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I don't think there is a tomorrow
My face is wet
My eyes are puffy
My nose is runny

Yesterday a best friend just dumped me,
Now what will come next?
She dumped me to be with thee,
I am overcome with horror and despair

Yesterday a boy just broke up with me
Now what will come next?
He left me to be with thee
I am now crying alone

What will tomorrow bring?
I suppose
Cloudy days and troubles
Nothing will lift my spirits up
Because I have left আপনি for good.