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I think the শিরোনাম gives it away a bit, but I quite frankly do not care.

Something I have been noticing lately is the lack of criticism in মতামত of art. Usually, everyone will give a generic compliment like awesome and cool, y'know, things that aren't very specific. Gradually, this is pissing me off, and for several reasons as well.

It is not constructive at all:
Listen, I would understand if it was something that is very good where আপনি cannot find any sort of fault, but that's only in Seuris's art. If আপনি genuinely find it to be perfectly executed, then go ahead and give it a generic and positive statement, but if আপনি do not, then আপনি need to give that person your opinion and what they need to work on with their art and how they could do it. That, my children, is called constructive criticism. It is essential to artists to improve on their art. it applies to nearly everything as well. If আপনি think 2 + 2 = 5, আপনি will think that until the end of time unless someone goes up and tells আপনি it's actually 6. Same thing with art.

It is not very interesting to read because of lack of detail:
If আপনি find a specific area অথবা an effect the artist used that আপনি quite enjoy, incorporate that into your opinion and মতামত on it. It's plain and quite quotidian to most artists if you're just like dude, liek dis iz ballin'. That's just fucking boring.

It shows you're not sincere with your actual intentions:
Saying something is just kewl shows to the artist আপনি don't really care about the work, even if that's not what আপনি truly feel. Seeming apathetic is a good thing to avoid.

It shows আপনি have a lack of appreciation for better words:
Okay, this is just me being a glossophiliac, but at least using words with আরো syllables and that are used less will make আপনি seem a bit আরো sophisticated and সামগ্রিক less of a mainstream moron.

An example I can think of is one shown link. As a artist deemed good দ্বারা the community, আপনি would think Danni would have something আরো to say other than that. At least maybe something about the over-spacing. My মতামত involves my opinion, involving negativity mainly, but better to criticise than generically compliment. Granted, I did not give any advice, but it's mainly due to I have no experience drawing at all digitally, and barely traditionally. Danni, however, has very much experience and could've added a bit more, don't আপনি think?

I do not understand why artists don't help other artists too much with their works. There are some who actually to critique, but most just generically compliment, thinking their actually helping that artist. For example, as a writer, I make sure to point out misspellings, organization and সামগ্রিক originality. Basically, If আপনি know they can do better, then tell them. আপনি don't need to give them a paragraph, either. Just a sentence অথবা two could get your point across pretty well and will help them become better artists.

Also: Just because they're drawing and not recolouring, doesn't mean they deserve to not be প্রদত্ত constructive criticism on their work. Don't even set recolouring to an unacceptable standard, it doesn't even belong on the scale.

I will conclude with this final message: পরবর্তি time আপনি find some art আপনি see problems with, point it out in a respectable manner and if আপনি can, tell them how they can improve on it. You'll make a community of better artists and সামগ্রিক making the community better.
posted by thetacoman
Mother burst into the control room, quite literally, actually, as her paws made excellent battering rams.
"ANY OF আপনি WATCHIN' THE READOUT?" she screamed at Torren and Tydus, who were idly slurping slushie.
"I don't know what you're talking about," ব্যক্ত Tydus, lying on the floor with Torren sitting on his chest.
"Yeah," chimed Torren, spilling some of his slushie on the floor to have it burn it's way straight through.
Mother stared in disbeleif.
"GET ON YOUR EFFING LEGS AND DEFEND US, YOU-"
Tydus cut her off, saying, "Who are you, anyway? How'd আপনি get past clearence?"
"I broke them," she said, camly,...
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{this story has been copied off of almost every GOOD movie and book ever}
plz read chapt 1-23 before পাঠ করা this

