ok...i give trying 2 type it as a story...now ill just use as a paragraph...still 1st person though...hope u like it ^_^
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Well....my life was no real walk in the park...in fact...i hated it. My dad Rider the নেকড়ে was a villian...and might still b...i dont even know if hes still even alive. Truthfully? i dont really care either way. I HATED it when he forced me 2 watch as he torchured people...but i did as he told me....if i didnt i was treated just bad as his prisoners...i BECAME a prisoner. But my life changed when a lil spy girl got caught...thats when EVERYTHING changed 4 me....
flashback
I sigh looking out of the little window in my cell...i disobayed Rider again....my dad.
"Tempest! Get out here NOW!"
i wonder what it is now? I run out of my room and over 2 him. "yes dad?"
"see the cat in the net?"
I look over at a red cat that has 2 b only like 10ish. "....yes...."
"kill her."
i seen THAT comming.... i look over at the girl again and i can c her looking at me.
"............." the girl tips her head 2 the side.
I look at her 1 আরো time, "i cant....."
Rider snickers, "i knew u wouldnt have the backbone!" he takes his pistal out of its holister.
I look away and i hear a gun shot.
"that took care of the lil spy pest! now take her out back! ill deal w/ u l8r"
I lower my gaze b4 nodding. Out of the corner of my eye i c Rider walk away. I look back at the girl who is only a few years younger then me. "im sorry..." I pick her up after i take her out of the net and i feel a heartbeat...its weak but its there. I run outside as smoothly as i can and i set her down gently. how can she still b alive!!? its so close 2 her heart....
"ugh......" the girl groans.
I snap out of it and i look at the place i grew up...and i deside 2 leave with her. I pick her up again and i run with her as far as i can.
A long time passes b4 shs comes out of her coma...its been months and i wonder if she will ever wake up...
"ugh...my...everything..." the lil red cat groans.
I bolt up right from where i am leaning against a tree* "ur awake!"
"Barley...ugh... where am i?"
"somewhere far away from my father...promise"
"r father....?" her eyes grom big, "I REMEMBER! owwww...." she rubs her temple, "my job was 2 free the daughter of Rider the Wolf...but i got caught...and....and...." she gulps not saying any more.
"its alright...ur ok now" i put my hand on her shoulder, "and im his daughter...so u succeded"
she sighs, "i guess so..." she looks down at her chest and pulls the মণ্ডল of her শার্ট down a lil and sees the bullet scar. "........man...."
"it was a close 1 cat girl...but i managed 2 keep u alive"
"thanks...and my names Ember not 'cat girl'"
"oh...sorry Ember"
"its ok...and thanks 4 savin my life....er?"
"Oh! im Tempest" i hold my hand out 2 Ember.
"nice 2 meet u Tempest," Ember takes and shakes her hand.
Flashback Ends
Thats my story...and how i meet my first and best friend Ember...its been 6 years sence that দিন but im sure neither of us forgot
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Well....my life was no real walk in the park...in fact...i hated it. My dad Rider the নেকড়ে was a villian...and might still b...i dont even know if hes still even alive. Truthfully? i dont really care either way. I HATED it when he forced me 2 watch as he torchured people...but i did as he told me....if i didnt i was treated just bad as his prisoners...i BECAME a prisoner. But my life changed when a lil spy girl got caught...thats when EVERYTHING changed 4 me....
flashback
I sigh looking out of the little window in my cell...i disobayed Rider again....my dad.
"Tempest! Get out here NOW!"
i wonder what it is now? I run out of my room and over 2 him. "yes dad?"
"see the cat in the net?"
I look over at a red cat that has 2 b only like 10ish. "....yes...."
"kill her."
i seen THAT comming.... i look over at the girl again and i can c her looking at me.
"............." the girl tips her head 2 the side.
I look at her 1 আরো time, "i cant....."
Rider snickers, "i knew u wouldnt have the backbone!" he takes his pistal out of its holister.
I look away and i hear a gun shot.
"that took care of the lil spy pest! now take her out back! ill deal w/ u l8r"
I lower my gaze b4 nodding. Out of the corner of my eye i c Rider walk away. I look back at the girl who is only a few years younger then me. "im sorry..." I pick her up after i take her out of the net and i feel a heartbeat...its weak but its there. I run outside as smoothly as i can and i set her down gently. how can she still b alive!!? its so close 2 her heart....
"ugh......" the girl groans.
I snap out of it and i look at the place i grew up...and i deside 2 leave with her. I pick her up again and i run with her as far as i can.
A long time passes b4 shs comes out of her coma...its been months and i wonder if she will ever wake up...
"ugh...my...everything..." the lil red cat groans.
I bolt up right from where i am leaning against a tree* "ur awake!"
"Barley...ugh... where am i?"
"somewhere far away from my father...promise"
"r father....?" her eyes grom big, "I REMEMBER! owwww...." she rubs her temple, "my job was 2 free the daughter of Rider the Wolf...but i got caught...and....and...." she gulps not saying any more.
"its alright...ur ok now" i put my hand on her shoulder, "and im his daughter...so u succeded"
she sighs, "i guess so..." she looks down at her chest and pulls the মণ্ডল of her শার্ট down a lil and sees the bullet scar. "........man...."
"it was a close 1 cat girl...but i managed 2 keep u alive"
"thanks...and my names Ember not 'cat girl'"
"oh...sorry Ember"
"its ok...and thanks 4 savin my life....er?"
"Oh! im Tempest" i hold my hand out 2 Ember.
"nice 2 meet u Tempest," Ember takes and shakes her hand.
Flashback Ends
Thats my story...and how i meet my first and best friend Ember...its been 6 years sence that দিন but im sure neither of us forgot
Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of আপনি are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give উপদেশ in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when আপনি bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot আপনি then telport আপনি inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B আপনি JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no আপনি never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we প্রদর্শনী ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do আপনি want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when আপনি bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot আপনি then telport আপনি inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B আপনি JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no আপনি never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we প্রদর্শনী ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do আপনি want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
Lukky, She was kind,smart,energetic and mature for her age.
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She ব্যক্ত softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They ব্যক্ত "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was অথবা were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get প্রথমপাতা ASAP."
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She ব্যক্ত softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They ব্যক্ত "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was অথবা were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get প্রথমপাতা ASAP."