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Chapter 17: Freedom City's Wrath
Part 2: The Shocking Truth

Dokuro's secret is out--he isn't the true Malice. After he sent his skeleton army after th­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­em, they ran for it. Whirlwind fired off an air sphere at some of the skeleton's, and they broke apart. But a bunch আরো kept coming for them, armed with swords.
"I don't think both of us can fight them all off, Whirl! We need to find Duji....and fast!"
Whirlwind agreed and kept on running away from the skeleton arm ay. Whirlwind grabed Jackson's hand and flew off deeper into the city. Whirlwind looked down at Jackson and asked, "About Duji...where IS he? Shouldn't he be with you?"
"He was, but he and I বিভক্ত করা up when he went off to face the citizen's solo.....I hope he's alright," Jackson added.
While they were on their way towards Shock, Shock and পাতিহাঁস were still face-to-face with the citizen's. They hid under a car, trying to stay clear of the wrath of the citizen's. It was quiet. Both Shock and পাতিহাঁস listened for any sounds of the citizen's talking অথবা preparing to আগুন again, but nothing was hard through the dead, cool air.
"OK, why haven't they আগুন at us yet?" asked Drake.
"How should I know, Drake? অথবা whatever your name is...." Shock asked back, somehwat irritated.
He peeked his head out from beneath the car and looked around for any sign of them. He looked at the nearby buildings, and he saw that the poeple has seemingly vanished. He looked back to Shock and said, "I believe the coast is clear, kid."
He grabbed Shock hand as he got up from under the car and stood back up. They looked around for anymore signs of the citizens.
"It's quiet. And we all know that when things get quiet, all hell breaks loose..." Shock
পাতিহাঁস continued to look around and said, "Exactly...which is why I'm calling for backup. I'm sure they'll come, but I need to be sure they get here before--"
পাতিহাঁস was cut off suddenly, when they both saw bullets flying at them. It didn't take long for them to notice the citizen's running towards them. পাতিহাঁস fired off several shots, while running away from the scene. He got a few of them, but wan't enough to stop the riot.
"Come on! We need to get আপনি outta here!" পাতিহাঁস screamed out.
Shock shook his head and formed electricity around himself, also making himself hover into the air.
"No....I'm gona take them ALL on!" he shouted back, having his eyes focused on them.
"Fine, then I'll be back with back up!" পাতিহাঁস called out, before officially leaving.
With one last effort to stand against the city, he flew off after them, firing off massive electrical bolts. One person was hit, while another jumped অগ্রবর্তী to stab Shock with a knife. He quickly grabbed the guys hand and electrocuted him, then swung him around using his electrical whip, and slammed him into two other people. Another person tackled him down and they both rolled around on the street. When they stopped, Shock kicked the guy off him and stood back up. He then flew after him, and was ready to electrocute him. But before he could get to him, someone else nearby caused a peice of the concrete below him to come up and hit him. The impact sent Shock flying up higher, and hurt like hell. he fell back down to the রাস্তা hard--with scrapes and scratches all over him. He got up, but was sore from impact.
"Damn you...." he called out.
Just as Shock charged toward the remaining citizen's, several police cars drove into the scene--one of them driving in between Shock and the others. Drake, along with other cops, got outta thier cars.
"OK, everyone, get back to your homes! This riot ends now!" পাতিহাঁস shouted, ready to use his gun if this gets ugly.
One officer came over to Shock and saying, "We need to leave...if আপনি come with us, you'll be safe."
"NO! I'm finishing what I started!" he shouted back.
Tyson, with a few other mobians, came up and appraoched Drake.
"We're not going anywhere til that kid is DEAD!" he yelled at Drake.
পাতিহাঁস aimed his gun at the remaining Mobian's, mostly towards Tyson. পাতিহাঁস had mixed emotions about shooting Tyson--but knew he may have to if Tyson kept this riot going.
"I never thought I would have to do this....I never did like you, but still..." পাতিহাঁস ব্যক্ত to Tyson.
Tyson rolled his eyes and said, "Do আপনি think I care? Once I make that kid pay for this, I'll be outta your hair, COUSIN Drake..."
Shock heard that and then looked at Drake, asking, "You two are related?"
"Yeah...he's my সেকেন্ড cousin. That doesn't matter now--Tyson? Get these people to go প্রথমপাতা before this gets ugly! We got the 'criminal' under control," পাতিহাঁস told Tyson.
"Liar! আপনি idiots didn't do nothing...now WE will take a stand against that monster!" he shouted, while motioning the other mobian's to attack.
Out of pure reflex, he shot several bullets at the crowd as he ran.
"Go...GO! GET THE KID OUTTA HERE!" পাতিহাঁস screamed at one of the cops standing by.
Him and another cop quickly grabbed Shock as they ran for their cars. They got in as quick as they could and then drove off down the street, heading for the bridge. Ironically, at the সেকেন্ড they drove off--Whirlwind and Jackson stopped them as they happened to walk by. It didn't take them long to notice the group of citezen's.
"Wait...if they're chasing after that police car, then Duji must be in it! We need to get to him before--" Jackson said, being cut off when seeing Dokuro.
Dokuro flew past them in air above them, making his way towards the police car Shock was in. Whirlwind grabbed Jackson's hand and flew after Dokuro. While driving, পাতিহাঁস happened to notice Dokuro flying past them.
"Isn't that him, Duji? You're...'master'?" he asked Duji, who sat in the back.
"It is! Wherever he's going, follow him!" he shouted.
With that, পাতিহাঁস drove faster, as he turned right down the রাস্তা where Dokuro was heading. Several bullet sounds where heard hitting the car from behind them, as the angry mod chassing them was shooting at them. Shock rolled down the window and shot out multiple electrical blasts at them. Most of them where hit, while the others decided to back off for the moment.
"I got them to back off....now go get--" Shock said, but noticed that Dokuro was outta sight.
"What is it? Did he vanish?" asked Drake.
