write a poem অথবা some sad thing but IT HAS TO RHYME !

mine :
" Depression is when আপনি hate everyone around
Depression is when আপনি don't want to make a sound
Depression is when all আপনি want to do is cry
Depression is when আপনি feel like you’re dying inside
Depression is when your thoughts wonder all the time
Depression is when আপনি can't sleep even though you’re tired
Depression is when আপনি don't want to go on
Depression is when আপনি can't stop shaking outside
Depression is when আপনি hide who আপনি are
Depression is when আপনি put on a mask to hide what আপনি feel
Depression is when আপনি feel weak all the time
Depression is when আপনি give in to everything around
Depression is when আপনি don't care what happens anymore
and is just another দিন in my life ... so lets take a ছুরি ... "
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FeelmySwagger said:
I feel weird in a world unknown
I pray to my savior in different a tone
how i hate living and just want to end it
but am still held back with accomplishing it
''ur just beginning'' he says
dont follow that outer voice astray
it leads to oblivion
i keep on opening like an onion
I find truth in His words
as i heal i feel their words like swords
poking me inside
still He will not leave me aside
i keep on rising and rising
and now I sing


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the sing thing was totally যেভাবে খুশী
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kk
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*best answer*
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hobbit1121 said:
The dark ground is stained red
Where all the ব্রেভ soldiers bled
Their weapons were useless
The enemy was ruthless
All those tears were in vain
The men knew death was release from the pain
On their graves the poppies grow
And to this দিন they still blow
The soldiers are at peace
As they knew the enemy's আগুন did cease
To this দিন we pray for them
And we know their souls are as priceless as gems
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Wow. That really was sad.
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POPclogger216 said:
সারমেয় dying*
Kids lying**
Girlfriends crying***
I, myself sighing.****











































*Their পশম blue: It's the new brown.
**On the ground, laughing their heads off at a joke
***for joy, seeing that their boyfriend just proposed to them.
***** Because i can't make a sad poem to save my life.
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That was really funny! I can't write sad either. :)
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the same here :D
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melidogs said:
Birds fly up so gentle
like a feather on the breeze
Like the rain that falls so softly
like the snow up to my knees

What is their inspiration?
How do they find their soul?
And nothing but their smile
Is gonna make me whole.

Some দিন I will do my best
While looking to the sky
I'll find my হৃদয় once hidden,
Grow my wings and fly.
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প্রণয় it:);):];] I also❤smilies!!!!
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thanks! :D
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4422 said:
Super sick
i hate the way i feel cos im sick
i cant eat, i cant drink my mouth stinks.
Mum force me to go eat,
but im not fit...
Crazy fever, when will u leave
wen its sunny u make me shake
my leg shake, my head aches
i cant think, im now thin
my eyes hurts n guess what
im now blind, i cant see wen u stand ..
So Dear God, i need my health back!

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wow thats good thx for answering !
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0_0 rubbish
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i wrote rubbish
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Lady_Rebel said:
Bravery

Standing in the light
Looking at the night
What is your fright?
The feeling that my path is not right.

Do আপনি keep going?

Standing still as the dead
Looking at the names of the dead
What do আপনি dread?
I fear the fatality of death.

Do আপনি continue?

When আপনি are faced with the grave
And yes, off course in the night
And ফ্রোজেন with terror,
If আপনি keep going through the fright
We will name আপনি “brave”.

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not really sad...
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wow thats good thx for answering !
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kk
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DarkCEpitome said:
Suddenly, the rod breaks and pierces her
Blood of my dreams splatters on the wall
The pieces of her hang in the air
Shards of her, where she looks out and stares
Watches her pieces dance all about
And when each little piece breaks off, the shard
shall give out a shout
Yes, the girl watches herself
She watches them all
Then briskly and briefly wonders
why the torn, broken pieces of her
strangely never fall...
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Sorry if it doesn't make too much sense....I just got over having writer's block, I'm slowly getting back to the whole turn of things :(
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wow thats good thx for answering !
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That was cool
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