this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good অথবা not before I জমা করুন it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear প্রণয় আপনি once were a shining ray.
In my eyes আপনি meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about আপনি is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your প্রণয় is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our প্রণয় is coming to its new close.
রঙ were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would প্রণয় to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our প্রণয় has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our প্রণয় left it took আপনি along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying প্রণয় was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me প্রণয় would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear প্রণয় আপনি once were a shining ray.
In my eyes আপনি meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about আপনি is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your প্রণয় is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our প্রণয় is coming to its new close.
রঙ were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would প্রণয় to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our প্রণয় has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our প্রণয় left it took আপনি along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying প্রণয় was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me প্রণয় would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
Everyone has a red glass window.It's called your heart.People's windows differ from others,some windows are shaded out and don't let any light come in and than there are some windows that are open to whatever goes pass their them.
Is your window open অথবা closed out?
Would আপনি let the air in if আপনি had the chance?
My window has been open for quite some time and the same gush of wind keeps coming in and I've grown to প্রণয় and need that one breath that air gives me.But that gush of wind I've grown to প্রণয় sometimes easily breaks my window with it's power.But yet can easily fix my window up again with it's strength.It is a constant fight between letting that gush of wind in because I'm afraid of the wind breaking my window once more.But that same gush of wind I'm so scared of but yet প্রণয় so much,loves me as well but that wind can spread far.Far enough to other people's windows as well.
Always an constant fight between the wind and the window!
Is your window open অথবা closed out?
Would আপনি let the air in if আপনি had the chance?
My window has been open for quite some time and the same gush of wind keeps coming in and I've grown to প্রণয় and need that one breath that air gives me.But that gush of wind I've grown to প্রণয় sometimes easily breaks my window with it's power.But yet can easily fix my window up again with it's strength.It is a constant fight between letting that gush of wind in because I'm afraid of the wind breaking my window once more.But that same gush of wind I'm so scared of but yet প্রণয় so much,loves me as well but that wind can spread far.Far enough to other people's windows as well.
Always an constant fight between the wind and the window!
I feel like I have always known you
We’ve always been so close but
আপনি look away
আপনি tell me that আপনি প্রণয় me
But your eyes say something else
It shouldn’t be so difficult for me
To turn away
Chorus:
Every time we talk at night
Every time আপনি make me feel alright
When আপনি say goodbye
আপনি say you’ll think of me all the time
I know it’s a lie
And I’m slowly breaking
I’m slowly breaking
Somehow আপনি just cannot see
The way I smile when আপনি look at me
Are আপনি completely blind?
Cuz’ I’ve প্রদত্ত আপনি all the signs
That I প্রণয় আপনি
Chorus:
And now I’m falling apart
You’ve gone from my life
I can’t take it anymore
My new best friend is a knife
What আপনি were to me
Made me complete