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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. দ্বারা no means am I forcing আপনি to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless আপনি truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before আপনি start posting. It can be as little as a bio, অথবা as big as an entire প্রবন্ধ series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no আরো than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he অথবা she is in, can pull out another trick out of his অথবা her hat.
4. If আপনি absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his অথবা her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely যেভাবে খুশী and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when আপনি have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the পরবর্তি দিন you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own অথবা is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the সাম্প্রতিক outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, অথবা claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If আপনি must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, অথবা so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if আপনি do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot অথবা stabbed in the heart, then pop up মিনিট later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull অথবা flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to অথবা dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to অথবা dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created দ্বারা you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing অথবা potential character is a Mary Sue, অথবা if আপনি suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, আপনি can take link. If আপনি want, আপনি can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case আপনি were curious, which আপনি probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all আপনি want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, দ্বারা no means do আপনি have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by CoaxochYJ
Cuz most people dont know....


Ciel's POV



I crouched in the vent. Watching every সরানো of the slender girl. In the cave, alot of people thought, Mel was, a little girl, one who needed protection. Boy were they wrong. I watched her sit on the পালঙ্ক with her casted arm, typing on her laptop with her good one, her left one. She put in her white earbuds. She nodded to the beat. Nod, nod, pause, nod. Mental note that. I crawled around in the vents, to another grate. আপনি know how many broken arms she gets from being beat up? She says its from beating up Erasers. Pfft. Big, fat, lie. Exactly 21. She heals...
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posted by Robin_Love
She growled, kicking at his jaw to release her ankle.
“Let me go!!!”
She kicked at his canine face and his claws dug into her skin. She bit back a scream, flapping her wings ferociously in an attempt to get away. A sudden dark blur pushed her farther into the air as her captor was forced backwards. She steadied herself then looked down. Her savior was flying steadily towards her, blood on his hands and shirt. She looked down to find Ari covered in blood and dirt.
“Go! C'mon!!!”
He grabbed hold of her hand and shot forward, causing her to loose focus. When they'd slowed down, she could...
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posted by SilverWings13
Incase আপনি didn't check out the bios, অথবা আপনি forgot: Bandit-Will, Saber Tooth-Marquez, Jaguar-Danny.


"Have anything?" Ruse asked from his crouched position beside Bandit on the rooftop. Bandit shook his head slightly, keeping his infra-red vision trained on the Wayne Tower. His red irises picked up the body heat of the security guards who patrolled the halls, and a few late night workers in their offices, but noone scaling the side of the building অথবা crawling through the air ducts.
"Nothing," he answered. "Link us to the others."
The younger red head beside him nodded and closed his eyes to...
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posted by Robin_Love
She walked out of the room, locking the door behind her. She headed into the large room and looked around. She waved Anton over.
“How close are we?”
“Just a few আরো hours.”
“Make it sooner. Anything can happen.”
“Of course.”
“Dismissed.”
Anton left and she was approached দ্বারা Teague and Serepta.
“Enough of this! We have played your game long enough! আপনি promised them to us! We've done our part. Where are they?!”
“Patience Serepta. You'll have your warrior soon enough. As for the angel, she will return to us soon. I needed her. I want to fuel the আগুন a little আরো before they...
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posted by 66Dragons
Announcement

Id just like to make a quick announcement: The current events on this website are exactly why I don't get on ফ্যানপপ as much as I can. Because everyone has to complain about something.  Then someone else gets offended of what that person ব্যক্ত and they get in a fight. They complain about each other and put on a pouty fest. They EVENTUALLY চুম্বন and make up, then someone else does it. 

