Can আপনি please read this article?

I wrote this প্রবন্ধ yesterday and I will get paid for it, but it has 2 have a lot of veiwers. So there is a link for it, so please read it and মতামত on it please! It's for L.A.!
p.s. the প্রবন্ধ ব্যক্ত it was written দ্বারা brooke, because brooke is a name that i would want my name to be when i change it... just so u don't get confused অথবা anything. :D thanks.

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