I wrote this poem, its not very gd, but i wanted some criticism, so i figured...well, here goes
Skeletal Kiss
Kisses from a skeleton.
A hand that cannot touch.
A nose that can't pick up the scent
Of perfumed skin, as such.
Sweet nothings from a skeleton,
Inspired দ্বারা sightless eye.
Words tainted, দ্বারা the rotted lips
Through which they must pass by.
Embraces from a skeleton.
The fault of broken heart,
Which used to rest in marrow cage
But now is gone, in part.
প্রণয় comes not from a skeleton,
From death, from lack of life.
It only lives in memory
Which lives through after life.
Ok, be honest, What do আপনি guys think?
Skeletal Kiss
Kisses from a skeleton.
A hand that cannot touch.
A nose that can't pick up the scent
Of perfumed skin, as such.
Sweet nothings from a skeleton,
Inspired দ্বারা sightless eye.
Words tainted, দ্বারা the rotted lips
Through which they must pass by.
Embraces from a skeleton.
The fault of broken heart,
Which used to rest in marrow cage
But now is gone, in part.
প্রণয় comes not from a skeleton,
From death, from lack of life.
It only lives in memory
Which lives through after life.
Ok, be honest, What do আপনি guys think?
I'm tired of being your booty call, the one আপনি call when no one cares. I'm tired of feeling the way I feel, so I'm going to take my self out of the game and watch from the sidelines, cause whats the point in playing the game if your gonna loose like I do. I'll always be here to cheer আপনি on, I'll even shed tear just because your gone. Inside I'm hurting and I know আপনি are too, I'm sorry it had to end this way, but maybe in another life we could play the same game and win everytime, but for now all I'm going to say is bye, I'll see আপনি পরবর্তি time.
HELP!! I don't know what to classify this as, a song অথবা a poem!!
HELP!! I don't know what to classify this as, a song অথবা a poem!!
a rose to be exact,
অথবা maybe like a brand new gate
that never comes unlatched.
A friend is like an owl,
both beautiful and wise.
অথবা perhaps a friend is like a ghost,
whose spirit never dies.
A friend is like a হৃদয় that goes
strong until the end.
Where would we be in this world
if we didn't have a friend.
Forever Friends!
you'r my friend and that is true,
but the gift was প্রদত্ত from me to you.
we went thru moments that were good and bad,
even moments that were happy and sad.
আপনি suported me when i was in tears,
we stuck together when we were in fear,
its really sad that it had to be this way,
but it has reached its very last day.
miles away cant keep us apart,
'cause you'll always be in my heart.