Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have আপনি ever been hurt দ্বারা the one আপনি love
Have আপনি ever wanteed to change
Who আপনি were, who আপনি are, who আপনি will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why আপনি have the life আপনি have
আপনি have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt দ্বারা the one one আপনি love
Have আপনি ever felt so betrayed
That আপনি wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a হৃদয় just দ্বারা saying "hello"

Have আপনি ever though আপনি had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have আপনি ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way অথবা another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








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BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write আরো poems because আপনি are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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