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First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu অথবা Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If আপনি don't know the whole issue, here's some প্রশ্ন I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...

Demons,Soldiers,Helicopters,Jets,Tanks,A burning City,A Lightning Demon,And Typhoon's Group.

That's just GRRREEEAATTT isn't it?

Typhoon,Slahsing Demons left from right,Running across the Hellish City,Then he jumped and kicked down another Demon and slashed it's head off.

Haze,Being the Swords man he is,Cut down every last Demon he saw,He chopped off the legs of the one in front of him,and Stabbed his face.

Nocturn,With his Shotgun,Walked down the street,And continued to shoot down every Demon,He put a shot gun up to a Demon's face and shot it clean off.

Mother,Being the most Ferocious,Ripping apart...

As the শিয়াল noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a মাস ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. একপ্রকার গায়ক পক্ষী inhabits it.Dr. একপ্রকার গায়ক পক্ষী was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the শিয়াল wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very শীর্ষ of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young শিয়াল knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...

Freedom fighters Jaxik the Panda and Lellian the নেকড়ে set off to find Robotnik at Knothole and disable his bots which will ensure safety to all animals.
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Jaxik the Panda and Lellian the নেকড়ে were walking through their village. "It's clean." Jaxik said. He was searching for Robotnik's badniks. "You sure?" Lellian asked. "Pff... No." Jaxik said. "When can we EVER be sure?" Lellian worried. She took a ছুরি out. "SHOW YOURSELVES!" she yelled. "The whole village is empty, it seems." Jaxik said. "Robuttnik is definitely up to something." Lellian turned her head back to Jaxik. "Uh, WHAT did you...

Character Chart
Character's full name: Ningizzida the Hedgehog.
Reason অথবা meaning of name: Named after the Assirian god of snakes and serpents, unknown why.
Character's nickname: Giz.
Reason for nickname: One of his alleys started calling him that for awhile, but it never
really stuck. Ningizzida prefers his whole name.
Birth date: Unknown.

Physical appearance
Age: Ancient.
How old does he/she appear: 18-22.
Weight: Around 85 lbs.
Height: 3"8
Body build: Slender, sleek, and built for speed and agility over power. Has well develouped
calf muscles.
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Blood red, with...

Bullet found himself dozzing off while he worked on the shack for Maiyumi. 'Why am i even doing this for?' He thought. 'i barely even like her! i guess snice Bloosom will being staying here too i might aas well do the best i can for her at least.' Izzy climbed up to the roof where Bullet was. "hey how's it hanging?" she asked. "okay iguess. i had to work like this when i was eight for my first gruadian and i hated him আরো then i hate Maiyumi." Bullet repeiled. "Why do আপনি hate her anyways?" Izzy asked. Bullet put down the hammer and took the nails out of his mouth. "Well i kinda like her but...

“… There might have been a time when আপনি actually thought about others, but now it’s just become, ‘Get the villain out of the way and be proclaimed as a hero once more!’ I just don’t want আপনি to become something that আপনি don’t want to be.” – Lil the Cat from “The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul.”

Do আপনি remember the first time আপনি ever drew your অনুরাগী character? When আপনি created him/her, আপনি had thought everything out; who they dated, what they wore, and if they had any powers. Believe me when I say that অনুরাগী characters are the best characters in the world. Their stories...

Garinina's POV

I stared at the young woman, thoughts running through my mind. How did she obtain that bruise on her forehead...when she is facing up? There is no obvious evidence that she hit her head on the tub. Unless...she was moved or...she didn't die in the bath.

I stared long and hard at the rather large bruise on her forehead, and I noticed something was not normal about it.

I touched her forehead, it felt unusually hard. It did not feel like skull. Curious, I pulled out a scalpel and began slowly cutting the skin of her forehead; this earned a surprised and sickened gasp from my new...

    Once we saw that there was another Earthquake around, we decided to find out what was going on. “I can’t believe that there is another me out there.” Earthquake mused.
    “At least we know it isn’t you.” I said.
    “Maybe there’s only a double of আপনি and Scorch.”
    “Maybe, and maybe not, Blaster.” Earthquake said.
    I bet there is another Blaster out there. I thought. I started to walk away when Earthquake and Blaster came and followed me.
    As...

Chapter two: New living situation

Location: Mobius-zone-8, Faconicks, Meridona, North-Tropan, Gas-station

Date: Monday, March 10th, Second-Line-2101

Time: 2:32 P.M.


“This is… uh… well I guess I should just start a new one. My name’s Ni-… *sigh*. I’m Talon. I’ve been on the road for three to five days. I’ve been traveling with two অতিপ্রাকৃতিক mobians, like myself. A girl named Kal, who has a bunch of strange rings, and a living scarf… অথবা something, and an imploding dude named Jesse. We’re being chased দ্বারা some Overlander organization, and have lost… our loved ones in the process....

WINDY LOOKED DOWN AT her dearest freind; there was no way he was going to survive.
But Windy had to try.
The Tornado2 was losing altitude quickly, even though Tails was trying all he could. Windy kicked the arch window.
Once. Twice.
On the third kick a small crack opened.
She kicked once more.
The glass shatered. Tails looked back, but Windy was already gone. He couldn't stop her. He then saw one of eggman's mechs, and it was pointing the gun right at him.
"No, please!"
A Gunshot echoed through the air.
Windy payed it no mind. She was on full alert to find Spike. She hit the water. When she came back...

Chapter three: Messages Part two: Sender
Location: New Legion base
Date: Thursday, December 21st 4337
“…And আপনি are sure that the project made these events occur?” A tall echidna, wearing a sort of uniform asked, a hooded echidna, as they both walked through a string of dark hallways.
“Ahm certain, sir.” A Tocktin (Cockney British) accented echidna under the hood, answered. “Not only that, but my guess’is, that she does remembah one bloomin thing. I mean, being from that past world and all.”
“Indeed.” The taller one replied. “Well at least we still have that back-up Phantis...

(Authors note: technically, this is the beginning)
Shock, Silhouette, and V2 were all walking. The sun was bright and radiant, and everything was perfectly normal.
"Hey, Silly, your a robot, right?" asked Shock. Silhouette responded "Right.....?" "then how come আপনি can play in the snow? Its made of water. And your weak to water." ব্যক্ত Shock. V2 listened contently. Silhouette thought for a bit, "well, thats kinda complicated.....ya see....." Silhouette stopped dead in her tracks. Shock and V2 took 2 steps before realizing Silhouette wasn't walking with them anymore. She stood there, as if a statue....

"So, let me get this straight... আপনি broke the capsule... So I'm stuck with you... and you're my BROTHER?!" Shadow said. "Yeah, kinda. Isn't that just GREAT?!" Chris said, happilly. "OH GOD. This can't be." Shadow cried. "... আপনি don't seem happy." Chris said, confused. Shadow fell to his knees and started pulling on his chest পশম and shouting gibberish and a few cuss words. "Are আপনি okay???...." Chris said. A motobug came by. "Is he okay?" He asked it. It rolled away. He started to massage Shadow's shoulders. This made him আরো irritated. Shadow punched Chris away. "You seemed tense." Chris...