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posted by ellie_bellie135
When আপনি use greif in your লেখা it's very important আপনি get it right so here is a short প্রবন্ধ to help you.

Here is an extract from link

Grief is a somewhat commplicated and misunderstood emotion. Yet, grief is something that, unfortunately, we must all experience at some time অথবা other. We will all inevitably experience loss. Whether it is a loss through death, divorce অথবা some other loss, the stages of grieving are the same.

The five stages of grief are:

1-Denial-"this can't be happening to me", looking for the former spouse in familia places, অথবা if it is death, setting the টেবিল for the person অথবা অভিনয় as if they are still in living there. No crying. Not accepting অথবা even acknowledging the loss.


2-Anger-"why me?", feelings of wanting to fight back অথবা get even with spouse of divorce, for death, anger at the deceased, blaming them for leaving.


3-Bargaining-bargaining often takes place before the loss. Attempting to make deals with the spouse who is leaving, অথবা attempting to make deals with God to stop অথবা change the loss. Begging, wishing, praying for them to come back.


4-Depression-overwhelming feelings of hopelessness, frustration, bitterness, self pity, mourning loss of person as well as the hopes, dreams and plans for the future. Feeling lack of control, feeling numb. Perhaps feeling suicidal.


5-Acceptance-there is a difference between resignation and acceptance. আপনি have to accept the loss, not just try to ভালুক it quietly. Realization that it takes two to make অথবা break a marriage. Realization that the person is gone (in death) that it is not their fault, they didn't leave আপনি on purpose. (even in cases of suicide, often the deceased person, was not in their right frame of mind) Finding the good that can come out of the pain of loss, finding comfort and healing. Our goals turn toward personal growth. Stay with fond memories of person.



When আপনি write it's very important আপনি use these steps properly and in that order.
Thought it's very tempting to make your character angry, grief is আরো powerful than anger.
Though grief shouldn't be misused for minor things when anger would be আরো apropiate.

A good example of this, I think, is in Wolverine, when his wife was killed and he was instantly angry. I thought something was a bit off about it and that it was a bit cold and the reason for this was I don't think it was powerful enough. This is because anger was used when it should have been denial. And though it was well done, it could have been better if the writer had been আরো skillful when using grief. (I'm not bagging out Wolverine. It's one of my favortie movies. PLEASE DON'T SUE ME.)

I hope this will help to improve your writing.

Thank আপনি for reading.

Happy writing.
He smirked. “Hello Sadie” he sang, I closed my eyes and then opened them again, hoping I was going blind. I heard footsteps behind me and then a loud scoff. “What’re আপনি doing here?” Ethan asked, I opened my mouth to answer for Adam but was interrupted. “I came here to see Sadie” he said, I sighed. Ethan looked to me and gave me a look, one I noticed he used to give to me when we were kids and I had stolen his toy. “Is this true did আপনি ask him to come?” Ethan asked me, I shrugged. “I don’t think so” I told him, I heard Adam laugh. “I’m so glad this amuses you!”...
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"Okay Starr your message has been put through. The council and your parents will get it in time when আপনি get back," Whitney says on the phone.
I sigh in relief "That's good. Thanks whitney. দ্বারা the way how do আপনি like your new job? Councilman and messenger!" I gush
Whitney has been my friend since forever when we both finished college eight months পূর্বে we both got different jobs. I work as a time traveller recording things from the past.
"It's great Starr! I get paid a lot. How bout you?" she asks
"Well going back is great but some of the people back then are annoying. Well I got to get to...
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((I'm combining the first and সেকেন্ড chapters to make it long enough for the article. And I know my story starts slow, but please hang with me. I promise it gets আরো exciting))

Stewie (my little brother) and I found a new camp last night with other runaways. This was the biggest camp we've seen so far, but it's shelter, however temporary.

There were four people already here, plus Stewie and I, so we now have a camp of 6. There's Garret, who is my age, Mary, who is 16 and the twins, Eliza and Scott.