Shock nodded as he pointed towards that same old house that he saw before--the house that "Malice" told him to stay clear of. পাতিহাঁস stopped the car as he aproached the strange, creepy old house. They quickly got outta their cars and Shock went ahead of them, running up to the porch.
"Hey, whats wrong? Did he go inside অথবা something?" পাতিহাঁস asked.
"Yes...I'm going inside..." he said, with a determind look.
After that, he opened the door and waisted no time going inside. পাতিহাঁস noticed Whirlwind and Jackson coming into the scene--Whirlwind lowering down to the front yard.
"Glad আপনি made it....your grandkid went inside after Malice," ব্যক্ত Drake.
"Good...but we have some news: that guy isn't Malice! His name is Dokuro and he's not your regular Mobian...." Jackson called out.
পাতিহাঁস was a little shocked দ্বারা the sudden news, but then motioned for the other officers that were with him to go inside.
"Let's worry about that later.....right now we need to catch this guy," he told Jackson.
As they went inside, Shock was already waking in the livingroom. The house was dead quiet--as it has been for the last 6 month. There were no furniture around, just a huge empty space. As he looked around the place, memories of that house came flooding back to him. he looked over at the section where there was once a couch, and he began to see a specific memory reply in his head. One of him and his parents watching TV. পাতিহাঁস and the others finally caught up to him. Jackson rushed over to Shock and was worried.
"Duji, are আপনি OK? Is he here?" he asked him.
He didn't quite hear him talking--he was toobusy thinking back. পাতিহাঁস came over to Jackson and said, "Wait...I think he's remembering..."
সেকেন্ড later, Shock went up the stairs and down the hall. Jackson, পাতিহাঁস and Whirlwind all followed. Jackson looked at Whirlwind and asked, "What exacty are আপনি doing here? Are আপনি still after that Spectre guy?"
"Yes. Spectre ব্যক্ত that him and Dokuro are planning to team up...." he added.
As they came up the hallway, পাতিহাঁস and a few other cops aimed their বন্দুক around the place.
"Shock? Are আপনি OK in here?" asked Drake, his voice echoing in the hall.
Shock was in his old room, looking around the place. He then saw another memeory reply in his mind as he looked at where his বিছানা use to be. Thinking of these memories brought tears to his eyes as he silenty cried. Little did he know: Dokuro was watching him from inside a closet. The door was open, so he quietly stepped out into the empty room. Dokuro grinned maliciously as he saw what Shock was doing.
"Awww....is the lil কুকুরছানা sad?" he asked him, clearly trying to taunt him.
He looked back and saw Dokuro standing there--he was angry.
"You lied to me, didn't you?" he asked Dokuro.
Dokuro rolled his eyes, though আপনি couldn't see it through his shades.
"Kid, we're way passed that now....so I'll just cut to the chase: I DID lie to you...." he announced.
Shock grew angrier and fired off some light bolts. Dokuro and jumped up and quickly flicked his wrists around, and started twisting Shock's bones.
"You....you ব্যক্ত I had no family! আপনি ব্যক্ত I was EVIL!" Shock screamed out.
While still holding Shock in his grip, he raised Shock's body in the air, saying, "Evil? Please....you were NEVER truely evil! I only made আপনি think it til I was done with you..."
Then he threw Shock across the room. Shock hit a nearby দেওয়াল face first. Shock groaned in pain. He stood back up as Jackson and the other cops entered the room. They aimed their gun toward him.
"Put your hands up! I don't know what আপনি wanted with this kid, but it's over..." পাতিহাঁস ব্যক্ত to him.
"Over? Far from it....wanna hear আরো of the truth, kid? আপনি DID have a family, but Malice killed them off 6 months ago," declared Dokuro.
When he heard that, he grey আরো angrier. And his teary eye's face was replaced with that of pure rage. Electricity circled around him. Jackson, পাতিহাঁস and Dokuro all backed away from him as this happened.
"Duji, I know you're probably in a of shock right now, but I want আপনি to know--" Jackson said, being cut off দ্বারা Drake.
"Jackson, I think it's best we get outta here...." he said.
Then he got so angry, that his electricity became bright red flames. Shock didn't notice this of course, but the others did. At that moment, he officially remembered who he was and that Dokuro had lied the whole.
"You...you're gonna pay for this! For ever tinking আপনি could USE me like this!" he shouted, flames bursting from around him.
He made a loud scream and as he did so, a streem of আগুন burst from and went straight through the ceiling, making a huge hole. Dokuro knew this may end badly for him, so he flew out the window in a hurry. But Shock wasn't gonna let him off that easy. With আগুন still around him, he flew after Dokuro and smashed right into the wall, making another huge hole. Jackson rushed over to see if he could find out where Shock had went to. He looked upwards at the sky and saw him giving Dokuro hell. Shock, while still angry, made a firy sphere around himself and flew straight for Dokuro. He was coming on pretty damn fast, and Dokuro barely dodged it. He would attack with his bone-weapons but knew it was useless at this point. As he flew circles around him, he also shot out আগুন balls at Dokuro. He tried his best to dodge the attacks, but didn't do much good. Then had got an idea: he backed away some, and then started moving the অস্থি in Shock's arms while saying, "You think আপনি have me, don't you? Think again...."
He then made Shock push the button on that watch that he had প্রদত্ত him a few hours ago. Afterwards he let go. Shock started to calm down some and gew confused. He heard beeping sounds from the watch and then saw a timer iluminate on the screen.
"What is this...? Why is it counting down?" he asked Dokuro.
"Considering it a birthday present form your master. Happy birthday, mutt!" shouted Dokuro, flying off.
He aw that the timer was counting down, and had 10 সেকেন্ড left. He tried getting the watch off, but it wouldn't budge. He grew terrified, and didn't know what else to do. So as a last resort, he flew--WAYY up high as high as he could before it finally went off. The force of the blast still hit the city regardless, and poor Duji was cought at the center. But is this it? Is this the end of his journy?