she was so beautiful. her beauty made me প্রশ্ন my sexuality...not really..but u know what i mean. now i see where Rane get her beautifulness from. the duchess looked at us for a while then asked "Rane?"
Rane with tears in her eyes ran to her mother. misery whispered to me "what a touching mother-daughter moment" it was indeed touching. the duchess lead us into the dining hall and gave us fruits and stuff that i have never seen before. then the duchess asked "So children while have...
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 Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight:I wonder if Silver likes me...
Platinum:You never know men are wierd like that.
Midnight:Were almost at Chaos mountain!
Platinum:Are আপনি ready to climb it?
Midnight:Yeah if Silver is their than of course!
Platinum:Lets go!
(Midnight and Platinum started climbing it)
Midnight:Hey It's Silver!
Platinum:Hi Silver!
Silver:Hello Platinum and Midnight.
Midnight:Hi Silver.
Platinum:Silver come with me a minute.
Silver:What is it Platinum?
(Platinum asks Silver if he likes Midnight quietly)
Silver:Yes,I do
Platinum:Then tell her.
Silver:Midnight?
Midnight:What is it Silver?
Silver:I like আপনি do আপনি like me?...
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posted by thetacoman
"It is amusing, my king,"
answered the servant at the feet of his master. "That a নেকড়ে and শিয়াল should preform our task for us."
"Indeed," ব্যক্ত the King with a dry smile under his hood. "How amusing that the জন্তু জানোয়ার on our flag should do our bidding." He turned to the flag above his throne. A নেকড়ে and শিয়াল on the hunt was depicted on the cloth.
"How does the battle go?" demanded the King of the slave.
"The rebels shall be put to a সত্বর end after the last sacrifice is made," answered the servant fearfully.
"Excellent," answered the King. "The reinforcements shall make Grand Nimea whole again. And...
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posted by thetacoman
DOOMDADADOOM!
READ THE FREAKEN STORY, DERNIT!
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I had my scythe at the ready.
I wanted to relish this forever.
The black night metamorphasised to gray twilight, and on we traveled.
Finally, we reached the shack outside of the city where I was raised.
I told the child to watch for the militia.
Ever since we blew a appartment complex to smithereenes, we had to deal with the higher security in the city.
Little did they know the true horror was about to strike.

I passed through the lawn unseen. Not even the birds stopped গান গাওয়া at my presence.
As the door fell before me, I heard a রাইফেল cock.
Daddy.
In a...
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posted by SailorStar122
Ash walks into Vince's apartment.It wasnt much but what could আপনি expect from a রাস্তা performer."Nice place ya got here."Ash said."Yeah,It isn't much.Its প্রথমপাতা though"Vince answered.Vince and Ash talked played a few board games and watch some জীবন্ত on a TV from the 50's.


Soon moon white glow filled the sky."I'll be right back!"Ash exclaimed as she ran through the door.Ash soon went on a thieving rampage.Also destroyed the lives of 2 people.Soon it was dawn so she ran back to the apartment where Vince had already went to bed.

Vine awoke to a surprise.His apartment looked like it was $100,000...
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This is an opinion. If আপনি can't respect it, don't bother commenting negatively. >_>

Anyway, this is to get this off of my chest--The main topic is that some of আপনি people are mooching off of my idea like it's yours, and yeah--I'm talking about the SONIC'S পরবর্তি শীর্ষ MODEL COMPETITION.

I'm pretty sure that when somebody creates an idea for something, আপনি have to ask permission before আপনি make your own version, right? :L

Well anyway, this all started when I booted off Katkat57 first because she was voted the most during the competition. Then she made her own version, which caused tons of other...
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ok ive seen five people recolor my pics and im upset bout it so plz do not recolor my pics and আপনি can recolor my recolor just make em diferent not just color the color a diff color make them আরো শীতল i do not exept people recoloring my own pics that i created i dont like people making different accounts and put em on there now i aint recoloring again ive gone on the Recolor haters side i dont want আপনি to recolor then make a new account then post it on there i want আপনি to মোছা that recolor pic i am talking to আপনি jordan the bee aka jordan the fox!

ruin the hedgehog im ok with you. আপনি me...
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The girl with the অ্যাঞ্জেল wings looked up to her and answered. "An assassin named Zak was planning to kill the citizens of this town. He got his assassins to capture them and lock them up here. One of them called help, and I came along."

