My first Niall poem, "Love Divided" - Tell me what আপনি think maybe? :3

Going somewhere,
Ending nowhere,
Where am I to go?
Wanting solitude,
Finding opposite,
Am I to walk alone?
You, there,
Across the field,
Of ফ্যান্টাসি and fame.
Where did আপনি come from?
How do I get to you,
Without crossing the flame?
আপনি appeared out of nowhere,
A তারকা suddenly born,
And I am drawn to your light.
But আপনি can't see mine,
Its too dim to shine,
Never seen in the night.
আপনি go on in life,
With it displayed to the world,
And mine displayed elsewhere.
আপনি go on without knowing,
That I am here, waiting for you,
That I am always there.
And wait I do,
For আপনি to see,
The imaginary girl who is always দ্বারা your side.
The one with the smile,
The one with the voice,
That you'll never seem to recognize.
So আপনি go on,
দিন after day,
With your lively life.
While I am stuck here,
Never near,
The one who seems to be my light.
Yes, that's right, আপনি are my light,
And shine bright, আপনি do.
Edges illuminated,
Flames engulfed,
For the one আপনি never knew.
When I am down,
And I listen to your soft melodic words,
Of carefully chosen wisdom.
I know that someday,
Deep in my heart,
My দিন will surely come.
আপনি bring me to my senses,
But আপনি drive me insane,
You, the boy who's on the edge.
But I am on the verge,
And আপনি bring me back from it,
Saving me from darkness.
আপনি make me feel free,
Like I am surely alive,
Like আপনি প্রণয় me with a burning passion.
But I am still a nobody,
Blending with the sea,
And I should just push past it.
But something about you,
Something I've never seen before,
Draws me to you.
And I smile in delight,
But frown in fright,
From how much I've fallen for you.
Though, why am I still nowhere?
Why am I alone?
Without you, I am lost.
Without you, I am unknown.

Sorry its so long and sorry if there's a typo. Please let me know what আপনি think of it :)