A song I wrote, It`s my first lemme know if it`s any good...thank you:D

I walked my way, while আপনি stood near,
I try to not look at আপনি that way.
Y`know it`s a free country, no need to blame
yourself; for the troubles he caused and your pain. (oh no way, no way)

Your blue eyes glisten with sad tears,
I`m afraid that`s the same I`ve seen the past years,
your golden locks, blow at the docks
as you, just sit দ্বারা and watch
No nothings happening, oh nothings happening...

Your পালঙ্ক is the same, the way আপনি left it
so tattered, so worn I can smell it.
The sweet cologne আপনি spray in the morning,
Is covered with the musk and dust and everything that follows.

He will not kill আপনি অথবা your soul,
He`s a killer আপনি were a fraud,
No other way to say it.
It came with a smile it then left with a cry
and that`s when আপনি say, nothings happening
No-ooo nothings happening.

If only আপনি realised,
your team mourns in pain
why did আপনি be so selfish?
Yea sure a gun is a gun,
and a ছুরি is a ছুরি and you
didn`t care at all.
It`s just a gun after all,
It`s not gonna hurt you...

So tell me this, and tell me the truth I need to know the logic,
So why did আপনি leave and drag us to hell,
without saying sorry.
Ofcourse nothings happening, no nothing ever happens,
আপনি just dragged us to hell with you...
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Well আপনি liked? maybe আপনি didnt lemme know please! Its called nothings happening and I will give আপনি a 2 শ্রদ্ধার্ঘ্য if আপনি can guess what couple its based around and 1 if আপনি know what প্রদর্শনী it is:)



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It's pretty good :)
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it is good but i agree with amethyst44... we need to know tunes and tempo and that kind of thing to get better feel of it.... i loved it all the same though, congrads Jisbonessed!!!!!! x
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amethyst44 said:
oh i can't guess what প্রদর্শনী its from অথবা what couple, but this is good. it'd be great to know how the tempo goes so that i can get a better feel for the song, but i think this is an awesome start. keep at it. :D
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Heyy thanks guys! Well it was based around Jane and lisbon from the mentalist!
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Maachi said:
I প্রণয় the words!
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