Would আপনি read a story like this?

I desperatly want to write a story, I like fantasy/children বই mostly just because they are আরো entertaining and that is what I am going for in this story, please truthfully tell me what আপনি think and if I should add more.

There is this girl named Aquata. She is about 18-20 and still lives with her parents. There are a lot of scenes where she is দিন dreaming অথবা just plain dreaming. In her dreams she is a princess that has a beautiful world she owns. She has a bad দিন one দিন and so she just starts driving, not knowing where she will end up, but hopes it will lead her to a new future. She ends up finding her dream world at the end.

This could possibly be a series if I can think of আরো ideas! Thanks for your support! Also... I need to figure out a title??? What do ya'll think?
 spongesrule posted বছরখানেক আগে
next question »

লেখা উত্তর

Insight357 said:
It sounds great, but I don't see where the problem in the story is...You should spend a little আরো time coming up with a problem so it will be আরো interesting.
select as best answer
posted বছরখানেক আগে 
*
I was acctually thinking of the same thing! Thank আপনি for your support!
spongesrule posted বছরখানেক আগে
*
i agree. Might help doing a brainstorm a large piece of paper and go from there! Good luck with your story!
Faith-Rulz posted বছরখানেক আগে
RiderOfTempest said:
I totally would, but আপনি gotta remember to keep the readers on their toes...throw some obsticles in there too...like in her dream world she could have...evil, trying to take over অথবা something like that... :]
select as best answer
posted বছরখানেক আগে 
*
That is a wonderful idea! Thank you!
spongesrule posted বছরখানেক আগে
next question »