"What is your name?" Myka asked.

"Anaya," she said. "I'm a healer." Myka didn't exactly know what being a healer was, but she knows that it means to patch up people's injuries.

Suddenly, The কমলা hedgehog was calling her name. "Pssst!" He said. Myka looked at him. "Can আপনি take off these ropes?" He asked. Myka bent down and ripped the rope. The hedgehog got up....
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It's me... (duh) and I was পাঠ করা Danni and Monstrosity's প্রবন্ধ about people they admire and their opinions of the people here. Naturally, that got me thinking- I should do something like that!

So, here it is...

I would like to first of all, thank all the wonderful people on this club- আপনি know who আপনি are. EVERYONE here who's ever পোষ্ট হয়েছে anything original, whether I personally like it অথবা not, has helped me become who I am. (Can't say I'm 100% proud of who I am... But I like to think আপনি guys changed me for the better)

First off, link. I'm not sure if আপনি really know just how many people here...
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"Huh?" Haze ব্যক্ত waking up,but to be found in the same playground he was before.

Haze was on full alert this time. He pulled out his swords. A tall dark figure appeared from the shadows,it was Nightmare.

"Welcome back Haze." ব্যক্ত Nightmare.

"All right you,this time I'm ready for whatever it is আপনি throw at me!" Haze yelled at Nightmare.

"Really?" Chuckled Nightmare.

Behind his visor,Haze was glaring at the demon. Nightmare looked at him.

Suddenly a মুষ্ট্যাঘাত whacked Haze through a playset. Haze caught himself,surprised,then Nightmare was behind him and slammed his foot into Haze's back,then back handed...
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posted by IntrepidKeris
Meh....

If আপনি didn't know, I'll break the sad(in my opinion)news. MephilesTheDark, an awesome artist and a close e-buddy to me, is leaving this spot. Sure I cried, but now...I'm getting kind of angry.

She mentioned this: "It's so damned with recolors...", along with other reasons that she knows herself.

I, now am slightly mad with recolorers. Yes, this issue is argued about constantly, and people just are tired of it. I'm tired of it too, so I'll let this go after a while. So don't expect me in the recolor "war" anytime soon.

But this is not a "PLZCOMEBACK!!!!" letter, that would be....well, stupid, to say the least. I just felt the need to say this. I can understand why she decided to leave, and will not প্রশ্ন any further.

...I will turn their mourning into gladness; I will give them comfort and joy instead of sorrow.
~Jeremiah 31:13
posted by Ashuras-shadow
8:30P.M March 10 2020
Area:Antartica,H.O.P.T base
position:Dog Crate

Its to দিন im nineteen my birthday is today in other words my দিন to break free out of this hell hole.

"BRING বাক্স 92 TO LAB FIVE FOR TESTING" microphone anounced.

"Oh great thats my বাক্স what possibly else could these people do to me...the good thing is its time for me to break out..." i ব্যক্ত to my self.
My বাক্স lifted up দ্বারা some mutant combination DNA failure. This thing must have heard what i was thinking cause it shook my cage making me bounce my head off the side of the crate.Then i silently morphed into something small...
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posted by marksmen456
"WAAAA!!!!" Yelled Typhoon,as he slammed into the wall. Demon Dahlaz towered over Typhoon,and grabbed him দ্বারা the neck. "This host is much আরো fitting for me." He smirked.

Demon Dahlaz threw Typhoon through te steel wall. Typhoon caught himslef,and did a motion with his hand,which sliced Demon Dahlaz's arm off,he did it again,there goes his other arm,Typhoon kept on doing hand motions,each cutting Demon Dahlaz to peices.

"HA!" ব্যক্ত Typhoon.

But Demon Dahlaz reformed into the shape he was in before,and chuckled. Demon Dahlaz punched Typhoon across the floor,then Demon Dahlaz's hand began to glow...
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posted by marksmen456
Typhoon got up as soon as Shane started to stirr. He walked to him,and grabbed him দ্বারা the throat,"The Cross,where is it?" He asked,coldly.

