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I just saw a প্রশ্ন asking if their song was good so I'm copying them. I wrote this last night:

I can only see আপনি in my mind
I can’t প্রদর্শনী myself
I hide inside
I just want to be free of this
Fall into my arms

All I see is a cloudy sky
A song made just for you
I hope আপনি hear my voice
Above the chaos of the world

You’re my savior
I want আপনি to know this
You’re the light when all others are out
You’re my sunlight
You’re my stars at night
I see you’re beautiful

I don’t understand
আপনি don’t see how amazing আপনি are
Others don’t realize
But I see the light in your soul

You’re the smile when I cry
You’re the air when I’m drowning
You’re my water when I’m wilting
And you’re my best friend when I’m lonely

You’re my savior
I want আপনি to know this
You’re the light when all others are out
You’re my sunlight
You’re my stars at night
I see you’re beautiful

If আপনি say you’re ugly
I’ll make আপনি feel better
I know you’re unhappy
But maybe I’m sadder

If I try to fix your broken heart
Will it heal me অথবা break me more?
I think it might hurt me if I can’t
But if only আপনি knew me

You’re my savior
I want আপনি to know this
You’re the light when all others are out
You’re my sunlight
You’re my stars at night
I see you’re beautiful

I’d do anything for you
You’re the only hope in my life
Without আপনি I don’t think I could survive
But if আপনি see me you’ll forget me

I know I’m just another person on the street
But maybe now you’ll know me

You’re my savior
I want আপনি to know this
You’re the light when all others are out
You’re my sunlight
You’re my stars at night
I see you’re beautiful
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TheDirector said:
It's a very pleasant song, but also has a touch of melancholy in my opinion (which isn't bad at all). I like melancholy.

It almost sounds like it could be a poem. In other words, it's very poetic. I wish I could hear the melody (because it's hard to tell whether অথবা not a song truly sounds like a song without the melody), but from what আপনি provided, it's good!

I like what আপনি wrote about this person being the light when all others are out. I suppose that line spoke to me the most.
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Thanks! It's the tune of Strange দ্বারা Tokio Hotel btw.
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I do write a lot of poems as well so my songs are very poetc. It was pretty hard to describe him, I had to find the perfect words. I think I did a good job with that. :)
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BlondLionEzel said:
Nice :)
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Thanks!
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