anybody willing to read my fanfics and leave constructive criticism?

i'm aspiring to be an লেখক someday so i start with লেখা fanfiction. i do write my own original stories, but i don't feel comfortable posting them on the internet just yet. but it'd be much appreciated if any of আপনি অতিপ্রাকৃতিক tv প্রদর্শনী অনুরাগী would read my fanfics & leave your reviews and মতামত about it!

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story 1:
Schizophrenia - "dean আপনি really are here, right?" "of course I am, why wouldn't I be?"
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story 2:
Destination Unknown - Kaz and Eva প্রণয় the tv প্রদর্শনী Supernatural. And দ্বারা love, they mean mildly obsessed. What happens when these two fangirls are somehow transported into the tv show? At least this universe is made up of hot boys - can't say so about their college, though.
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story 3:
Dear Dean - in which she writes him letters in hopes that he's still there. [ season 10 (may become slightly au since only a few episodes are out ] [ demon!dean ]
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story 4:
Calamitous - "what is depression like?" he asked, frowning. she sighed, "it's-it's like drowning. but আপনি can see everyone else around আপনি breathing." [castiel/oc]
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thanks again in advance! :-) i'd really appreciate feedback since i want to improve my লেখা skills