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We've all been there.

We've all seen it (at least once).

Perhaps even committed the "easy" crime.

আপনি know what I'm talking about.

"His cheeks were red with embarrassment."

"Anna checked the balance sheets again, coming to a conclusion the the financials were a deep crimson."

"I stared into his blue eyes as deep as the ocean."

Colors, like anything else, are powerful descriptive pieces. When used as a comparison অথবা a contrast, the reader is painted a picture of the person/object's look and the setting as a whole. It should make the scene come together in a seamless flow.

For example, the "red with embarrassment" idiom has... wore out its welcome if আপনি will. Many of us have seen this written and do আপনি ever wonder what else আপনি could describe embarrassment with?

Try this sentence.

"Our teacher announced Jake Foreman as the winner of the কবিতা contest. I had to nearly shove him out of the chair to get up to receive his award, standing up on shaky limbs. After he reached the teacher's ডেস্ক he grinned like crazy, cheeks brighter than the স্ট্রবেরি pendant he wore."

We see here that the red cheeks for embarrassment is a well known symbolism, but not one tied down to a specific idiom অথবা phrasing.

Also with colors, be careful not to mix too many contrasts as it may take away from the impact the color is describing.

From the blog WritersHelpingWriters:

"Once Wendy had loaded up at the buffet she sashayed to our table, smiling like she actually thought she belonged. She’d chosen a short ebony dress as her outfit this evening, which made her bloated white legs as appealing as soiled hospital linen."

What’s wrong with this example?

The emphasis is আরো on how the black স্কার্ট makes her legs look, rather than describe the স্কার্ট itself. If the black object is important, don’t let other things overrun the description.

Here's a stronger way to describe the skirt:

"Once Wendy had loaded up at the buffet she sashayed to our table, smiling like she actually thought she belonged. As she stood there balancing a heaped plate, I took a closer look at the ridiculous ebony dress encasing her chubby form. What was she thinking–a shiny number like that should make the wearer look sleek, not a dung beetle clinging to its precious meal."

Why is this example better?

It provides a simile that gives an apt image and also really says something about the nastiness of the person making the comparison.

Of course that's not to say that every single thing needs to have a specific detail on its looks, but it does invoke a stronger relation to the object and/or person one is trying to convey.
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It is considered wrong to judge someone just because of there disabilities. We might not bother them in a public place অথবা treat them unfairly socially, অথবা in the work place.

But there is a sense of discrimination for different types of disabilities. Many people with disabilities need things that we don't provide.

For example people with wheelchairs can't enter shops because there is no ramp for them to go up. The fact is that the person has no way of entering the shop. so in a way the ভান্দার is denying the person on the wheelchair service.

In many places it is considered illegal to deny someone...
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posted by InvadaMiz
"I need you." I quietly whispered, Ari looked at me with his wide green eyes. "I need আপনি Ari, we all need you." I ব্যক্ত as Carli and Marli started to cry. "You need no one, only yourself." Ari said, glaring. That peirced a hole right through my aching heart... "Maybe you're right." I mumured, I hated প্রদর্শিত হচ্ছে weakness infront of the group. Allina put her hand gently on my shoulder. "Ari, listen." She said.
Ari snarled, we backed away slightly.
"LEAVE ME ALONE!!!" He screamed, taking off down the sidewalk.
Psychiatrists. The one persona, the career that people can প্রণয় অথবা loathe আরো than the dentist অথবা doctor. They can be your best friend, worst enemy, অথবা a nuisance. Are all shrinks like that? No. Some people think of Bruce Willis' character in Sixth Sense as the shrink that helped Haley Joel Osmond overcome his fear of his own অতিপ্রাকৃতিক abilities. Some people may think of some older person that never really speaks, except for slight grunts and that annoying phrase,"Now, how does that make আপনি feel?" Usually, it makes the person feel like they should knock that guy on their গাধা and leave...
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It was the দিন to go back to good ole' NYC. Man, it's going to be so weird. The transitions from the actual jungle, to a city that everyone around calls "a jungle". Howl was sitting beside of me on the airplane. I put on my headphones, as he sat very adorable-like, looking all over at where he was going. I stroked his hair, assuring him everything is going to be okay. He smiled back at me and kissed me on the hand. I laid my head on his arm, as the plane took off.

Hours and hours went by. I felt exutiating pain in my butt from sitting too long. Even though it was a first class private airplane,...
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posted by Claudia4599
They always ব্যক্ত that I was a bit mad.

I guess that’s why I hear bumble bees and geckos talking to me, and not about allergies অথবা how to save money on my car insurance.

You see my dad and my mom is traveling the world for fun. My dad got me some teachers just for me so I won’t have to be in school with the normal kids. But I think it would be fun. I could have real বন্ধু instead of no one. Also I could also see some real doctors about some of the things that I think of. They are strange. My fathers doctors say that I am perfectly fine, don’t worry, mentally fine, ect., I don’t believe...
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posted by kateeuy
Jenny was a seventeen বছর old girl who lived in Sydney. One দিন her mother sent her to live with her Nan who lived in the country side.
When she arrived at her Nan’s house, she opened the boot of the car to get her bags out and she put them on the ground. Her aunty helped her take the bags to her room.

