Is this a good poem and do আপনি think আরো could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke অথবা saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
আপনি had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
অথবা your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
আপনি ব্যক্ত it was akward
And that আপনি still প্রণয় me
But I think I pushed আপনি too far
What did I do
To make আপনি push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want আপনি in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for আপনি even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if আপনি want me back
Prove আপনি won't hurt me again
Never again আপনি will আপনি hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
আপনি fucked up