Does this story plot sound good, would it have to be seperated into a series and help with the title?

Mechnia is a far away planet made up of cyborgs, who on the outside look human. For years, two factions have been at war with each other for the ancient artifact, The Leader's Key (I still haven't thought up of a good name for the thing). The Eliters to protect it. The Cryptics trying to steal it, and use it to make the whole of Mechnia fall before them. In a last attempt to save the artifact, they eject it off to space, along with The Chosen who was yet to awaken to protect it, to a place only the Eliter Council knows. However, 5 years later, news comes that the Cryptics have since started searching the galaxy for it, and won't stop till they found it. In an attempt to save their planet, maybe even the whole galaxy. The Elite High Command start searching for The Leader's Key and The Chosen to protect it. However in an ambush দ্বারা the Cryptics themselves, as a last resort. They send a small group of mere machine repairers ahead to the place were the Eliter VS Cryptic war shall rage on until it's finished. Earth.
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Thanks to those who do help!!!
gravity12 posted বছরখানেক আগে
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আপনি can also help come up with a better name for The Leader's Key if you're like me. আপনি think the name is just stupid.
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I like the idea, however the leader's key does sound slightly lame, but i can't really think of any ideas as to what a good name for it would be, what is it exactly, then maybe i can help further
Buddy8fnj posted বছরখানেক আগে
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I knew there was other people like me who thought the name was lame! Well, আপনি can help if you're ready for a loonnnggg explanation on what it is. Because it will last awhile
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Idunn said:
It sounds good, but i dont like aliens and things like that. The শিরোনাম could be : "The long way home."
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Vampiyaa said:
for the Leader's Key name, we'll need a bit আরো information to answer that. The name sounds sort of impressive to me, but it's your decision. What we need is some elite background information on what EXACTLY the Leader's Key is.
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tdafan121 said:
It sounds pretty good. The name for the Leader's Key actually sounds fine as is. As for শিরোনাম suggestions:

In A World...
OR
Leader's Key

I know, lame names. Hope I helped, though!
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SickMuse said:
I think the story is perfect. And আপনি should keep it as 1 part just to keep the magic and emotion. Like they say "good things come in small packages" ;)

PS: I'm such a mess for বই names. But I think It would be something that contains the whole central idea, আপনি know.
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