Gra: What do u think of my story?

Name: Gra the Hedgehog (short for "gravity")
Age: 20
DOB: 8/13/1990
Siblings: Shock
Eye color: Blue
পশম color: Red
Wears: White gloves, and red shoes with a vertical stripe
Powers: Gravity
Abilities: He can turn gravity off in a certain spot. And flip the direction of gravity where ever he wants

Gra (pronounced like "grey") is Shock's "older brother." He and Shock are best friends. His family was very close to Shock's family. In Shock's prequel story "Shock & Kyle," Shock's parents died, and Shock had to live with Gra and his family.

Sadly, Gra witnessed Shock turn evil a week after his parents death. Him and Kyle the Hedgehog (an experimental life-form created 200 years in the future) set off to rescue Shock from Malice, the one killed Shock's parents.

He is also very protective of Shock mostly because they were good friends. And when Shock's parents died, Shock was no longer just his friend--he became his little brother. But Gra did have a little brother: Jeremy, who was the same age as Shock. But he died because of Malice, and when he and Shock became brothers, he had his mind set on protecting Shock from anyone who'd wanna hurt him.