Three more!
--------------------------------------------------That night, they couldn't sleep in peace. They slept underground and they knew they were being hunted down দ্বারা the whole Mobius. "Wake up." Tak said, always being the first one up. They were all awake and were digging back up to the ground. They didn't crawl out. They stopped to look, and saw a giant mob hunting them down. "I think it would be easier if we just used Chaos Control." Tak said. They all shouted "Chaos Control" and they were back at the base. It was flooded. "Hey! আপনি গাউন the emeralds!" A red echidna said. "Chaos Control!" They all shouted. They had finally reached a place where there was no one. They landed in a cemetery. "Hello?" গির whispered. Zim, গির and Tak were the only ones there. They noticed it was a rock ground, There was lava pouring from every where, and there were cracks in the ground. They heard a voice say, "Iblis...." They saw a body come out of the ground with no mouth, messy fur, no feet, red eyes, navy blue fur, bright blue stripes and no gloves. "Welcome... I see আপনি have come here to get away from those pesky Mobians?" It said. It was clearly no hedgehog. It seemed আরো like a demon who took the shape of a hedgehog. "Yes." Zim said. "And আপনি have all of the Chaos Emeralds, Super Emeralds, and the Master Emerald?" It said. "Yes." Zim said. "Come here." It said. "Closer." It said. "Put your hands out it said. It snatched the emeralds from their hands. "Goodbye, my name is Mephiles the Dark. Now I have the universe in my hands." They were transported back to Mobius. The sky was full of darkness. They noticed an enormous creature bigger than Mobius. It was attacking Mobius. The Mob fled to try and find shelter, but everything was left in ruins. The creature looked like... it was Mephiles! There was flames everywhere, people crying, screaming, and trying to attack Mephiles. "HEY! DESTROYING THE PLANET IS OUR JOB!" Zim said.
To be Continued...
Chapter 9 coming soon!
--------------------------------------------------That night, they couldn't sleep in peace. They slept underground and they knew they were being hunted down দ্বারা the whole Mobius. "Wake up." Tak said, always being the first one up. They were all awake and were digging back up to the ground. They didn't crawl out. They stopped to look, and saw a giant mob hunting them down. "I think it would be easier if we just used Chaos Control." Tak said. They all shouted "Chaos Control" and they were back at the base. It was flooded. "Hey! আপনি গাউন the emeralds!" A red echidna said. "Chaos Control!" They all shouted. They had finally reached a place where there was no one. They landed in a cemetery. "Hello?" গির whispered. Zim, গির and Tak were the only ones there. They noticed it was a rock ground, There was lava pouring from every where, and there were cracks in the ground. They heard a voice say, "Iblis...." They saw a body come out of the ground with no mouth, messy fur, no feet, red eyes, navy blue fur, bright blue stripes and no gloves. "Welcome... I see আপনি have come here to get away from those pesky Mobians?" It said. It was clearly no hedgehog. It seemed আরো like a demon who took the shape of a hedgehog. "Yes." Zim said. "And আপনি have all of the Chaos Emeralds, Super Emeralds, and the Master Emerald?" It said. "Yes." Zim said. "Come here." It said. "Closer." It said. "Put your hands out it said. It snatched the emeralds from their hands. "Goodbye, my name is Mephiles the Dark. Now I have the universe in my hands." They were transported back to Mobius. The sky was full of darkness. They noticed an enormous creature bigger than Mobius. It was attacking Mobius. The Mob fled to try and find shelter, but everything was left in ruins. The creature looked like... it was Mephiles! There was flames everywhere, people crying, screaming, and trying to attack Mephiles. "HEY! DESTROYING THE PLANET IS OUR JOB!" Zim said.
To be Continued...
Chapter 9 coming soon!
I got my time to sit down and do this today! Even though I ব্যক্ত tomorrow. For Rachel.
Gender: male
Name:Cooper (His agent name is Jenkins)
Age 20 turning 21 soon
Height 3.3
Weight: I'm not very good with weight so a healthy weight good for acrobatics ( for 20 বছর olds)
Powers: Can slow time but not for long. He can use chaos and that let's him do it longer but he doesn't know that.
Weapons he carries a sniper on his back
Abilities. Really good acrobat and using his sniper.
Species: Wolf
Appearance: his eyes are green, his hair is messy but doesn't go down (not like sonic's) including নেকড়ে like ears and two
black stripes over his cheek. Brown fur. He wears no clothes. (Only hanging his sniper over is right shoulder) he is a left handed person
But he has a furry chest that's quit similar to his পশম colour but a whiter. Wears shadow like shoes just re coloured (your choice)
If it's not enough I'll write a backstory and tell me what I missed out.
Gender: male
Name:Cooper (His agent name is Jenkins)
Age 20 turning 21 soon
Height 3.3
Weight: I'm not very good with weight so a healthy weight good for acrobatics ( for 20 বছর olds)
Powers: Can slow time but not for long. He can use chaos and that let's him do it longer but he doesn't know that.
Weapons he carries a sniper on his back
Abilities. Really good acrobat and using his sniper.
Species: Wolf
Appearance: his eyes are green, his hair is messy but doesn't go down (not like sonic's) including নেকড়ে like ears and two
black stripes over his cheek. Brown fur. He wears no clothes. (Only hanging his sniper over is right shoulder) he is a left handed person
But he has a furry chest that's quit similar to his পশম colour but a whiter. Wears shadow like shoes just re coloured (your choice)
If it's not enough I'll write a backstory and tell me what I missed out.
So why am I remaking it? Well the series was the first fanfiction series I made and when I did it wasn’t really well written, plotholes galore, so I wanted to remake it completely. But at the same time I didn’t want to redo it because of all the ideas I had.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.