ENOUGH OF THE FIGHTING COMPLAINING AND WHINING!!! GROW UP! And NO ONE had better DARE মতামত on this with a ""sorry I did that. Oh I'm so sorry. I was in a bad mood. I'm doing better now" Because I...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 Bentley
Bentley
He sliced at a dummy with his sword making it fall apart and heard a little noise behind him and loooked from the corner of his eyes to see two attackers coming at him from both sides, he backflipped out of the way and took out his small daggers throwing them at the incoming dummies and made them fall apart aswell, he landed on his feet swiftly at ease and stood in a ready position with his regular sized sword breathing heavily with sweat running down his forehead, he heard clapping behind him and flipped his sword back into his side pouch and turned around smiling. The man who approached him...
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posted by MafiaYJ
 Human Form
Human Form
Name: Tabitha Macon
ID: Tigress
Age: 17
Hair: Black (Red as Tigress) Eyes: Blue Height: 5'7 (5'11 as Tigress)
Nationality: Brazilian/American
Father: John Macon
Mother: Anna Macon
Job: Intern at Daily Planet
Affiliations: Young Justice

Powers: Heightened: Hearing, Smell, Sight, Strength, Speed, Agility. Can turn into বাঘিনী অথবা remain human. Has claws as বাঘিনী and a tail. Can take a beating, her অস্থি can easily pop from their sockets to allow less injury. Roar. As a human she is very agile, just as she is as Tigress. Speaks to all felines. And can do some sorcery, but not very well.

Background:...
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posted by MafiaYJ
 Reality Warp
Reality Warp
Name: Amora Vida Ramses
ID: Countess
Age: 16
Hair: Black Eyes: Grey Height: 5'3
Nationality: Mexican - Italian
Father: Santo Ramses (deceased Mexican)
Mother: Helena Vida DeVani Ramses (Lives in Sicily)
Job: Artist
Affiliations: Young Justice

Powers: Can warp reality with illusions that become real if permanent to long, can take peoples powers if she wills it দ্বারা touch, taught দ্বারা Cassandra Cain. Can use most weapons, but prefers a mace like Hawkgirl's. Flight

Background: Her family were blue bloods until her mother married her father. She had another 2 siblings that died of scarlet fever, and discovered...
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So...here it is! Enjoy! :)


Prologue:
“Do it!” Shadow screamed in protest, “Push the damn thing already!”
She meant with her mind. Spectrum closed her eyes than touched the boulder and released it. The light magnified from her hand to it and the boulder gave a defining crack. The Team was able to push through. They reached down the back of the maze but was than met with surprise.
“SEE!” Wire exclaimed with an extended finger pointed to the right, Everyone gasped.
Shadow could hardly blink, her hand was raised to her throat, she was coughing with shock. At last she managed to talk, her...
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posted by Jade_DragonYJ
মুলান
Mulan
Name: Fa মুলান (In English, মুলান Fa)
Alias: Jade Dragon
Occupation: hero, student
Powers: power sensing and recognition, flight, high density polymerized titanium Japanese fans, has a way with healing herbs and prefers them over modern দিন medicines, very intelligent, bonds with the Ancestors, professional martial artist, extremely agile
History: There was a prophecy about মুলান when she was born: It was ব্যক্ত that she was to be the embodiment and hostess to the Jade Dragon spirit. But the Jade Dragon was the emblem of a different family. That alone caused tension between families. After a while,...
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posted by SilverWings13
Never Alone part II- Stakeout

SilverWings kept her eyes trained on the warehouse. It was blazing hot, and she had long abandoned her leather jacket, hiding it in the tall grasses. Her eyes flickered to her partner, who squatted patiently in the weeds, keeping eyes on their target.
Silver sighed, frustrated দ্বারা the empty silence, "Looks abandoned."
"Another dead-end?" Thirteen wondered.
"Gordon Tin, third name on the list," Silver said. "This is the address from the data-base." She felt her spirit dampen. The first two names on the তালিকা had led to empty apartments. She was certain she had memorized...
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He has a partner and her পরিলেখ will be up shortly-

Name- Caleb

Alter ego- Target

Age- 17

Grade- Junior

Allies- Night/Day

Personality- sometimes cocky, proud, protective, older brother, teasing, doubtful, sometimes thoughtful, careful, loving.

