Shock the Dog প্রবন্ধ | Original প্রবন্ধ on ফ্যানপপ

posted by aly001

Star:is some thing wong?
Shock:nothing it's only that I'm tired!
Star:ok let's rest then!
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One super Emily min later!
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Shock:ok so how do we get to অ্যাঞ্জেল island?
Star:how should I know I'm only 6 years-old!
Shock:wow! I'm 11 years old.(or is he 10?)
Star:I think my uncle John lives here?
Shock:-_- omg!
Star:you do no that I can fight 2!
Shock:OK OK! Now let's go find your uncle!
And I will stop there! JK!
Star:ok!
One super Sonic min later!
Shock:it's getting late let's go and (yawns) sleep!
Star:(yawns too) ok.
So they left and whent to sleep some where. And I well stop there! Well that's all folks!

How তারকা & shock met part 1

posted by aly001

Star:(wakes up) um.... Where am I? (starts to walk around)
Shock:WOW this mexicin খাবার is great!
Star:Um hi my name is Star.
Shock:(turns around and sees her all wet) omg what to আপনি happen?!
Star:I.. I don't know?(eyes get watery)
Shock:don't cry! Please don't cry!
Star:Why?
Shock:ok let's just go and find some one who knows আপনি ok!
Star:ok.
One super shadow minit later!
Shock:do আপনি know some one who lives here?
Star:um no I live with my brother Jason.
Shock:ok where dose he live?
Star:On অ্যাঞ্জেল Island!
Shock:-_-'
Well I'm going to stop there see ya later!

Not hatin', just sayin'

posted by thetacoman

The Story
It's all very nice, Shock's gonna save teh world, even a little subplot with the whole 'JUDAS MALICE' thing.
Problem is, I've seen it before....
The Problem
NUMBAH ONE.
Shock is kinda a weird form of the Messiah.
All liek, 'WEWT, IMMA REDEEM THE WURLD =D'
Maybe আরো closely being related to Aang (it's AYNG, ban আপনি M. Night Shamalan. আপনি SCREWED UP THE SERIES AND I WILL FOREVER HATE YOU.)
Aang has been reborn countless times and stoof, and has epic powas to save teh world from the আগুন Lord.
And the whole, 'WHY, MALICE?! WHYYYY?!!!'
Ish overused -3-
Wouldn't the NAME Malice tip আপনি off, Shock?
[b]THANKS FOW READIN, THETACOMAN[/i]

Thunder Clouds Chapter 2

posted by -Wednesday-

when i awoke i was laying দ্বারা the shrine and the little dog boy wateva was sitting পরবর্তি to me he looked bout 5ish bout 3 years younger than me. "u almost died and stuff the বৃক্ষ was a falling on u but i saved u and u fainted and stuff" he ব্যক্ত he saved me? "um thank u" i ব্যক্ত "i dont think i herd yer name im Shock the dog and u r" he asked "im Princess Wednesday Shocker the hedgehog the princess of Lovana and ---" i ব্যক্ত but he cut me off "a princess?! wow thats so cool! i have never met a princess r u rich well of course u r heeey u live in the big দুর্গ across the রাস্তা from my house right?...

Thunder Clouds Chapter 1

posted by -Wednesday-

i woke up on morning to see a moving truck in a house across the রাস্তা from mine. well the দুর্গ i lived in and they were moving into a quite big house almost a mansion like one. and well from the window of my room i saw a little boy অথবা dog watever jump out of the moving truck he had black পশম with white designs on it and he had green eyes. he hopped up to the house and into the door. then one of the maids called "MISTRESS WEDNESDAY ITS TIME FOR BREAKFEST!!!" so i ran down the stairs to the dining hall.

my name is Princess Wednesday Jaxee Shocker III the hedgehog. im the princess of Lovana...

Shock the Dog

posted by ShadowFan100

Shock the Dog (not my art)

Full name: Duji Chandler Thomas
Full birth name: Duji Chandler Thomas
Nickname: Shock
Age: 11
Height: 3ft
DOB: 9/12/2000
Hometown: Freedom City
Siblings: Kori the Dog, Gra the Hedgehog, Andrea, Justin
Parents: Dead
Eyes: Green
Fur color: Black & white
Wears: red bandanna, white gloves with red designs on them. And red and white shoes.
Loves: Pizza, swimming, being a hero, his gf Aqua
Hates: Evil, Malice and Bounty Hunters
Top flying speed: 200mph
Power: Electricity
Abilities: He can strike his enemies with several lightning bolts from the sky. He can fly using his electrical powers, create an electrical...