can আপনি guys tell me what আপনি think of this?

this is a chapter of a mabe soon to be story of mine and befire i deside if i should write আরো i was wondering what আপনি think and if আপনি would read a সেকেন্ড chapter and is it stupied and can আপনি rate and মতামত there and answer too please and thank you.


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