I need some serious help!

How can i make my stories less complex?
Everything i write have about 100 layers and my "teacher" keeps telling me that i need to make it simpler....

How can i do that? Please tell me everything আপনি can think of!

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ruby1000 said:
Ok so I am going to try and answer this as best i can (its a hard Q.)....

So usually in লেখা levels connect, something that happens seemingly meaningless at the start of the story comes back at the end অথবা middle. If আপনি try and find the layers that connect আপনি can cut them (2 অথবা more) out without rupturing the story line.

Planning might also help. If আপনি plan the layers at the start then আপনি don't get the end and have to (try) cut something out. If আপনি plan the layers at the beginning then আপনি also don't have the chance of adding আরো in from the original idea.

Hope this helps....
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bri-marie said:
Hm, this is a complicated question, because আপনি would go about it differently for each story. Since I don't know anything about your story, I can't give আপনি specific examples.

Sit down and look at what আপনি have, and I mean really look. Is there anything that doesn't add to the conflict, plot, অথবা general story arc?

Also, talk to your teacher. See what he/she thinks is so complex about your stories. What he/she thinks maybe completely different from what আপনি think.
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writer67 said:
youve got so much to say its almost bursting, the teacher doesnt want to be inthralled দ্বারা your stories; your good, but- teacher got to work on the other হারিয়ে গেছে sheep,mmm simpler sucks,= that wouldnt sell! [and your in training!!!!!!!] will a note from Saint Nick help? id allow your 100 pages, the rest in colour ha he hi ho hu later;-}
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