I wrote this poem, its not very gd, but i wanted some criticism, so i figured...well, here goes
Skeletal Kiss
Kisses from a skeleton.
A hand that cannot touch.
A nose that can't pick up the scent
Of perfumed skin, as such.
Sweet nothings from a skeleton,
Inspired দ্বারা sightless eye.
Words tainted, দ্বারা the rotted lips
Through which they must pass by.
Embraces from a skeleton.
The fault of broken heart,
Which used to rest in marrow cage
But now is gone, in part.
প্রণয় comes not from a skeleton,
From death, from lack of life.
It only lives in memory
Which lives through after life.
Ok, be honest, What do আপনি guys think?
Skeletal Kiss
Kisses from a skeleton.
A hand that cannot touch.
A nose that can't pick up the scent
Of perfumed skin, as such.
Sweet nothings from a skeleton,
Inspired দ্বারা sightless eye.
Words tainted, দ্বারা the rotted lips
Through which they must pass by.
Embraces from a skeleton.
The fault of broken heart,
Which used to rest in marrow cage
But now is gone, in part.
প্রণয় comes not from a skeleton,
From death, from lack of life.
It only lives in memory
Which lives through after life.
Ok, be honest, What do আপনি guys think?
My বন্ধু got a text message and it had this in it please tell me what আপনি think.
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মাস 1: hi mommy, I'm in your stomach. It's very comfortable in here. I'm not ready to leave yet.
মাস 2: Mommy, I'm still very small but I can't wait to meet you!
মাস 3: I'm starting to grow! before আপনি know it I'll be big and strong!
মাস 4: mommy, I'm a girl aren't আপনি proud? I can't wait to be your little princess :)
মাস 5: guess what mommy? I have hair and I really like it!
মাস 6: Mommy, why are we at the doctor what is that mean man saying? What is an abortion? what is that needle for? OWW!! mommy, stop him! It burns! I can't get away from it!
mommy, I am an angel. I met this nice man named যীশু he told me what an abortion was. Why didn't আপনি want me? I thought আপনি loved me.... well I প্রণয় you. যীশু told me that he will প্রণয় me and raise me to be big and strong....
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মাস 1: hi mommy, I'm in your stomach. It's very comfortable in here. I'm not ready to leave yet.
মাস 2: Mommy, I'm still very small but I can't wait to meet you!
মাস 3: I'm starting to grow! before আপনি know it I'll be big and strong!
মাস 4: mommy, I'm a girl aren't আপনি proud? I can't wait to be your little princess :)
মাস 5: guess what mommy? I have hair and I really like it!
মাস 6: Mommy, why are we at the doctor what is that mean man saying? What is an abortion? what is that needle for? OWW!! mommy, stop him! It burns! I can't get away from it!
mommy, I am an angel. I met this nice man named যীশু he told me what an abortion was. Why didn't আপনি want me? I thought আপনি loved me.... well I প্রণয় you. যীশু told me that he will প্রণয় me and raise me to be big and strong....
It’s sweet, the way আপনি think.
The way আপনি dream, the way আপনি look into my eyes, asking me
To be everything you’re dreaming up.
আপনি want me to be who I don’t trust myself to be.
I don’t trust myself
With you.
Love,
it’s আরো than I can give;
আরো than I can take.
You,
you’re everything I wish I was
And that’s what আপনি don’t see.
I don’t want to crush
Your ideas.
Don’t want to মেঘ your perfect vision
Of what প্রণয় is.
I don’t want to make a mess of you,
The way I have with myself.
আপনি want me to make আপনি
Mine…
But it’s not that easy
I just discovered this spot. Here's my first shot - a little poem I wrote a few days ago. If আপনি like this I have আরো in store.
...why do I rhyme when I don't mean to? Haha.
Inspired দ্বারা Erin McCarley's "It's Not That Easy"
The way আপনি dream, the way আপনি look into my eyes, asking me
To be everything you’re dreaming up.
আপনি want me to be who I don’t trust myself to be.
I don’t trust myself
With you.
Love,
it’s আরো than I can give;
আরো than I can take.
You,
you’re everything I wish I was
And that’s what আপনি don’t see.
I don’t want to crush
Your ideas.
Don’t want to মেঘ your perfect vision
Of what প্রণয় is.
I don’t want to make a mess of you,
The way I have with myself.
আপনি want me to make আপনি
Mine…
But it’s not that easy
I just discovered this spot. Here's my first shot - a little poem I wrote a few days ago. If আপনি like this I have আরো in store.
...why do I rhyme when I don't mean to? Haha.
