Killerbee21 (Doragon no O) –
Shikai:
1) How far away does it have this effect? At further ranges, does it still cause damage?
2) How fast does it launch? Does it still act as flames without burning? Do they spread like flames? Can they be put out like flames? How fast does the blast move at range? How quickly does it burn away energy? How quickly does it eat away at zanpakuto?
3) So they just have to look directly at the sword for this to happen?
4) Which physical objects can it burn through? Do these spread like normal flames?
Bankai:
1) What rate are we talking about? And how does it affect? Is it just from touch, or do the flames have to touch and spread across the area, or do attacks have to land? It can’t be unlimited, otherwise one touch would remove all of their energy, which is pretty overpowered. For both Yin and Yang, you have to provide some limitation and more explanation.
2) So does this shot home in on the opponent, or does it just shoot linearly out of the wielder’s hands? How fast does it move? How large is it? Does this cause similar damage to each individual flame, or is it enhanced? How often can it be fired?
3) Automatically overpowered. Any ability that has no way out and absolutely certain death is going to be overpowered, and this seems to be that kind of ability. If there’s no way for him to fight off the dragons in your inner world, he might as well have died just from entering the black hole. This either has to be extremely hard to get opponents to go into, or there has to be a way to win the internal fight that is somewhat reasonable.
Shikai:
1) How far away does it have this effect? At further ranges, does it still cause damage?
2) How fast does it launch? Does it still act as flames without burning? Do they spread like flames? Can they be put out like flames? How fast does the blast move at range? How quickly does it burn away energy? How quickly does it eat away at zanpakuto?
3) So they just have to look directly at the sword for this to happen?
4) Which physical objects can it burn through? Do these spread like normal flames?
Bankai:
1) What rate are we talking about? And how does it affect? Is it just from touch, or do the flames have to touch and spread across the area, or do attacks have to land? It can’t be unlimited, otherwise one touch would remove all of their energy, which is pretty overpowered. For both Yin and Yang, you have to provide some limitation and more explanation.
2) So does this shot home in on the opponent, or does it just shoot linearly out of the wielder’s hands? How fast does it move? How large is it? Does this cause similar damage to each individual flame, or is it enhanced? How often can it be fired?
3) Automatically overpowered. Any ability that has no way out and absolutely certain death is going to be overpowered, and this seems to be that kind of ability. If there’s no way for him to fight off the dragons in your inner world, he might as well have died just from entering the black hole. This either has to be extremely hard to get opponents to go into, or there has to be a way to win the internal fight that is somewhat reasonable.