“We have a party to go to in an ঘন্টা so get freshened up so we are ready” ব্যক্ত her Nan.
“Ok. Thanks Nan” exclaimed Jenny.
When she arrived at the party she realised that it was only পরবর্তি door to her house. There were a lot of people there that she didn’t know, including a boy who looked...
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posted by pixie09
this is a story that i wrote for my practice বছর 12 exams, its theme was 'circle'
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The girl strode on, her ঘোমটা firmly over her head, her eyes fixed on the horizon. Around her, the cars grew less, but the trees grew plentiful. The orb-like moon rose steadily into the sky making visibility almost possible through the canopy of ever increasing leaves.

None of this mattered. The girl strode on, her face set, her one intention clear in her mind.

The বৃত্ত must have closure.

At this thought, the girl lengthened her stride, each step crunching the fallen,...
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posted by Ms_Montana
Spotlight

1. Kalte Pizza

Es war ein kalter und verregneter Tag im November. Manche Menschen bezeichneten diesen Regen sogar als Schnee, aber nicht so Helena. Sie war nicht der Typ Mensch der das alles beschönigte.
Während sie durch গর্ত voll gestopften U-Bahnsteig hetzte, kramte sie ihn ihrer Tasche nach ihrem Handy. Sie versuchte in dem Gedränge die Nummer ihrer Mutter zu tippen, jedoch ohne Erfolg.
Helena rollte genervt mit ihren Augen. Ihre Mutter hatte ihr gesagt sie müsse mittags ihre kleine Schwester Allison abholen. Und nur deswegen stand sie hier.
Links von ihr telefonierte ein schwer...
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posted by GreenLight24
 4444, Desperata Ave.
4444, Desperata Ave.
Author's Note: Well hello faithful readers and প্রেমী of লেখা alike! This is the sequel to the story "Blacktie." on this club. So, if u haven't read it, go ahead a check it out, as this requires some prior knowledge. If u have read it, then awesome! Revenge is a dish best served in a tuxedo! lol.

The nighttime air was calm and the sky was dyed with a deep and reflective blue-black shade. Blacktie was still giddy over the successful trial run of his mental recall technology. He brushed himself off lightly and straightened his bow tie as he began to walk down Meredith রাস্তা towards his final...
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love, a word that can bring much joy অথবা much pain
it can put the হৃদয় at ease অথবা under strain
and as that word to each other we spoke
it made our hearts complete and not broke

a feeling unlike any other i felt
as আপনি heavenly eyes made my হৃদয় melt
আপনি were always the one, i could tell
cause from the moment i saw আপনি in প্রণয় i fell

the words to describe আপনি a poet can never posses
আপনি were always the one that was hard to impress
আপনি wanted আরো than কবিতা and ফুলেরডালি could give
because only on true প্রণয় your হৃদয় could live

to capture my হৃদয় for আপনি it only took
one moment one smile and one unforgettable look
posted by BennieBear27
Protako
Prologue

There were at least 100 other children, including my brother, in the room. I saw two girls with light brown hair and green eyes stood a few feet away. One of them was clinging onto the other's arm.

"Jacob," I tugged my twin brothers arm. "Let's go say hi to those girls!" I pointed to them.

He nodded. We walked over to the girls.

"Hi!" Jacob ব্যক্ত to them. "I'm Jacob! This is my brother, Milo." I smile.

"Hi! I'm Luna." The girl in my right said. Her শার্ট was blue, whereas her sisters was red.

"I'm Kyla..." The girl who was clinging to Luna ব্যক্ত quietly. She didn't meet our eyes...
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posted by KatiiCullen94
my thoughts at the moment..

1.
i dont know what people see anymore.
i think আরো people decide what it is they really saw, jsut to make them feel better.
Because anything can be anything আপনি want it to be.

2.
i dont think আপনি relize it when your changing, because your always feeling normal, its takes someone to look at you, that someone doesn't have to know you, to tell আপনি your wrong about self.

3.
The biggest mistake আপনি can make it letting someone too close, because like newtons first law, one will continue to do whatever it is doing unless a force interuppts. That force can be anything....
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 Edgar Allen Poe - #1
Edgar Allen Poe - #1
Okay, so this is a countdown of my most পছন্দ authors of all time. It goes from igood #10 to magnficient #1.

I am also so happy for myself because this is technically my first work of লেখা that I will soon publish.....

Alright, here it is;

1. Edgar Allen Poe - He has had a rough life filled with death, grief, abandonment, and misery, and his ways to cope with these difficult emotions were his magnificent stories and peoms that we enjoy to this day. Also, he and I can relate...
2. Stephen King - He has this enigmatic personality that makes আপনি wonder and puzzle, and he's a bit of an oddball...
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