I would like some feedback on my story.

( link ) This is the link to my story on deviantART. I know that vampire literature is very much in the spotlight at the moment, but I would greatly appreciate opinions on my style. My inspiration comes from the works of Anne Rice, and I have tried very hard to recreate the language of 19th century London. Please read the prologue and the other two chapters.
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New chapters are added from time to time
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vampiregrrl999 said:
Wow! This is frickin awesome! I don't know how else to put it! Keep writing!!!
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Thank আপনি very much. I will continue to write. It just takes a very long time to form a chapter to a standard that I'll accept.
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1-2vampire said:
Yes the vampire literature is very জনপ্রিয় at the moment, mainly because of Twilight, people are looking for আরো vampire novels. I don't like Twilight, but I used to, and even though I'm ashamed to say it, it got me into vampires. I've got two shelves on my bookshelves full of vampire novels. (apart from one, I admit) But I'm লেখা about ভ্যাম্পায়ার right now as well, but as long as the plot's unique, it doesn't matter. (: L.G Smith has written tonnes of vampire novels -- Vampire Diaries, Night World. What I mean is it doesn't matter whether অথবা not vampire novels are popular, they are still read.
This is very very good, atually. I প্রণয় your style. It's amazzzing (: keep it up.
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Thank you! Yes I was also a অনুরাগী of twilight, but there are far greater things than that! I just wish আরো people would see that.
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TeamRosalieHale said:
Wow amazing! I hope আপনি keep up the work as it is incredible and I can't wait to see what comes next.
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There will be more. Thanks for reading.
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micahfemale said:
...it's so boring ...come on dude ...well, it's hell better than twilight ..but that's not saying something ...twilight makes fun of itself....
it's okay ...but it's damn short ...maybe add some details ...or something ...
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