New "Breaking Dawn" Merchandising

Here is chapter 5. Rate it; let me know in a মতামত how it’s going so far. Apologies if there are any spelling errors, i rushed this one.

“Blair, wake up, আপনি need to go to school sweetheart, you’re already late”
I groaned my throat was dry; I slowly opened my eyes, remembering what happened last night.
“Oh dear, Blair, আপনি don’t look so good, are আপনি feeling sick?”
I tried to get out of bed, and had a massive headache, feeling dizzy; I tried to walk to the door falling over on my attempt.
“Blair, baby, I don’t think আপনি should go to school today, আপনি look sick, and আপনি can’t...

(chapter 1)
As i sat on the সৈকত in front of my house, listining to the wave's brush up on the sand and smelling the light saltly breeze that follows it. I let my mind wander from প্রশ্ন to question. What did he mean when we can't be near each other and why can't i see him anymore? it hurt so bad that i went blank. until i felt the cold rainy wind brush against my face. I finally stood up letting the sand squish between my toes. I sighed as i bent down to pick my shoes that were now covered in sand. I started up to my house.knowing that my mom went to go see my dad in some place that i don't...