I lay, dying, getting closer to death every tick of the clock. I was in pain. And then the shifts changed. I saw Carlisle come in. he talked to my mother, then wheeled her away. When he came back, he had an expression of determination on his face. He took me away to. I knew where we were going-the morgue. Yet I was not dead. I tried to speak, but I could not. SOmething told me that something terrible was about to happen. Yet I had no idea what was in-store for me.
We arrived. Carlisle's determination was replaced দ্বারা pain. I could only wonder why. Anad then he opened his mouth, and I felt a strange sensation on my neck. It took me a minutue to realize that he was biting me. And then the burning came. I screamed, never knowing anything like it before. He bit me again, my wrists, my ankles. I screamed again......before Carlisle picked me up with inhuman speed and ran to his house. I wondered what I was becoming. but i knew, it was like him. Not human. I waited, waiting for the pain to stop.
নমস্কার guys, how do আপনি like it. its going to be a story of Edwards past. Im a first time writer, so please give me feedback!
Thanks!!
Kirsty Ashton
We arrived. Carlisle's determination was replaced দ্বারা pain. I could only wonder why. Anad then he opened his mouth, and I felt a strange sensation on my neck. It took me a minutue to realize that he was biting me. And then the burning came. I screamed, never knowing anything like it before. He bit me again, my wrists, my ankles. I screamed again......before Carlisle picked me up with inhuman speed and ran to his house. I wondered what I was becoming. but i knew, it was like him. Not human. I waited, waiting for the pain to stop.
নমস্কার guys, how do আপনি like it. its going to be a story of Edwards past. Im a first time writer, so please give me feedback!
Thanks!!
Kirsty Ashton
Honestly, if আপনি were Stephanie Meyer, and আপনি were লেখা Breaking Dawn as we speak, how would আপনি write it, (write what আপনি really think will happen in the book) these things for example:
bella and edward get married
bella becomes a vampire
jacob comes back and splits bella and edward up forever, and he gets bella
fight between edward and jacob
jacob imprinting...
things like that
except in long details
হাঃ হাঃ হাঃ
its ok to get creative but keep to what আপনি think will really happen. not what আপনি hope but what আপনি think
i wonder how many people will say the same thing
i wonder what আপনি think.....
bella and edward get married
bella becomes a vampire
jacob comes back and splits bella and edward up forever, and he gets bella
fight between edward and jacob
jacob imprinting...
things like that
except in long details
হাঃ হাঃ হাঃ
its ok to get creative but keep to what আপনি think will really happen. not what আপনি hope but what আপনি think
i wonder how many people will say the same thing
i wonder what আপনি think.....