I need help লেখা a romance scene in my story!

ok, i can write almost anything but i have INSANE trouble লেখা romance scenes!! and its not even like a full romance scene! i just need to figure out how to word a simple, sweet, innocent চুম্বন between 2 of my characters without it being too boring! the characters both like eachother but they both are kind of shy. they are 14 and 15 years old. the story is told in 3rd person and the boy starts the kissing. PLEASE HELP!!!!!
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ellie_bellie135 said:
I'll be happy to help.
Could আপনি please message me with আরো details.
For now tho I would say something like...
He leaned অগ্রবর্তী and their lips thouched. Her scalp tingled as she felt his nervous hand run up her arm to rest on her neck. They felt so close. The moment was perfect. They were happy. Etc. I don't know. Is that too cliche অথবা intense? It really depends. I hope I can help.
Let me know :)
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'They grinned shyly?'
ellie_bellie135 posted বছরখানেক আগে
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wow that is really good!!
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