TO BE CONTINUED
posted by NoctusLynx
The আগুন blazed on as আরো freshly cut firewood was tossed into it with Menae's vectors.

“We’ll I guess I’m next,” Gatage said.

“Whoever ব্যক্ত আপনি were going next?” Menae argued.

“Would আপনি like to take the stand, Menae?” Gatage asked.

Menae thought of this for a moment, and ব্যক্ত “point taken,” making Gatage nod, and allowing him to continue.

“So, in a nutshell, I was raised to become the best there was at the art of shooting,” Gatage began.

“Shooting a pistol can be considered an art?” Sanae asked. Gatage simply gave her an annoyed glare, and continued.

“Anyways, I was...
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Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of আপনি are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give উপদেশ in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!

Chapter One

Mary Sueing is when আপনি bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.

N00b133!!!: I shoot আপনি then telport আপনি inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B আপনি JUST MADE UP AN WORD

See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no আপনি never.


Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we প্রদর্শনী ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do আপনি want that? No.

Chapter 2.

Never Mary sue.
That is all.
posted by TakTheFox
Yeah it took a while for me to think up something to whine about X{D, but here’s one. FIGHTING IN ROLEPLAYS. NO, this isn’t going to be me complaining about “VIOLENCE IS BAD! NERRRRRRRRR!” I mean… yeah Violence is BAD, but th- okay right, off topic, sorry.

