this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good অথবা not before I জমা করুন it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear প্রণয় আপনি once were a shining ray.
In my eyes আপনি meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about আপনি is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your প্রণয় is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our প্রণয় is coming to its new close.
রঙ were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would প্রণয় to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our প্রণয় has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our প্রণয় left it took আপনি along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying প্রণয় was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me প্রণয় would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy