this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good অথবা not before I জমা করুন it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear প্রণয় আপনি once were a shining ray.
In my eyes আপনি meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about আপনি is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your প্রণয় is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our প্রণয় is coming to its new close.
রঙ were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would প্রণয় to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our প্রণয় has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our প্রণয় left it took আপনি along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying প্রণয় was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me প্রণয় would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear প্রণয় আপনি once were a shining ray.
In my eyes আপনি meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about আপনি is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your প্রণয় is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our প্রণয় is coming to its new close.
রঙ were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would প্রণয় to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our প্রণয় has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our প্রণয় left it took আপনি along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying প্রণয় was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me প্রণয় would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
Prologue Look at the world, yeah go on and look at it. Now tell me, What do আপনি see? Home? Life? Secrets? Death? Anything? Well most people always see it differently. But they never see what’s right in front of them.
When আপনি look at the world আপনি always see the small things. আপনি never see the big obvious things that lurk in the shadows of every dark corner .
Well some of us see it, others… don’t. You’d be surprised দ্বারা ever secret, every hidden thing yet to be discovered… অথবা never will.
And I know we shouldn’t be telling you, but আপনি ought to know.
So look at the world, that’s right look at it. Because it’s going to change forever…
When আপনি look at the world আপনি always see the small things. আপনি never see the big obvious things that lurk in the shadows of every dark corner .
Well some of us see it, others… don’t. You’d be surprised দ্বারা ever secret, every hidden thing yet to be discovered… অথবা never will.
And I know we shouldn’t be telling you, but আপনি ought to know.
So look at the world, that’s right look at it. Because it’s going to change forever…
Okay this fits to be প্রবন্ধ worthy. I have this budding idea for a story about a girl named Skye(real named skylar) who discovers that she and her two বন্ধু are Sirens ( a different kind than আপনি think). They all have ibdividual powers like Skye can use other peoples power, Hazelle and Gabriel,s powers are conjuring আগুন and Hazelle can shapeshift objects. Their parents were বন্ধু and there dads, and hazelle and gabriel have one parent while skye has none, she lives with her aunt and she has this হারিয়ে গেছে sister who thinks she is a Siren but is their kinds' enemy. Meanwhile Hazelle and Gabriel are dating but skye and him are close because their moms were বন্ধু and wjen her parents died she lived with them for a while as kids. So eventually they like each other. This story is confusing and jeeds work but its what i have. Tell me should i tweek it অথবা leave it alone. Also give me insight into what to do to fix it. Thanks.
Falling...
Sometimes she’s down দ্বারা the river
অথবা other times দ্বারা her tree
Sometimes she thinks about the things she can never see
But when the rain falls down, she’d cry
There’s no reason why
She’s always walked alone
No one’s ever shared her ride
No one’s ever felt close to her, no one’s ever দ্বারা her side
She’s avoided দ্বারা everyone
And never has any fun
Now darkness is her favourite thing
She thinks there’s no hope
No on ever throws her a rope
When she’s falling…
Sometimes she’s down দ্বারা the river
অথবা other times দ্বারা her tree
Sometimes she thinks about the things she can never see
But when the rain falls down, she’d cry
There’s no reason why
She’s always walked alone
No one’s ever shared her ride
No one’s ever felt close to her, no one’s ever দ্বারা her side
She’s avoided দ্বারা everyone
And never has any fun
Now darkness is her favourite thing
She thinks there’s no hope
No on ever throws her a rope
When she’s falling…