Anyway, Fighting in Roleplays is usually… one of the most annoying things ever. If someone is fighting someone else in a roleplay, it is can be at times what I like to call “Stubborn-one-sided” where both side will act like no matter what, they are the ones in control, and the superior. Now I originally was going to say that...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Everyone ran to the room that Rose was in. See was at the far wall, staring. Thorn ran to her and hugged her," Rose! I'm so happy you're alright! I was so worried I-...Rose?" Rose was staring into the purple mirror, the mirror reflected nothing but flames. Thorn stepped back and looked at Flare," What's wrong with her? Why isn't she responding?!" "She's being controlled দ্বারা these stones called nightmare crystals. If আপনি stare into for even a second, আপনি go into a dreamlike state, where your nightmares seem real. আপনি could be stuck there for days, and it would only feel like seconds." Flare said...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Flare looked around for some way out, but everything looked locked tight. " Do আপনি see anything that could help us, Thorn?" Flare asked. Thorn shook his head and then noticed the rusty bars of their cage," these look like they're really really old, maybe we can break them?" Thorn grabbed one bar and shook it. The bar became loose, but was still stuck in place. "It's moving!" Flare yelled, then suddenly covering her mouth so Bard and Scar wouldn't hear. Bard had fallen asleep and so had Scar, and they still seemed to be snoring away. Flare helped Thorn try to সরানো the bar. It seemed to get more...
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posted by Rachel_Savaya
Follow My Dreams (Rachel's Theme)
by: Rachel Savaya

verse 1:

ive been hurt
ive been crushed
ive been told
im just crazy
but i will not listen to them
anymore

chorus:

cause i know
i know
i know who i am
and i know
i know
i know what my হৃদয় wants
and i will
i will
follow my dreams dont
care where they take me
ill follow my dreams
anywhere

verse 2:

ive been lied to
been shut down
i just cant
take this anymore
but now ive got বন্ধু to
help me through this
and i will hang on cause

Chorus:

cause i know
i know
i know who i am
and i know
i know
i know what my হৃদয় wants
and i will
i will
follow my dreams dont
care where they take...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Nat walked down the tunnel, hand against the দেওয়াল and flashlight on. She walked around until she came to an open room. Nat walked around gazing at how big the room was. She shone her flashlight around and then something caught her eye. The light was reflecting off of something. She walked towards the shining object. Then she stepped on something. She looked down and noticed some purple crystals. "What are these doing in these tunnels?" She looked up and saw a mountain of treasure. She stepped back in awe and tripped over something. She got up quickly and was face to face with eight giant eyes....
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Nat finished making some eggs and বেকন when Flare woke up. "Good Morning. Did আপনি sleep well?" Nat asked, getting her a plate. "I slept like a baby! How about you?" Flare answered, digging into her breakfast. "Not one of my best sleeps, but I'll pull through the day." Nat answered then yawned. She got herself a plate and sat দ্বারা Flare. "Did আপনি have any dreams? I had a strange one about going to the public pool and then ending up in the ocean and finding treasure. Very strange." Flare said. " Nothing interesting, I'm sure of that." Nat said, uneasily. Flare seemed to notice. " You're lying....
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Nat was walking to The Speed Demon, The restaurant she and her mother worked at. She was carrying many groceries for the খাবার they needed to prepare. She was about to open the restaurant when she heard someone calling her. She looked around, but no one was there. A thick fog was starting to come down the street. " Hello? Is someone there?" She called, but no answer. The fog was in front of her now, and she couldn't even see a foot in front of her face. She went for the door, but it was gone and she was touching a tree.
What the? I haven't moved an inch, how am I দ্বারা a tree? She went to put the...
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posted by mephiles97
The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 11



Kyle released a quiet groan as he slowly began waking up from the effects of the tranquil dart that he had been hit with. He struggled to open his eyes as his stamina very slowly began returning to him. He finally did manage to open his eyes, struggling to focus his blurry vision on his surroundings. He was sure that he had been captured দ্বারা the Dark Horses.

Finally managing to get his eyes to focus, Kyle slowly moved his head around to observe where he was. He was in a fairly large cell made of solid concrete, so they would most likely be very sturdy. Since he was...
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So the small city-like village of Crystal city was in a bind,with the greedy tyrant Bubba closing in to take all the folks prisoner,the people of Crystal city worked like clockwork to retrieve the gems from the caverns in order to pay off the bill.However all the gems were incinerated due to the heat surrounding the smoldering remains of MTL's pod,The villagers quickly gathered everything and brought it to Bubba,however it didn't meet the proper amount,Angered দ্বারা this,Bubba shouted "Cheapskates!I was generous enough to give আপনি vermin the শিরোনাম of this land and আপনি try to trick me out of it!?You...
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Part Two “Problematic Circumstances”

Talon slowly opened his eyes. He was weary and dizzy. “What… wh-where?” He slowly turned his head and pushed himself upward to get a better look at his surroundings. He was in a metal room… with a locked door… one light… and one bed… a cell? He was in prison?

“How did I get here?!” Talon jerked to his feet and yanked at the door handle; obviously it would not open, but why not try anyway?

