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Riku114 posted on Sep 11, 2013 at 05:40AM
Okay as the title may suggest, this form is for writing! Create a battle scene or interaction between characters! Show what you can do! Seeing some nice battles or some nice adventures would be fun. Just give a bit of a briefing of the characters in the beginning of the writing.

The example is a writing from an rp of mine before.
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বছরখানেক আগে Riku114 said…
My example. (Note: This doenst have to be THIS long, it could be a paragraph if you like, I just took this from one of my favorite rps) This is from the Pokemon Trainer Academy Saga P3 Manson vs Ikari

Ikari: Was one of the best students and was an amazing flying type trainer. She grew up on Orange Islnad

Manson: ikari's father that basically abandoned her when she was little with her mother. Recently he is attacking the school with shadow pokemon and his own personal shadow abilities

Ikari: *walks up to see Manson* Gonna shoot me down?

Manson: Nope. You guys beat all the expected admins. Just seems the back up came to block off your friends.

Ikari: Doesn’t matter. Im guessing Im gonna have to battle you to get you to stop with your quest for power?

Manson: *nods*

Ikari: Fine. Sniper!

Sniper: *comes out of pkm ball* Manson…….

Manson: Ah….. Sniper and his speed…… Hydreigon. (Hydreigons first appearance!)

Ikari: Take to the skies! (The first thing Ikari commands always)

Manson: Follow it!

Hydreigon was keeping good pace with Sniper. Which was a first in…… It was a first no other pokemon’s speed came close to snipers except melody’s. Sniper looked down at the hydreigon.

Ikari: Loop and air slash!

Sniper flips and gets behind Hydreigon ready to launch air slash.

Manson: Head down and Shadow End!

Hydreigon changes his direction and now upside down l slapping the Air Slash shattering right through it continuing to fly at Sniper down wards.

Ikari: *thinking: Hydreigon doesn’t seem to be half bad with the skies. Lets try something.* Motion 4 (code name and grouping style XD)

Sniper: Got it!

Manson: Keep on its trail.

Sniper swivels in several ‘S’ shapes across the room, looking back at the Hydreigon not far behind. It continued with a few loops like one of the typical flock flight routine practices.

Sniper: *thinking: Feels weird without Melody leading……. But I think I can handle the path*

Sniper carried itself high into the sky and began to fly in a large circle at a fast pase.

Ikari: Remember, don’t hold back with the speed, you are on your own.

Sniper: Got it. *speeds up*

Manson: Speed up as well.

The two with massive speed spin very fast at such a pace, that quickly a tornado is formed in the shape of a hourglass where it bends in being where Sniper and Hydreigon were. Motion 4: The Tornado Spin.

Ikari: Ride it!

Sniper dives out of the spinning circle not dizzy in anyways and dives back into the bottom of the tornado.

Ikari: *thinking: This will be strong if it cant handle the spin.* Sky Attack!

Sniper rode each swivel in the tornado gaining more and more speed flowing with the rapid super fast winds of the tornado (The only two of Ikari’s pokemon that can handle this with even the risk is Melody and Sniper the others typically stay in the middle and cut through sides of torndos. It’s a new Motion) and the sky attack’s power was over quadrupled!

Manson: Fly up in the tornado!

Hydreigon flew up to enter the middle (eye) of the tornado where it was calmer. Hydreigon was somewhat dizzy, but not enough to fully throw off it’s senses.

Manson: Wait for its strike.

Even from the outside and the inside, Sniper was unclear of an image. More like a black line on wind going through the tornado’s walls. If Sniper was to loose any concentration it could easily backfire onto Sniper with a harsh throw to the wall (Yes I watched appolo 13 and I know about traveling around the curve brings speed, but the high risk of flinging off) giving much damage. Soon Sniper charged out of the wall of the tornado towards the middle where Hydreigon is.

Manson: Hyper Voice!

The Hyper Voice slightly weakened the Sky Attack and did do damage to Sniper, but the Sky Attack still was about 3.8x stronger than a normal Sky Attack and hit Hydreigon. Both were pushed out of the tornado which vanished quickly from the break in the fluid wind currents.

[Part 2: Hydreigon and Snipers Wrap!]

Ikari: Roost!

Manson: Don’t let it and Shadow Rush!

Sniper begins to Roost but was interrupted by Shadow Rush removing more hp then the roost gave.

Manson: Shadow End!

Ikari: Brave Bird!

The two attacks crash with a strong strike that was sent throught the tower and some smoke was formed. The two pokemon flew out of the smoke and they both were obviously tired and weakened. Soon they both fainted. (Lol a short part)

[Part 3: Blazing Metal! Intelligent Metagross vs The Burning Flames of Redin!]

