Is this good for a tweve বছর old? Its a song called " i miss you" written দ্বারা a twelve বছর old.

The pain is too deep to handle. your all i wish for when i blow that candle. even in my sleep you're all i think of. i'll always wonder if আপনি do the same, while আপনি look at the stars up above.every tear that falls from my eyes represents how much i miss you. i picked আপনি out of all the guys. now will আপনি do the same for me? I've tried so hard not to cry but it hurts so much i'd rather die. i think of আপনি দিন and night. if someone interferes i put up a fight. I miss you. Do আপনি miss me too? is it possible to hurt so much? i miss আপনি and your gentle touch. i wish that আপনি were here with me; holading hands on a branch of a tree. i wish that আপনি could pull me close. i think i took and overdose.... of you. i cant stand it. help me up. ill start a riot. be my love. i'll cry and cry till আপনি reach me... and wait for আপনি to চুম্বন me.
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MattxAliceNine said:
for a 12 বছর old really good but there holding is misspelled
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Vixie79 said:
That is really good. I imagine দ্বারা the time she is 17 অথবা so she'll be mind blowing with her own style of course. This লেখা isn't particularly my favorite, but it's still good লেখা wise.
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irena83 said:
Cute! ;)
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skillet_luvr said:
Very good for a twelve বছর old. :)
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