do u like my story?

Since আপনি are লেখা a story, আপনি should probably use proper grammar, no?

But I'm not too sure whether your book revolves around the romance between this main character অথবা whether it's আরো about her trying to survive. Either way, I don't really like romance and this story is quite overdone. Sorry, I'm not trying to be mean here, it's just my opinion. Please don't take it personally.

It does sound interesting. Hopefully if আপনি plan on posting it here আপনি won't use that type of grammar, because although some (like me) make an effort to try to understand as we read it, others will simply দুশ্চরিত্রা about it (No offense to those who will). So just a suggestion: Type it in great grammar for all to read and enjoy. :)

And again, it sounds interesting. Don't know enough to like অথবা dislike, but it grasped my attention. Good job for doing that because I don't like romance that much xD