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Bella: Why am I covered in feathers?

I was so tired.
It was Dartmouth's spring break, and Edward and I had returned to his house.
I immediately crashed on his golden বিছানা in his room. There had been so much cramming for tests and everything; college was much আরো difficult than highschool.
Edward still hadn't changed me, despite his promise. He claimed he couldn't saturate his thirst enough near the Dartmouth campus, and he wouldn't leave me alone to go hunting. He wanted to be strong as possible when he changed me. Edward was leaving tonight, I assumed, to go bag a few mountain lions. It was probably for the best; I don't think I could handle thirst and tests and studying and Edward's overwhelming beauty all at once.
I fell asleep almost immediately, dreaming, still, about our সাম্প্রতিক honeymoon. It had been the best night of my life.
I woke up too soon, but I felt energized. As I tried to roll off the bed, I realized I was very uncomfortable, and also realized that my T-shirt and jeans had been replaced with a frilly, feathery dress and high heels.
"ALICE!!!" I yelled, trying to stand. She was there in a flash.
"Yes?"
"Why am I covered in feathers?"
"It's not feathers, silly. It's জরি and ribbon and chifon..."
"Dammit what IS all this?" I demanded, trying to yank off the shoes.
She shrugged. "I was bored."
I glared.
Emmett walked around the corner. As soon as he saw me, he burst into loud hoots of laughter. "Edward," he called. "You'd better save your girlfriend now." he turned to me. "Can আপনি believe it? Out of all the things that could be dangerous about this house, the most dangerous for আপনি is sleeping, eh, Bella?"