We are very well-supplied here, and so deep off the trails I doubt anyone will find us. It's...
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We finally stopped when we reached the lake at the back of Ferntree Collage. My body was aching I hadn't run that much in so long and gosh this bag is heavy.
"I don't know if he saw us, we might not have ran far enough. So keep quiet and rest." Amber whispered
My sides ached as I breathed, but I needed to know who we were running from. Even if it killed me.
"Who...did...we...escape from?" I managed to say, though I'm surprised she heard it.
"It was Brent. I saw him coming and he looked angry"
The aching seemed to disappear as I sat up and stared into Amber's eyes.
"It was Brent?!" I whispered more...
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The picture on Linda's বিছানা side টেবিল stared at her and she had had enough. Moving quickly she pulled her covers off and was slipping her feet into her runners.
Wearing the same thing she went to বিছানা in, black tracksuits, a white long sleeve শীর্ষ and a puma jumper, Linda left the house and made her way to the old hospital on foot.
The night was dark and shadows seemed to be following her every footsteps. The lights from the রাস্তা lamp didn't do much, only illuminating one বৃত্ত making each imagined shadow larger.
She had made it through two streets and one alley way but the constant thought...
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I could hear the noise droning softly in the nearby forest. A gurgling muffled cry that was slowly receding, becoming fainter. Usually I would ignore such sounds, but the desperate plea imbedded in the cries was enough to make me turn and listen, like some creature was calling me. Weird when I put it like that but that’s exactly what went through my mind when the first cry sounded, a blistering screeching scream.
I stumbled through the over growth, frantically trying to find the উৎস of the sound before it faded with the gentle whisper of the wind. The forest around me was darkening quickly,...
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Have আপনি been pining for a প্রদর্শনী in which beautiful, young sisters দুশ্চরিত্রা about each other and look for ways to ছুরি each other in the back? If আপনি answered yes to either question, then the sisters is for you.

Whoever wishes to keep a secret must hide the fact that he possesses one.

I sat there quietly listening to the sobs of an unfamiliar voice. “You can’t do that!” The woman’s voice screeched, and then there was a slight chuckle, almost as if the sobbing was amusing to the person. “Oh yes I can, and I just have” The voice who I now knew was young man’s voice. I looked back down...
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“Are আপনি crazy telling her our true forms, what the hell man?” Shouted Opal. “Don’t worry, I’ll never tell anyone, I’m a Rokurokubi, which is also a type of demon, we demons should stick together” ব্যক্ত Mia. “Rokurokubi? I think I’ve heard of that type of creature, আপনি come under the category of nocturnal, right” ব্যক্ত Opal trying to calm down. “I’m so glad you’ve heard of my race, that makes me so happy” ব্যক্ত Mia trying to hug Opal. “Opal has a vast knowledge of creatures from the other world” ব্যক্ত Alec. “Then আপনি should do great in ‘Monster Protection Class’...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Shaun

"Your girlfriend called. She wanted to talk to you," Jason said.

I pushed past him and grabbed the phone. I punched in the correct numbers and Serena picked up on the first ring. She sounded as if she'd been crying.

"Are আপনি alone?" she asked.
"Yes," I glanced at Jason's retreating form. He was going to বাস্কেটবল practice.
"It's important," she said, hesitantly.
"You can tell me," I said, patiently.
"God, I'm scared," she whispered.
"Of what?"

Suddenly, she screamed into the phone.

"What's wrong?" I asked.
"It's moving," she whispered again, sounding panicked.
"What is, Serena?" I probably...
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Hayden p.o.v
I sat there staring out into the cold city, one of the quirks with flying is আপনি can go anywhere. I sighed and lay down; the floor was cold at the Empire state. “Why would I try to চুম্বন her?” I asked myself. I shook my head. “You’re an idiot Hayden” I told myself. She didn’t have feelings for me after 3 days what the hell was I thinking? I asked myself again. Did I even have feeling for her? I mean I’m an অ্যাঞ্জেল I can’t do the things that most human boys can do. I sighed and got up; the sun was starting to come up, not that anyone in the আন্ডারওয়ার্ল্ড slept. I looked...
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Billy’s p.o.v
“I can’t believe girls got a ghost hunt” Rocco mumbled. We were all bummed the girls always got the good cases. “Yeah, I heard it’s about a guy who had scratched on his back” Max said. I sighed. “What cases do we have?” I asked Caleb looked down at his computer. “A girl says that her boyfriend was on a hiking trip and he hasn’t called অথবা communicated with her since last week” he said. I rolled my eyes. “Do আপনি think there’s anything to worry about?” I asked them, they all shrugged but Caleb nodded. “Even if there isn’t we have to help her anyway”...
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posted by DietCokeGirl
This is written about the perfect silence only found in the dead of night, and the feelings it inspires.
The শিরোনাম comes from the বিবরণ a friend of mine gave when we were stuck in the middle of nowhere at midnight and I found it sort of beautiful.
Enjoy (I hope) :)

Weighted air and winking stars,
darkness draped, tension wrought.
This night, this hour, is ours.
Silence chimes unspoken thoughts
that choke my mouth.
Silver moonbeams in glittering outline
surround you, and in our youth
this night, this hour, we intertwine.




I'd প্রণয় to hear what আপনি like অথবা hate.
Thanks for reading.