"What are আপনি talking about?" ব্যক্ত Shane.

"DON'T LIE,I KNOW আপনি HAVE STOLEN OUR ACIENT ARTIFACT!" Yelled Typhoon.

"The cross? We'll never give that back to you!" Shane growled.

Typhoon let go of Shane,and punched him into a wall,knocking him out.

"I'll for it,mysel then." He said,as he walked off.

He tore through the base,like it was nothing,then eventually,he found the Cross,glowing. He grabbed it,and left the base.

"Ugh..." ব্যক্ত Shane,getting up.

The U.S.Marines...
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posted by marksmen456
"Oof!" ব্যক্ত Typhoon as he hit the cold hard floor. He got back up,trying to land a মুষ্ট্যাঘাত on Haze ক্রুশ the Hedgehog,he easily dodged,and grabbed his arm,and threw him at the wall,where he hit it.

Typhoon's demon is not coming out this time,but that is what Haze is trying to do,beat Typhoon until that his demon comes out,and Typhoon,was not a great fighter,only in his demon form.

Haze landed a hard kick in his stomach,making Typhoon cough out blood as he fell to his knees,and roundhouse kicked on the side of the head,making Typhoon slide across the floor.

Typhoon was now officially pissed.

He got...
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posted by marksmen456
Typhoon,weak from the battle and reverted to normal,walked through the destroyed city,hoping to find help,any help at all. But he eventually fell down.

He soon after woke up,his vision was blurry from the blinding light above,he soon realized he was on a table,he looked around him,Doctors wearing white robes walked around Typhoon.

But Typhoon felt the darkness take him over,then almost immediantly was pushed back.

"He awakens." ব্যক্ত a doctor.

Typhoon got up off the table,and walked off fully better,The doctors let him past,as a man wearing black পোশাক with a ঘোমটা over his head,so Typhoon couldn't...
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posted by Ningizzida
Okay... Only about a page and a half long, for I did not know what else I could add. TAW short story, and I hope আপনি enjoy... And if আপনি do not understand, Huntsman's real name is Sim.


Huntsman sits alone in his study, summary sheets scattered across the table, পাঠ করা from a thick non-fiction book, about history of The Hanging Gardens of Babylon.

Flicking over a page, his ear twitches as someone enters, but he does not worry, for he knows exactly who it is.

Only a সেকেন্ড later, he can feel her breathing upon his neck, her thin, semi-translucent nightgown brushing on his naked torso.

“Iothlane?...
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Danny the hedgehog
Species: Hedgehog
Sex: Male
Hight: 3.3 ft
পশম color: Blue and Purple
Shoes: Black boots with a light blue tip
eye color: Blue
Family:...dont ask him, hes whole family died
Power: Controls all matter

Things he likes: Running, relaxing, Reading, uses power to save his friends...it happens all the time, being with Ame.
Things he hates, Death, Fighting, Evil, That freaken Blue running version of him..sorry to all the sonic fans, guns, seeing ppl sad.

Skills, Sword fighting, using matter, landing perfectly, helping ppl out.

Short bio: After his whole family died he had 2 save someone that was trapped inside a rose for 200 yrs and reclaim his broken, pointless life and help her out of the rose.
posted by Noda-echidna
Noda stepped into Lien-da’s office so expecting to get a lecture full of swearing and possibly another chain down.

“Hello, Noda.” Lien-da’s friendliest voice greeted her. Noda was shocked to see Lien-da so calm with her feet on her ডেস্ক and leaning back in her chair, smiling. She wasn’t pacing, plotting, অথবা commanding Noda to stop doing something so terribly wrong. ‘This is very bad.’ Noda thought closing the door behind her, her hand staying on the knob.

“Listen to me very closely, Noda.” Lien-da began to speak very coldly as she placed her feet backed on the floor and gripped...
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