Manson: Metagross!

Metagross: *is let out of pokeball*

Ikari: *thinking: Steel Psychic. Fire should be able to top it* Redin!

Redin: *comes out of pkm ball*

Ikari: Take to the skies. (Once again the common command)

Redin gets to a medium high point in the sky.

Manson: Shadow Panic!

Ikari: Don’t let it hit!

Nope. Metagross was faster with it’s reaction and the Shadow Panic (Panic is kinda awkward spelling like awkward itself) confuses Redin. Redin begin to fly as if it was a drunk dragon or at least one of the out of control dragons from the idea of Europe.

Ikari: *sighs* *thinking: Well if its gonna be a typical dragon why not play as one as well?* Flamethrower.

Redin begins to fly randomly launching Flamethrower hitting mostly floor and once hitting Metagross doing damage.

Manson: Catch the fire with Psychic.

Redin continued to use Flamethrower. Metagross uses Psychic which catches the flames from the flamethrower.

Manson: Send it back.

The caught flamethrower was hurled back at Redin very much like a fire blast although, Redin still flying drunk like managed to dodge without a command, well dodge isn’t the right word….. moved……swivled….. it was more of an accedient then anything else.

Ikari: Land.

Redin goes to the ground.

Ikari: *thinking: Lets try this out……* Aerial Ace!

Manson: Wait.

Redin turns over to the wall and strikes into it.

Redin: Oww….. When did it become so hard?

Manson: Psychic!

Metagross uses Psychic on Redin dealing an average amount of damage. Soon, Redin snaps out of confusion and it breaks free from the Psychic.

Redin: Damn it what happened?!

Ikari: Nothing we cant make up for.

Manson: Shadow Panic.

Ikari: Not again! Flamethrower on the Shadow Panic!

The flamethrower strikes Shadow Panic and they even out.

Manson: Again

Ikari: Match it!

The two attacks once again strike eachother with more power and smoke was formed. Soon, as if only the two pokemon were able to see and find eachother, a Hyper Beam launched out of one part of the smoke but a Flamethrower came in reply. The two attacks pushed against eachother as if it was a war and soon the Hyper Beam pushes through striking Redin and the smoke soon cleared. Redin was weak.

Ikari: Tch. Use Seismic Toss!

Redin grabs a hold of Meta gross and flies into the sky.

Ikari: Now add Flamethrower!

On the first loop, Redin added in Flamethrower surround itself in the flames and Metagross as well.

Ikari: And Blastburn!

On the second loop, the once blazing ball of fire gained harsh fire surrounding it having sparks fling behind. This also highly sped up the Seismic Toss and it dropped Metagross with itself. Redin has been KOed with its killer last move. Metagross was still standing but just barely, the massive strength of the fire and seismic toss was harsh.

Ikari: You did a fine job. Return.*redin returns* Alin!

Alin comes out of the pokeball.

Manson: Metagross Shadow End!

Ikari: Wait.

Metagross comes close to Alin.

Ikari: Close Combat!

Metagross gets really close but is stopped by Alin’s Close Combat which hit Metagross before Shadow End hit Alin. Metagross, already having taken much damage from Redin, fainted.

[Part 4: T-Rex Time!]

Manson: Tyranitar!

Tyranitar: Ty!

Ikari: Alin prepare.

Manson: Attract!

Tyranitar begins to use Attract.

Ikari: Dodge! (WE ALL HATE ATTRACT)

Alin dodges the little hearts that came from a pokemon that didn’t match the attack. Well it DID match. It just didn’t look quite right. But either or. Alin dodged it.

Ikari: Good. Now fly high!

Alin makes its height.

Manson: Fire Blast!

Tyranitar launches Fire Blast into the sky where it NEARLY reaches Alin but couldn’t match (dude, imagine how big the room is. I made sure I made it clear that the rooms are huge mostly for Ikari’s battle.)

Ikari: Now come down with Sky Attack!

Alin comes down from the great height, gaining speed, headed down at Tyranitar.

Manson: Shadow End!

Tyranitar knocks Alin off course by smacking it harshly with Shadow End using its tail onto the floor doing massive damage. Although Alin regains its ground and takes flight once again.

Ikari: Alin you got it good right?

Alin: That sounded very weird, but yeah.

Ikari: Close Combat!

Manson: Match it with Shadow End!

Alin used Close Combat but only a few punches, kicks, and slaps actually hit, due to about half of them were matched with Shadow End. Even so, Tyranitar took massive damage being BOTH Rock and Dark BOTH being weak against fighting. Both Alin and Tyranitar were tired and whipped, both nearly ready to faint.

Ikari: Alin you okay?

