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Here's the poem. What do আপনি think?

প্রণয় me...
Don't...
Hate me...
Don't...
Touch me...
Don't...
Hurt me...
Don't...
Save me...
Don't...
Rape me...
Don't...
It's the same now,
whenever i see the emptiness
in your eyes,
this coldness in your eyes
is killing me,
but your hands are still warm...
And i know,
oh i know my হৃদয় still
belongs to you,
and আপনি hate me,
oh আপনি hate it...
আপনি hate my pure love,
but your hands are still warm...
And i want you,
oh i still want you,
but i'm scared,
oh i'm scared,
and now i see,
oh i see the emptiness in your eyes,
this coldness in your eyes
is killing me,
but আপনি don't care,
you'll tear my soul over and over again,
and আপনি hate me,
oh আপনি hate me,cause i প্রণয় আপনি so,
oh i hate my pure love,
and you're smiling to my pain,
and now i see the emptiness
in your eyes,
but your hands are still warm...
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wow chick, that is AMAZING! Did আপনি write that?
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CullenProperty said:
I প্রণয় it, really. It could also be a song, ya know? It has the rhythem and all that. Do আপনি sing? Except, if it was a song, it might sound better if আপনি take out the "Don'ts" and just like whisper the first parts; "Love me, Hate me..." That'd be cool.
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Thanks.... Well,no,i can't sing... হাঃ হাঃ হাঃ
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Yeah that would b amazing
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yup ;)
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EalasaidWooster said:
I like it, it's very good! :)
It has a lot of deep emotions -very well expressed, দ্বারা the way!
And I like your use of repetition, it's really effective. :)
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Thank you... <3
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Your welcome! x)
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UriahA said:
Nice
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Thanks a lot.
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yoshifan1976 said:
Very cool poem :D
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reesesdog said:
nice

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inexplicable said:
It´s very good and... deep.
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Yeah,it is... Thanks...
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orangeturnip said:
its cool ..
i think there is something special about poems
আপনি get a snapshot of your subconscious...

thanks for the poem ... i beleve tha was from the heart.
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RanmaRaj said:
O My God
You're awesome
Thats such a sweet song
Really হৃদয় touchin
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Twilight_Dream said:
really insightful! i liked it a lot. it could also be a song. it sounded আরো like a song to me. and im actually already making up a tune to it.
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highlife said:
wow its well written
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Thanks... <3
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Funnygirl77 said:
That was deep I loved it
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Spi_Kat_Penguin said:
I am zoned, like i'm transported 2 where......idk, its beautiful.

-Spi
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