it this ok (my mj poem)

in the literacy class আপনি had to make a poem about our পছন্দ artist. i suck at poems so i wanted to ask if this was ok it's ok if আপনি don't like it i'm just glade i was able to write a poem
it's called never forget
we miss আপনি everyday. Oh how people wish আপনি never went away. আপনি were one of the most precious gifts we'll ever know, but i guess it was your time to go. আপনি gave us years of beautiful music. that we'll always love, and we'll never forget that sparkly white glove. it's true আপনি were one of a kind. i'll never forget being six and watching আপনি moonwalk across a stage. i knew আপনি were extraordinary at the age. now years later আপনি are gone, but it's ok because everyone moves on to that better place. a place were আপনি don't have to deal with lies and hate. it's true আপনি will be strongly missed, becasue when michael jackson died the world cried, but we'll never forget