Alin: *nods and gets up shakily after fixing his comb* I can handle a bit more.

Manson: Get up.

Tyranitar: *gets up shakily as well*

Ikari: Finish it with Close Combat.

Manson: Finish it with Shadow End.

Once again they go Close Combat vs Shadow End for only a short time due to the fact that they both fell before much could happen.

Ikari: Well you beat 2 pokemon. Good job. Return. *alin returns to pokeball*

Manson: Return. *Tyranitar returns to the pokeball*

[Part 5: The Mechanical Pokemon!]

Manson: Genesect!

Genesect: My turn already? Fine.

Ikari: Hydra. *Hydra comes out of pokeball*

Manson: Shadow Blast.

Ikari: Dodge.

As the Shadow Blast came at a Rapid Rate, Salamence, as well all know isn’t the FASTEST pokemon, moves its neck and leans away having the Shadow Blast be a near miss.

Ikari: Use Fire Blast!

Manson: Take it.

Hydra launches a very powerful Fire Blast, and Genesect crosses its arms and takes the hit dead on. When the fire blast ended it was shown that Genesect managed to hold itself out pretty well. It did though do a deal of damage.

Ikari: Earthquake!

Manson: Leap.

Hydra used Earthquake, but Genesect managed to leap pretty dang high avoiding the attack.

Ikari: *thinking: Perfect!* Draco Meteor!

Hydra launches Draco Meteor upwards.

Ikari: Add in Fire Blast!

Hydra adds in Fire Blast which combines with the Draco Meteor before it spit.

Ikari: And Hyper Beam (a hell of a damaging combo 120 power + 140 power + 150 power + salamence’s high SP Attack + Salamence being level 100 is nearly deadly and for Genesect it is 480 power *fire blast being 4x* + 140 power + 150 power + salamence’s high SP Attack + Salamence being level 100)

Hydra and right before it was about to split, a hyper beam was added and it too fused wit the Draco Meteor. Soon the Draco Meteor split and it began to fall. A few of the deadly meteors hit Genesect. What? Genesect managed to survive! How?! Well in the last minute Shadow Storm was placed around itself, reducing the damage. Although Genesect obviously took plenty of damage.

Ikari: That’s one good at enduring Genesect.

Manson: Shadow Half!

Hydra was unable to move from Hyper Beam and got hit with Shadow Half reducing what was full HP to half HP and the tiny bit of HP Genesect had got cut in half as well.

Manson: And Shadow Storm.

Ikari: Fire Blast.

The two attacks clash with great force. Fire Blast pushes Shadow Storm back. Then Shadow Storm pushes Fire Blast back. And then back and forth and back and forth and back and forth. They were pretty evenly matched. Both pokemon knew this wasn’t gonna be over anytime soon so they both moved their attack to the side and the two attacks strike the other pokemon. The two pokemon faint.

Ikari: Return.

Manson: Return.

The two pokemon return to their pokeball.

[Part 6: Melody or No Melody?]

Ikari: Melody!

Melody: Ready.

Manson: Rhyperior!

Rhyperior: Ready.

Ikari: *thinking: Well Im at a major weakness…. Good thing I trained Mlody to be able to hold up against a Rock Wrecker or two* Take flight!

Melody gets into the high skies.

Manson: Wait for it to makes its move first.

Rhyperior: Got it.

Rhyperior stands where it is firm.

Ikari: *thinking: Going by this reaction it probably doesn’t have a move that is long distance that doesn’t give a toll on Rhyperior, so staying in the skies is probably one of the better ideas……* Hurricane!

Melody whips up a powerful Hurricane, which does hit Rhyperior as hard as it was sent, but barely doing any damage.

Ikari: *thinking: Well this obviously wont work out. I could switch Melody out for Wavecress, but there is still Rayquaza. Even so, Melody is a terrible match for Rhyperior being all of her moves are power house flying type moves. And even if Wavecress would only be able to take out Rhyperior, Melody can probably handle Rayquaza. Fine.* Melody return.

Manson: Figured out the problem with the match up?

Ikari: Yeah. Wavecress!

Wavecress: Finally. I good battle.

Ikari: Ancient Power.

Manson: Shadow Break the attack.

Wavecress launched the Ancient Power which raised its stats but the large rock that was sent was just pokemon by the shadow break that Rhyperior used.

Manson: Horn Drill.

Ikari: Get to the sky.

Wavecress flies into the sky dodging the attack.

Ikari: Trying to end Wavecress quickly?

Manson: It’s the only one you have left that can hold a standing to Rhyperior.

Ikari: Either or Hydro Pump.

Manson: Dodge.

Wave cress launched the Hydro Pump which was dodged by Rhyperior moving about 2 feet away.

