Can u guys plz read my story???

So my bestie convinced me 2 post my 1st story. i worked really hard 2 make sure it was PERFECT 4 wen i পোষ্ট হয়েছে it and it would really help if some people read it and tell me wat they think about...tell me anything about it really. i would really appreciate it!!! thanks!!!!

click here to read it:link