was the leader from between them, who was tall with black hair tied up in to a curly mini style afro like a thick puff ball at the back of her head. she also had long, sleek legs built for running. Along side her was her...

Note: I originally had this as a question, but I guess it was too long, so I'm re-posting this in an article.

Question number one: ভ্যাম্পায়ার hearts don't beat, correct? Correct. I believe this is mentioned several times. Now, in health class, they teach আপনি that your হৃদয় pumps and makes your blood flow, correct? Correct. So, it stands to reason that, since ভ্যাম্পায়ার hearts don't beat, they don't have blood flow, correct? Yes. So, they have no blood flow, no circulation. They cannot bleed, অথবা blush, অথবা anything related to circulation, yes? Yes. This is ব্যক্ত several times in the book.

Now, call...

I have just tried to refute another "Edward is hot" type fallacy. I've had enough, I'm ready to puke - pardon the language - in link if I see another one. In the foreseeable future, I shall either not bother with such fallacies but instead ignore and ridicule অথবা point to this article. This applies to both sides because some Twilight অনুরাগী and some new Harry Potter অনুরাগী here are frequently inferring it.

I point to my পূর্ববর্তি article: link for the introduction.
I shall here only point out Number Six:
Non sequitur.
What is a Non Sequitur and a fallacy: I shall again refer to অক্সফোর্ড English Dictionary...