Manson: Rock Wrecker.

Ikari: Ancient Power.

The two rocks collide, Rock Wrecker being an attack made with a power level higher it broke through the Ancient Power after being weakened it hit Wavecress, yet Wavecress managed to hold out.

Ikari: Take advantage of it needed to recharge and strike with Hydro Pump Aero Blast!

Wavecress used Hydro Pump first which was later combined with Aero Blast. The attack hit the unmovable Rhyperior. Yer Rhyperior too managed to take the attack.

Manson: Knock it down with Rock Wrecker.

Ikari: Hydro Pump it!

Wavecress aimed a tad bit off and the Rock Wrecker skidded next to the Hydro Pump yet the Hydro Pump went to hit Rhyperior and the Rock Wrecker hit Wavecress both with full power. Wavecress managed to barely hold out and so did Rhyperior although, Rhyperior was in a worse condition.

Ikari: Ancient Power.

Wavecress strikes Rhyperior with the attack knocking it out.

[Part 7: The Finale! *dang its long enough*]

Manson: Rayquaza!

Rayquaza came out of the pokeball.

Rayquaza: This Lugia looks tired already. This wont be fun. Although it would have been nice to get this Lugia back to shadow as XD001. It would have been a good comrade.

Manson: Yeah but nothing we can do about it now.

Ikari: Wavecress you ready?

Wavecress: Yeah. Not sure how much longer I could hold out.

Ikari: Its okay, just weaken it enough for Melody.

Wavecress: Ill try.

Manson: Shadow Storm!

Ikari: Aero Blast!

The two attacks collide perfectly even this time making a major tornado of shadow and non shadow in the middle of the room, purple and white.

Ikari: Hydro Pump!

Manson: Shadow Blast!

Once again the attacks collide perfectly even. The shadow blast is foced down and the hydro pump forced up. The shadow blast cut right through the floor heading all the way to floor 1 and Hydro Pump spewed out from the roof like a fountain.

Ikari: Ancient Power!

Manson: Dodge and Shadow Break

Wavecress launches Ancient Power but Rayquaza dodged it and then came to Wavecress striking with Shadow Break. Wavecress was KOed.

Ikari: Alright its okay. Return. *returns Wavecress* Melody!

Melody: *comes out of pokeball* This seems better.

Ikari: More or less. Either or take into the sky.

Manson: Get to the same height it gets to.

Rayquaza: Got it.

The two pokemon fly high but end up on the same height. Either or, even if Melody couldn’t get to the higher height, at least Melody was in the sky where she can dodge much faster without having to worry about the ground.

Ikari: Use Hurricane.

Manson: Shadow Storm.

Once again the two attacks collide and form a larger tornado.

Rayquaza: Why must we make so many tornados?

Melody: It doesn’t bother me.

Rayquaza: It doesn’t bother me either but we aren’t getting anywhere.

Melody: Well I doubt either of us wants to get hit with a super effective attack.

Rayquaza: Whatever. *launches Shadow Blast*

Melody: *dodges* Order?

Ikari: Yeah. Aerial Ace.

Manson: Cant dodge, strike with Shadow Break.

The two pokemon charge…. Well fly at eachother with strong attacks. When they collide, Melody took more damage then Rayquaza did but managed to keep its stand. Rayquaza took damage. Yes. Not enough to show much effect.

Ikari: Can you hold out?

Melody: Yeah. It was like a Thunderbolt. Not even a thunder.

Ikari: Good. Brave Bird!

Manson: Shadow Blast!

Ikari: Spiral around it.

Melody uses Brave Bird and it spirals around the Shadow Blast to dodge it and comes near but gets slammed with a-

Manson: Shadow Break!

With a a shadow break. This time though, Rayquaza got hit with more damage than before but the amount of damage Melody took was greater. And now Melody was getting tired. Rayquaza was more or less tired.

Ikari: *thinking: Damn shadowness. Making every attack super effective. Just to make it worse it’s a legendary pokemon with the speed and the strength is higher then Melodys……* Hurricane and ride it!

Melody uses Hurrican then dives into the hurricane riding it how Sniper was in the beginning. She gained the speed.

Ikari: Sky Attack!

Melody began to charge Sky Attack while flying and gaining speed and power.

Ikari: And exit!

Melody charges out of the hurricane speeding at Rayquaza.

Manson: Shadow Break.

Rayquaza uses Shadow Break still fast enough to make it in time but still getting hit by the Sky Attack. It left a cloud of smoke. Soon it was shown that Melody has fainted and Rayquaza survive but barely just barely with only a tad bit of hp left.

(Again no need to be so long. I just couldnt cut it up into pieces)
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