Inspired দ্বারা Erin McCarley's "It's Not That Easy"
My হৃদয় keeps breaking
each time I'm taking
a bigger slice out of my heart
it feels like I'm the dart
they trow at the board
hit a score then there threw
and all i can do is sit back
relax and try to see what I lack
I ask myself what the problem was
and all he does
is sit there and laugh
until the day
I get up and scream at him
and they all get scared and run
I've had my fun
I go back to the corner and contemplated what I have done and make fun!
now when I cry there tears of joy!
and if that boy
ever thinks his coming back
I no were the shotguns at!
each time I'm taking
a bigger slice out of my heart
it feels like I'm the dart
they trow at the board
hit a score then there threw
and all i can do is sit back
relax and try to see what I lack
I ask myself what the problem was
and all he does
is sit there and laugh
until the day
I get up and scream at him
and they all get scared and run
I've had my fun
I go back to the corner and contemplated what I have done and make fun!
now when I cry there tears of joy!
and if that boy
ever thinks his coming back
I no were the shotguns at!
Please tell me if আপনি want another part! Thankyou please enjoy!
"Kira" I yelled trying to find her. I could only imagine that she was scared and alone! We had went hunting and she had saw a deer and she just had to have it! I waited and waited for her to come back but as I waited I started to get worried! I herd a scream from her and I ran to look but as I found her she had blood over her face she looked full I asked her what the madder was and she ব্যক্ত "Claria why haven't আপনি ate?" "I ate before we came" "okay" she ব্যক্ত with a smirk! "lets go প্রথমপাতা before mom gets worried and wipe of you're fangs Kira they have blood all over them" "fine" she ব্যক্ত
"Kira" I yelled trying to find her. I could only imagine that she was scared and alone! We had went hunting and she had saw a deer and she just had to have it! I waited and waited for her to come back but as I waited I started to get worried! I herd a scream from her and I ran to look but as I found her she had blood over her face she looked full I asked her what the madder was and she ব্যক্ত "Claria why haven't আপনি ate?" "I ate before we came" "okay" she ব্যক্ত with a smirk! "lets go প্রথমপাতা before mom gets worried and wipe of you're fangs Kira they have blood all over them" "fine" she ব্যক্ত
I did a semester of কবিতা in English at my high school. I had to right 4, and this one is my favourite. It's a narrative poem.
Wind catches the sand,
Throwing it at me
Stinging my ankles like angry bees,
Like vicious teeth
A gust blows the grains to my face,
Making me splutter and spit
Eager to escape,
I run to the crashing ocean
The waves are ferocious,
Pulling me under
The suns heat blocked out
Warmth stolen from my skin
Trapped in a current,
Legs thrashing,
Water tugging at me from every direction,
I slip beneath
Wind catches the sand,
Throwing it at me
Stinging my ankles like angry bees,
Like vicious teeth
A gust blows the grains to my face,
Making me splutter and spit
Eager to escape,
I run to the crashing ocean
The waves are ferocious,
Pulling me under
The suns heat blocked out
Warmth stolen from my skin
Trapped in a current,
Legs thrashing,
Water tugging at me from every direction,
I slip beneath
The pain in my হৃদয় is to strong,
As it is for আপনি that i long,
আপনি came to me suddenly,
I fell inlove with আপনি almost instantly
আপনি গাউন my heart, but ran away,
Leaving me in sorrow, and in wonder of why আপনি came,
Was it in the intention of this heartbreak;
অথবা was it to achieve all the sorrow আপনি could create?
In your eyes, i was easy to lure,
আপনি ব্যক্ত আপনি were sick, and that i was the cure,
I feel like such a fool,
I cant believe i fell for you,
My প্রণয় for আপনি has become like rain,
As my হৃদয় bleeds in pain,
The memories now being to play,
I only wish আপনি stayed.
My mind keeps displaying,
প্রতিমূর্তি of us talking and laughing,
I couldent see the bad,
আপনি seemed like a decent man,
But i guess i was wrong,
This is just another fairytale gone wrong
xx
As it is for আপনি that i long,
আপনি came to me suddenly,
I fell inlove with আপনি almost instantly
আপনি গাউন my heart, but ran away,
Leaving me in sorrow, and in wonder of why আপনি came,
Was it in the intention of this heartbreak;
অথবা was it to achieve all the sorrow আপনি could create?
In your eyes, i was easy to lure,
আপনি ব্যক্ত আপনি were sick, and that i was the cure,
I feel like such a fool,
I cant believe i fell for you,
My প্রণয় for আপনি has become like rain,
As my হৃদয় bleeds in pain,
The memories now being to play,
I only wish আপনি stayed.
My mind keeps displaying,
প্রতিমূর্তি of us talking and laughing,
I couldent see the bad,
আপনি seemed like a decent man,
But i guess i was wrong,
This is just another fairytale gone wrong
xx