His ability-

He is the only meta in his family though he doesn't use his powers often mostly just to disgruntle his younger sister. He can great gusts of win and small tornado like things for a few মিনিট but never a full out one. He is also intelligent. he knows how to rile his opponent up enough to make them make a mistake. His name it self makes some people...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Carly
Carly
Name: Carly

Likes: Sweets

Best Friend: None

Loves: Heat

Dislikes: Cold

Worst Habit: Anti-Social

Personal Secret: I can dance really well

পছন্দ Food: Creamed Spinach

পছন্দ Color: Black

Code Name: Vixen

Mentor/Inspiration: Becca

Relations: None

Base of Operations: Resistance Headquarters

Personal Home: New York

Occupation: Mercenary

Job: Journalist

Team: Resistance

What Symbolizes You: Wind

Biggest Regret: Not falling in love

Dream Career: Travel writer

Most সাম্প্রতিক Nightmare: Uhh...

Spirit Animal: Fox
শিবা
Vixen
posted by XxKFforeverXx
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Tandoori Parker! Well, Caverly I guess? I’m not sure really which one we go দ্বারা after everything... *shrugs*
Reason অথবা meaning of name: I.. doesn’t really have a fancy meaning অথবা anything.
Eye Color: Green~
Hair Style/Color: It’s a light brown that’s like.. a little past my shoulders and it’s always pinned back অথবা pulled away from my face!
Height: 5’5.
Clothing Style: Comfortable! I like leggings in sweatpants, but every now and then আপনি can find me in jeans.
Best Physical Feature: I.. don’t know? My figure I guess.. I don’t really care about looks....
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Fletcher stepped out onto the docking, his hands immediately unbuttoning the dark buttons on his peacoat to get away from the sweltering heat. "Christ.." he mumbled and paused at the black sport car that awaited for him. He opened the ট্রাঙ্ক and tossed in the suitcase, his bag following afterwards. He hesitated to get into the car but slid into the backseat, side-eyeing the girl that sat across from him. "They send আপনি to fetch after their rogue son?" He chuckled and crossed his arms. "Your father is very sick, Fletch, a lot has changed in the three years you've been gone." She leaned back in...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Nudge paused as she entered the room, her chattering with the brunette beside her slowing. She rose an eyebrow in confusion at the three siblings laughing and hugging. "There's more of you?" Jaime looked up at the sound and let go, running over and hugging onto her tightly. She blinked before slowly hugging him. 'I'm so confused." Nudge grabbed his shoulder, pushing him back to stare at him, lowering a few inches to get eye level with the boy. "You look just like him, wow." She leaned back up, patting her head as Jack held up the polaroid, snapping a picture of him. "What's your name, kiddo?"...
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"Noëlle, come inside! Dinner's almost ready!
Michael returned to the pot filling the quant house with the aroma of beef and caramelize onions. He ladled সুপ into the ceramic bowls, sprinkled in croutons, and smothered them both in Comté before setting the bowls in the oven. When a pair of bare feet was still absent from the kitchen, the man turned off the চুলা and went back to the রান্নাঘর door.
"Noëlle?" he called again. "Mon ange!" No answer came from the flowered front yard অথবা the marsh lakeland at the bottom of the hill. Instinctively, Michael grabbed his খাপ বেল্ট and darted out...
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posted by SilverWings13
Aleksander was already awake when his sister knocked on his door. A blue messenger প্রজাপতি had flown through the cracked window half an ঘন্টা পূর্বে with an urgent message from the Red Army: the White Army’s leader, Wilhelm Magnus, was expected to attend the neutral Circle’s spring solstice celebration. Aleksander had already received the same news from Magnus’ own daughter and was attempting to explain to the Reds that he had the situation under control--without revealing his communications with the other side.
Even if he had been raised a strategist, playing both sides when he only wanted...
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