ok new art question.what about this one?

of i did color this XD

Work on the hands. The shading isn't that good. Take a calligraphy class(or buy a book) to learn how to properly write an এল-মৃত্যু পত্র in Old english text font. The eyes are too far apart and L's hair is too bushy. It needs to be spiky. The টেবিল doesn't go to any vanishing point so it looks disfigured a bit. Work on adding depth to your drawings. It's not good but it's not bad. Practice, আপনি will get better.

thank for the adivse