DietCokeGirl
This one is pretty short but I've been so busy, hope আপনি like it মতামত and tell me what আপনি think.

Elena’s POV
I woke up to find the curtains being draw open and Stefan gone. Every thing seemed a little fuzzy. I could see a figure walked towards me. I sat up in বিছানা and rubbed my eyes.
“Good morning sleeping beauty.” Damon spoke softly. When things came back to focus I saw Damon half dressed, wearing just a pair of sweats.
I ran my fingers threw my hair pulling it out of my face. “Where’s Stefan.” “Not here, in fact it’s just আপনি and me. Hungry?”
He got up and headed for the...
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Katherine’s POV
I leaned off the দেওয়াল smiling. “I can tell that আপনি didn’t miss me.” I ব্যক্ত turning to Stefan my smile fading.
I turned back to Damon smiling. “I can’t tell much if আপনি miss me with all that ‘I প্রণয় আপনি Elena.” I glided my hands over his perfectly sculpted abs. His শার্ট so thin আপনি could feel every little curve.
My fingers moving up his stomach one দ্বারা one. “You seem to প্রণয় Elena so much, have আপনি ever wanted to tasted her blood, because I know I’ve been dying to.” I ব্যক্ত running my thumb over his lower lip.

Damon’s POV
From the moment she spoke my body...
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Elena's POV

"Why don't আপনি sit down and we can talk." I was pressed tightly up against the counter. "No need to be scared." Katherine was smiling as she took steps towards me. "Katherine this is between Damon, Stefan and আপনি not me." Katherine tilted her head and shook it tell me no. "Honey this is about you."

Damon's POV

"How the hell could আপনি do that? Damon I asked আপনি to do this for Elena." Stefan was furious. I just rolled my eyes. "Your just upset because she may also have feelings for me to, just like Katherine."

Stefan sat there shaking his head. "Don't আপনি get it Damon Katherine never...
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So, I am alway on the look out for লেখা contests with inspiring prompts for me to enter. I got really exited when I found this one:
link because I had an idea for it right away. I spent all afternoon researching the Battle of Little Bighorn, because I wanted to set it in the aftermath of that battle, and লেখা it, instead of লেখা a biography of William Blake that I was supposed to be doing for school :P. then, when I went to go জমা করুন it, I figured out the people wanted me to sign up for a membership to their website for $6.75 a মাস to enter the contest, which I don't really want to....
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
17: Wheel in the Sky

Dying is not what most people think it is-nothing flashes before your eyes, there’s no white light অথবা what have you. The only thing I felt was pain, the blood flowing through my শার্ট and fingers, making them sticky and beginning to form a কোট on my clothes. I couldn’t see much beyond the few feet in front of me, the sun had long such set and darkness had fallen on সত্বর wings. There was one sound: my blood pulsing like it was right in my ears. Eventually I made it to the ঘাস পাহাড় where I fell, too weak to walk another step.
While I lay there, certain I was destined...
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 "You know... I'm not...the one আপনি love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
"You know... I'm not...the one you love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos
There have been so many things that have happened to me in the past, present, and future, that I have had a hard time remembering them all. For a vampire, that would seem unbearably stupid; I mean, we live forever, so our brains should be আরো adept at handling the hardcore memories. At times I actually thought I remembered my childhood, অথবা even WWI if I took a deep thought into it. But no, the only thing that came into my mind as clearly as the darkness that surrounds me now is this:
Chloe's eyes.
Chloe Cassalani, the one person I knew from the start upon meeting, was a threat to me. The instant...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
Bobby’s p.o.v

After I had spent the night with Tayce I went back to the protector’s dorms, they weren’t as nice as the house অথবা cleaner for that matter but it was a place to sleep. I noticed Kale sitting on his বিছানা পাঠ করা some chapter book Belinda had recommended earlier this week. He looked up and smirked. “Where did আপনি go?” he asked, I coughed and sat down পরবর্তি him. “Walk” I said, his judgmental eyes followed mine. “Gee that was so convincing” He said, I playfully pushed him. “So what, it’s not like I’m the killer” I said, I could tell he believed me, but he still...
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Chapter 8: not a sweet life
I woke up with Damien's arms tightened around my naked chest.ewww eww eww eww, I swear I’ll kill him! i slid myself out of his grasp and flew to my closet I quietly wore something to escape from him while I was putting on my jeans I was thinking of some place where Damien cant find me, I really couldn’t think of any where so I grabbed my bag and headed to the door hope fully Damien was still sleeping I opened the door and quietly closed it behind me I rushed to my car when jasper interrupted me
-Bella what's wrong? Your so scared and worried.
Not a good timing please...
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