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if this was on the back cover of a book, would u read it?

"the world didn't end in fire, though it was a daziling array of light...but it didn't go up in smoke. it did not freeze over, but it shown...it glistened 10,000 times আরো beautiful. no, the world....the earth and everything, everyone, on it....simply...desolved...desolved into a daziling dance of তারকা dust of all the রঙ that made it plus 1,000 more..."
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KnougeChick said:
I wouldn't. Because the grammar is horrible, the spelling as well. And it really detracted from my understanding of it. I would if it was something like this, I might.

"The world didn't end in fire, though it was a dazzling array of light. But it never went up in smoke. It did't freeze over, but it did shine. It shone ten-thousand times আরো beautiful than a room filled with jewels, lights shining everywhere to further প্রদর্শনী their beauty. No. The world. The earth and everything and everyone on it simply... Dissolved. Dissolved into a dazzling dance of তারকা dust of all the রঙ that could be defined, as well as thousands more."

Based on what I understood from this, that's what I thought was trying to be said.

Though this might be আরো fitted to be a monologue of the main character. অথবা the prologue. :33
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it IS the prologue, but it would b on the bak cover. btw, my spell check is broke and i don't shive a git about my spelling অথবা grammer on things like this.
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I'm not attacking you. I'm trying to help you. And as a writer, myself, I've learned not to rely in spell check alone. Because আপনি could have a sentence where you're trying to say: "They went to their house.", but আপনি could accidentally type "They went to they're house." Which would be the wrong Their/They're/There. :33 অথবা something as simple as "You're welcome." আপনি might type "Your welcome." But that would be incorrect, because I don't own a welcome, right?
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*Sigh* আপনি keep using all these excuses. And usually আপনি make up excuses because you're too lazy to do something. Such as editing. And it's so obvious আপনি don't want critique on this. আপনি just want people to ধামা ধরা all over it and প্রণয় it and say that it's amazing. আপনি don't want help improving so আপনি can become an even better writer.
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JadTheWolf said:
Wow that's beautiful. I would definitely read it!
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thx!
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no problem :)
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no problem :)
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