“Wait a second…” Nick closed his eyes and concentrated on what happened before this. “There was the… fire… then I was taken দ্বারা the cops!...
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Heh,I bet আপনি didn't think I was going to write this,huh.XD

Okay...time for the shit storm of shit storms.The original MTL series...oh dear lord,where to begin?Well the creation of my original অনুরাগী character was no easy feat,Back when I created my FC I never understood the concept of Gary-stus and Mary-Sues(Until mephs pointed out sometime later),but where to begin...I suppose let's get the easy part of this প্রবন্ধ out of the way,My regrets and mistakes with the original series.First regret...cliche back story.Again,long before I knew anything about cliches I decide to give MTL a back-story...
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Note: If your character is already in a relationship, আপনি can still answer, but pretend they aren’t. And do NOT just describe their current boyfriend/girlfriend for all the বিবরণ parts unless they actually have the wanted traits.

1.    Describe your character in five words.
2.    Is your character looking for love?
3.    Would they rather stay single?
4.    What is the name of the first male/female that your character knows that comes to mind? (THE TRUTH)
5.    Does your character want an...
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posted by RawrMonster123
One question: Why do আপনি do it?

Well your answer is probably "I can't draw!" আপনি know why আপনি can't draw? Because আপনি never picked up a pooping piece of paper and pencil and actually tried to! So now, kids, I'm gonna teach আপনি a little lesson about art:

RECOLORING AND STEALING ART AREN'T COOL! IT'S FOR NONCREATIVE PEOPLE!

You know, good drawers weren't born as good drawers. If আপনি believe that, you're sadly mistaken. আপনি know how they became good drawers? দ্বারা actually drawing!

Also, আপনি can get arrested when আপনি steal people's art. Really.

Now, just grab a paper, grab a pencil, get your pencil...
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Shadey: Ok I got bored... so I start now.
Thorn: But আপনি ব্যক্ত পরবর্তি Saturday!
Shadey: Yeah... I know but I'm bored so... shut it! Now begin

(Rooftops 11:47 p.m.)
"The night is wonderful... sigh... why does it have to end? Why does everything have a story?" A grey hedgehog thinks to herself. "Of course why is it my problem? I'm Shadey Grey! The last dark user... nothing is darker than me!" Shadey chuckles to herself. She jumps off the roof and wanders through the city. She messes with her black limiter rings and smiles and walks home.

(Shadey's mansion 12:26 a.m.)
Shadey takes off her black jacket...
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Picture this,
You just found this new roleplay called (for lack of imagination) “Roleplay of love, brought to আপনি দ্বারা Hormones”. And because romance roleplays are so জনপ্রিয় (HORMONES!) আপনি try it out. So your character falls in প্রণয় অথবা whatever with another character. At the end they are either…
A.    A couple
Or B. an item.
So now you’re all like “Cool. Now my character has a love-interest.” So every time আপনি rp with those two characters in mind, you’re lead on to think that your character is the love-interest, only to find out that when আপনি make a সরানো like proposing,...
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posted by TakTheFox
Who is Relm?

Relm, as I’ve stated, is a banshee. Not just any banshee though. Relm is a DARICHA Banshee. Daricha stands for “Moonlight” অথবা “Darkness”. So basically Relm is a DARK Banshee.

Relm comes from a future-mobius-timeline AFTER the Identity Wars, and first appears in Mobius Academy: Evolution. Before that she came from three Mobiuses. Mobocan, Nicous (the future Identity-world), and Ryft’s Mobius. She lived there for about ten years before coming to Mobius Academy #2, seeing how she heard so much about its predecessor.

Personality-wise, in a word, Relm is… graceful. Pardon...
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posted by MephilesTheDark
This, like my '100 things I hate about this club' is completely opinionated and such. This time, flames will be used to roast the flamers own flesh. (Not that I expect much of that, because this is LUL OPTOMISTICCCC HURRDEDURR.)

1. This won't get HALF the awesome response I got for it's brother article.
2. So many roleplays to choose from.
3. There are some awesome character designs.
4. The 'community' feel.
5. Religion is usually unimportant.
6. Lack of republicans. (Or at least obnoxious ones.)
7. The fact that the only reason I even know what a republican is is because someone from here taught...
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posted by ripperoo1
CHAPTER 1
Journal Writing


"October VI, MMXI," I scribbled in a small book that I used as a journal. I thought and thought about what to write next. Nothing happens in my life, really. My typical দিন is composed of playing chess, reading, and caring for my father who is too old to do simple things. Many would say that the way I live is different from normal, modern life. I live in a castle. My father is the king. Therefore, I'm the prince. I do everything for my father, so many people just look at me as the king's representative. I wish that something happened to my life, something interesting....
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